Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 15, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-16512 Reevaluating the true diagnostic accuracy of dipstick tests to diagnose urinary tract infection using Bayesian latent class analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Deepanjali, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I found the presented study very interesting. However, with its current form, I am afraid that it won't receive favorable review from Bayesian experts. In particular, I found the Method section "Bayesian latent class analysis" did not sufficiently describe how exactly the Bayesian method was constructed. For example, what's exactly the likelihood function? what's the posterior model? The only thing mentioned is prior for all parameters "We used the simplified interface which assumes a non155 informative prior distribution for all parameters (beta distribution (0.5,0.5)), except that 156 specificity was set between 0.4 and 1.0 to prevent estimating test accuracy the other way 157 around [18]." But without clearly describing the model, we won't even know what "parameters" you are referring to. If I send it out for expert reviews, I worry that I will be wasting time on the authors. Therefore, I suggest that the authors add sufficient details in the method section. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 27 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PONE-D-20-16512R1 Reevaluating the true diagnostic accuracy of dipstick tests to diagnose urinary tract infection using Bayesian latent class analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Deepanjali, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I think that this is an interesting study, but many concerns were raised by three reviewers. Unless those concerns were fully addressed, I won't be able to recommend the acceptance of this manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 27 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Qunfeng Dong, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Abstract 1.Conclusion – What is the clinical implication of your findings?” 2.Line 41- 43 : Bayesian LCMs indicate a clinically important improvement in the true diagnostic accuracy of 42 urine dipstick testing for LE and nitrite” – Can you be little more specific and relevant to the clinicians. Please try to reframe conclusion Introduction 1.Please add references to substantiate your statement in line 49. 2.Please add reference for line no. 54 3.Line 61- Is it an assumption? These statements could be valid if the authors add reference to justify this statement. Methodology 1.Could you please provide reference for your diagnostic criteria beginning from line 112. 2.Line. 134. Please cite the source here and add the link as a reference. Please follow the same for line no. 152 & 174 3.Line 158 – Beta distribution was considered as 0.5. Is there any reference to justify this? Is this arbitrary? Discussion 1.Most of the clinicians do rely on urine culture for clinical management. How do your findings help the clinicians? Can we still rely on urine culture? How can your findings be applied in clinical practice? These points need to be discussed. 2.Is there any previous studies on validity of urine culture in the setting where authors are practicing? If so, it has to be discussed 3.Overall, authors have only compared the previously done research on validity. It lacks discussion on primary objectives and some of the secondary findings emerging out of this study. 4.Authors should also discuss practical implication of these findings. If not, mere increase in diagnostic accuracy by a different statistical analysis will have no effect on clinical practice. 5.What are the limitations of the study? 6.Do you think your findings may vary significantly if these patients were from a primary care setting where dipstick test is often used. 7.Conclusion in the article is missing. Reviewer #2: An interesting study to use Bayesian to improve the diagnosis. I like the general direction. But I am troubled by the lack of explanation of the Bayesian modeling. The authors only provided some raw code, presumably produced automatically by the web-based application (http://mice.tropmedres.ac/home.aspx). But that’s not sufficient at all. You can’t expect the audience to read your code and decide whether your method works. This is similar to the situation in which you want to publish a new computer science algorithm without providing the pseudocode or detailed logic (instead, you just provided the source code). I have a sense that the authors may be relatively new to the Bayesian statistics and I think that they did a good job in learning that particular web-based application as novice users to try out some Bayesian solution. However, without demonstrating a true understanding of the models, the authors essentially treated that web product as a “blackbox”. The essence of Bayesian statistics is about openness, clearly justifying how the models were built (e.g., why is the chosen likelihood sensible? Why is the prior sensible?) and explain all the notations. I think that this manuscript needs substantial revision to reach a level of publication. Reviewer #3: This article is investigating the use of LCA model to re-estimate the urine dipstick (LE and nitrite) accuracy for diagnosis of UTI. The article also highlights a very important problem in the diagnosis of UTI which is the imperfect gold standard of urine culture. The article provides evidence that LE and nitrite might have higher accuracy than it was previously thought using classical gold standard comparison method. This would increase the confidence in the LE and nitrite as a diagnostic tool for UTI. In this study the LE and nitrite specificity using classical classification is very low. This could understandably occur due to the nature of the study cohort and the absence of a control group. However, the study employed data of a real-life scenario where the test is used to discriminate between presence and absence of UTI in individuals with symptoms. To me the manuscript will benefit from the following clarifications: 1. How the authors could be sure that the LCMs are reflecting the true accuracy compared to the classical accuracy measures? in other words: how would they know that the LCM is not overestimating the accuracy measurements? Abstract: 2. For the reader to understand the general concept of the method used, it should be mentioned that the UTI was defined as definite, probable and possible. Introduction: 3. Lines 63-64 and lines 67-68: “All these factors contribute to urine culture being less sensitive for diagnosing UTI” is not accurate scientifically. Actually, urine culture is not a solid gold standard, but we cannot describe it as sensitive or not unless we compare it to another and more solid gold standard which does not exist yet. It is understandable that the authors used LCM later in the manuscript to investigate this, but at this stage of the manuscript urine culture should not have been judged as not sensitive. 4. Lines 68 -69: To me, the sensitivity and the specificity could be falsely lower or higher if an imperfect gold standard is used. 5. It is not clear why Bayesian LCMs was used to re-evaluate the accuracy of the dipstick. What are the extra characteristics of the Bayesian LCMs that would overcome the problem of the imperfect gold standard of UTI definition based on the urine culture? 6. Why 2 different Bayesian LCMs were used? Methods: 7. Lines 95 – 96: “For the LE test, any degree of colour change above ‘trace’ was taken as positive; for urine nitrite, any degree of uniform pink colour was taken as positive.” It would be good to readers to know why the positivity as to be above ‘trace’ for LE and any change of colour for nitrite”. 8. Line 101 and 103: Why anaerobic incubation was not considered? Why was the cut of significant culture growth defined as 104 CFU/ml? 9. Line 106: Urine microscopy examination was done within 24 hours, what was the range of time to analysis? as prolonged time before analysis could lead to lysis of WBCs and/or multiplication of bacteria and consequently the definition of UTI based on presence of pyuria. 10. Line 114: It would be good to readers to know what was the symptoms and signs pertaining UTI that has been considered by the study team? 11. Line 124: SD and IQR should be stated as full the first time mentioned 12. Lines 117-118: not clear why would a symptomatic patient with positive culture should classify as probable UTI? Is the absence of pyuria so significant for the classification to shift from definite to probable? If yes, this needs to be supported by evidence. Would the authors consider a sensitivity analysis in which classify symptomatic patient with positive culture as definite UTI? 13. Lines 157- 165: what was the benefit of using urine culture in the first LCA if only LE and nitrite were evaluated in the second LCM? Also, LE and nitrites were only compared between the two models? Results: 14. Results within tables need to be consistently presented. It is notable that percentages are not given throughout Table 1. 15. It would be beneficial for readers and for future research if data for urine culture based on the first LCM plotted in Figure 2 as well. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Reevaluating the true diagnostic accuracy of dipstick tests to diagnose urinary tract infection using Bayesian latent class analysis PONE-D-20-16512R2 Dear Dr. Deepanjali, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Qunfeng Dong, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Authors have satisfactorily responded to all the comments. Thank your taking efforts to improve the quality of the paper. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Leeberk Raja Inbaraj Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-16512R2 Reevaluating the true diagnostic accuracy of dipstick tests to diagnose urinary tract infection using Bayesian latent class analysis Dear Dr. Deepanjali: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Qunfeng Dong Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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