Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 7, 2020 |
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PONE-D-19-30480 The Impact of Community Based Continuous Training Project on Improving Couples’ Knowledge on Birth Preparedness and Complication Readiness in Rural Setting Tanzania; A Controlled Quasi-Experimental Study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Moshi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 10 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 4. Please include a caption for figure 4 (Figure 3 caption included 2x). 5. We note you have included a table to which you do not refer in the text of your manuscript. Please ensure that you refer to Table 2 in your text; if accepted, production will need this reference to link the reader to the Table. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Introduction: Line 53 and 54: should be clear and specific where these deaths occurred Study design: Well done Setting: Well done Sampling technique: Line 168: correct the name from Sumawanga to Sumbawanga Line 171: what was the interval used in the systematic sampling in the selection of the households? Line 172: state the inclusion criteria for the study population Line 173: who was responsible for the assessment of signs and symptoms of the pregnancy in each household visited? This needs to be clarified and the signs and the symptoms assessed as well. Line 185: check the value of the power at 90% is not 0.84, please confirm and correct. Line 203: the couples were only visited for two days irrespective of the gestation age, how will this intervention have impact for a couple visited at early stages of gestation age? Line 204: you skipped what happened in step four and went to fifth step, please correct Data collection procedure Line 210: was there any consenting process conducted to the participants? This needs to be stated before the start of data collection. Was the data collected using paper questionnaire or electronically? The author should clarify this. Were there also participants below age 18? Data Processing and analysis the results were well described, how were the assumptions of linear regression verified. the authors also needs to explain whether any statistical method was used to select variables for the multivariable analysis Results: Table 1: what was the lower age limit of the participants that were interviewed? Table 1: Please indicate the exactly P-values whether significant of or not instead of leaving them blank and showing significant one with asterisk. Indicate the number of participants in each of the groups, and the n (%) at the top of each column to show what the values in the table mean Table 2: add the p-values, show the lower limit of the gestation age Table 3: add the exact p-values to the table Discussion: Well explained Were there any strength and limitation for this study? This needs to be explained. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review the manuscript entitled, "The Impact of Community Based Continuous Training Project on Improving Couples' Knowledge on Birth Preparedness and Complication Readiness in Rural Setting Tanzania: A controlled quasi-experimental study." The authors present the effect of the CBCT training on knowledge and complication readiness in rural Tanzania. Based on data presented, there appears to be improvement on knowledge scores for pregnant women and their male partners. The paper and intervention are interesting; however, there are some key questions that need to be addressed. MAJOR 1. The authors published a protocol paper with the following citation: "Moshi FV, Kibusi SM, Fabian F. The Effectiveness of Community-Based Continuous Training on Promoting Positive Behaviors towards Birth Preparedness, Male Involvement, and Maternal Services Utilization among Expecting Couples in Rukwa, Tanzania: A Theory of Planned Behavior Quasi-Experimental Study. J Environ Public Health. 2018;2018:1293760. Published 2018 Sep 27. doi:10.1155/2018/1293760" However, the authors do not reference the protocol paper in this manuscript. It is unclear if these are full related studies. If the paper previously published, it would be helpful to reference the methods and then reduce the detail in the introduction and methods sections. For example, the sample size calculation and equations could be removed and referenced. 2. Please clarify how couples were randomized to receive the intervention or not; or were villages randomized to the intervention? It is clear from the description how the districts and villages were selected. 3. Please add details in the Methods about the timing of data collection with respect to the pre-test assessment and post-test assessment. These details are included in the discussion (Lines 403-405). Can the authors discuss potential recall bias or influence of the birth experience and outcomes on the post-test results? 4. Given that the authors interviewed the same couples pre and post intervention, it seems a difference-in-differences analysis would be appropriate. Can the authors discuss why they have not used this approach? Further it would streamline the Tables 3-7. Figures 3 and 4 also present similar information to Tables 3-7; please consider putting one or the other in the supplementary information. MINOR: 1. In the abstract, please consider adding the baseline knowledge score so readers can understand more clearly the impact of the intervention. 2. In line 96, there is a reference "(martin)" that needs a full citation. Please update. 3. In lines 104 to 121, the authors present several programs for improving pregnant women's outcomes. This contrast and comparison presented may be more useful in the Discussion section to set the results from this research in context. 4. In lines 196-197, please provide clarification as how the doubling of the control arm increases comparability. 5. Please provide more clarity to the actual intervention that was applied; lines 198-207 are more about the measurement of the intervention, but not about the intervention for the couple. This information would be helpful to the readers. 6. Table 4: Please clarify if the mean (SD) knowledge is a score or mean number of danger signs assessed. Further, is there a range associated with each assessment? Further, please limit to 2 significant digits for the mean and SD of scores. 7. Figures 3 and 4 presentation as line charts make the reader compare scores across domain as opposed to pre/post scores. Consider a bar chart for pre/post scores next to each other. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: James Orwa Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-19-30480R1 The Impact of Community Based Continuous Training Project on Improving Couples’ Knowledge on Birth Preparedness and Complication Readiness in Rural Setting Tanzania; A Controlled Quasi-Experimental Study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Moshi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please find below some minor comments raised by Reviewer 1. We ask you to incorporate these suggestions, before we can accept the manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 01 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Florian Fischer Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Most of the previous comments are addressed, just a few clarity needed The author mentioned that the first household was selected using a random sampling approach,they selected the subsequent households using systematic sampling but no interval stated. this still needs clarity. The author have removed the sample size calculation but cited the published propotocol, it would have been informative if a brief on this is given. verbal consent was done for women below 18 years, was there a justification why there was no assent? in some cases this group have been treated as mature minors and could provide their own consent. is there a justification why this is no the case in this population?? Reviewer #2: Thank you for addressing the comments and revising the manuscript. I also appreciate that the files have been added in supplemental information. Please note that during the proofing process, please conduct a thorough review, there are some errors that won't be caught by spell checker (i.e. line 240, Match for March, etc) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: James Orwa Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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The Impact of Community Based Continuous Training Project on Improving Couples’ Knowledge on Birth Preparedness and Complication Readiness in Rural Setting Tanzania; A Controlled Quasi-Experimental Study PONE-D-19-30480R2 Dear Dr. Moshi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Florian Fischer Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-19-30480R2 The Impact of Community Based Continuous Training Project on Improving Couples’ Knowledge on Birth Preparedness and Complication Readiness in Rural Setting Tanzania; A Controlled Quasi-Experimental Study Dear Dr. Moshi: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Florian Fischer Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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