Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 15, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-21952 Using Fitbit Data to Examine Factors that Affect Daily Activity Levels of College Students PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Two experts have reviewed the manuscript. While both reviewers were generally supportive of the manuscript, they both have concerns regarding the novelty of the report. Currently the Discussion section is mostly repetition of the retuls. Therefore, I strongly encourage the authors to consider the following points in addition to reviewers' comments:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review for PONE-D-20-21952 Using Fitbit Data to Examine Factors that Affect Daily Activity Levels of College Students In this manuscript, authors aim to study different factors affecting daily physical activity with the hypothesis that the main predictor is the peer influence. The authors have used a latent growth-curve models to investigate trends in data. The topic of study is interesting and the authors have collected a large data set over the span of 637 days from 619 participants for a total of 269,057 days. This indicates not all subjects participated for the total duration of study. There are essential pieces of information that are missing from the manuscript such as: The authors should specify the power of their study, and discuss the attrition, the range and the average number of days a subject participated in this study. If the total number of days of participation is not the same for all subjects, please discuss the bias that might have been introduced as a result and if any steps were taken to minimize this resulted bias. Authors should further state the exact type(s) of Fitbit device(s) being used, how the data was extracted from Fitbit device (did they use third party apps for extracting data, …). What were the inclusion and exclusion criteria? What were the underlying health factors, age range, … “International student” is not a race. Authors should just specify the racial percentages as a whole independent of the subject being an international student or not. If authors would like to see the possible effect of being an international student on physical activity, then the category would be international vs American or something to that effect. The authors should also state how the subject wore the Fitbit device, dominant vs nondominant hand, continuously between charging or only during daytime, … If more than one type of Fitbit devices were used, how similar was the measurement method of the extracted parameters between different devices. In other words, could the variation in Fitbit device have any effect on the measurement outcome and finding of this paper. My understanding is that the Fitbit algorithm is ever evolving and as such the authors should discuss how the possible update in Fitbit firmware during the course of the study, if any, could have affected the analysis. How was “Notre Dame friends” defined? It is not clear from the manuscript how Notre Dame friends’ average daily PA was measured. Were subjects recruited from friend groups? It would be helpful to the readers, if possible, to include the list of psychometric items (The Big Five Inventory) in the paper or as a supplemental material. How were a standardized factor score for each item calculated? Please specify how sleep minutes was determined. Another element that is missing in this study is consideration of confounding factors. These factors could possibly include a shared interest (between the participants and their “Notre Dame friends”) or habits such as drug use or drinking, or their interest in nature hikes which all have the potential to play a role in participants and their “Notre Dame friends” level of physical activities. In other word, is the “Notre Dame friends” influence on the participants due to a true influence from the friends or is it due to similarity in their interests/behaviors such as interest in outdoorsy or night-time activities with then their influence on their level of physical activity. For example, could the participants and their “Notre Dame friends” spent the day studying together and have a less active day? In short please discuss the possibility of confounding factors. Please include a brief description of Fitbit derived parameters. Authors have analyzed data assuming a linear trend and also using a quadratic term. Based on what were these trends selected? Could a piecewise linear trend have been a suitable choice? Please provide a visualization of data. Authors have used the term time constant for one of the terms in equations 2&3. Time constant has a specific meaning and carries a unit of 1/unit of time. Are γ01 and γ11 in the unit of time? The terminology is not clear. In Table 3, the number of cases and number of individuals are different for each of the four columns (daily activity, steps, active minutes, and activity calories) and much smaller than the totals from values provided in Tables 1&2. Please provide an explanation. Minor comments: In Abstract the authors probably meant to say under-studied and not understudied. Authors have used the term with-subject. Did they mean to say within-subject? Reviewer #2: Review for: “Using Fitbit Data to Examine Factors that Affect Daily Activity Levels of College Students” Cheng Wang, Omar Lizardo, David S. Hachen In this paper, the authors present an observational analysis on the NetHealth project dataset to identify the effect of different factors on physical activity of college students. The authors use latent growth-curve model for estimation purposes. They show that physical activity is driven by peer effects and more general the students’ network. They also explore some heterogeneous effects with respect to the gender. Despite the limitations of the current study in terms of generalization, the lack of novelty, and the identification of causality, the paper is well written, the study technically sounds, and the topic is interesting in the areas of social science, public health and human behavior. For these reasons, I think that the paper could be accepted for publication. I have some minor remarks: - These latent growth models are linear in nature. And as the authors discuss in the manuscript, they assume a linear relationship between PA and temperature. Someone would argue that this is quite non-linear relationship. When the temperature is very high the PA could drop. - I was expecting some discussion with respect to the endogeneity of the problem. - It was not clear in the manuscript what is exactly the novel contribution here. Please extent on that. Also, it is not clear how this dataset was used otherwise from other scientists. - I believe that Fig 1 is difficult to be followed by a non-expert of SEM. Given that PLoS ONE is an interdisciplinary journal, I was expecting more details/simplification. - It would be more impactful (= more citations) if the authors release the replication code in github or somewhere similar (optional and in accordance to PLoS ONE recommendations/policy). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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PONE-D-20-21952R1 Using Fitbit Data to Examine Factors that Affect Daily Activity Levels of College Students PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please pay attention the few points mentioned by the reviewers. In particular please expand on reviewer two's comment on the novelty of the research. I expect a much more extended explanation of what the novel contribution of the study is. Reviewer one also mentioned a few important points. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 12 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Amir-Homayoun Javadi, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed many issues that were brought up in the first round of reviews, but there are some remaining concerns that need to be addressed. 1. Please include the average and range (max and min) for the number of days of data included in the model for subjects participating in this study. This should be average, min and max number of days for participants after exclusion of days that did not meet the 80% threshold. 2. In response to reviewers portion of the document, the authors indicate: “… based on their gender and racial composition, the NetHealth project team randomly selected 730 students … “ It is not clear how this selection took place and what steps were taken to prevent sampling bias. But more importantly I do not understand why this information is not included in the body of the manuscript. What were reasons/criteria chosen to select that 730 out of 2007 freshmen enrolled that year? Did they aim for a specific percent of let's say Asian students? Did they aim for a specific percent of male vs female? Please include this information in the body of the manuscript. 3. In response to reviewers portion of the document, the authors state that there was no exclusion criteria but at the same time they indicate that students identifying themselves to be in poor health or having disabilities were excluded from the model. These exclusion criteria should be included in the body of the manuscript. 4. It would be appropriate to include in the body of the manuscript the age range of the subjects or their average age and its standard deviation. 5. Regarding considering international student as a classification under racial background/ethnicity, I do understand the limitation the authors had to work by; regardless, please find some other form of classification that could apply. Reviewer #2: Review second round for PONE-D-20-21952 “Using Fitbit Data to Examine Factors that Affect Daily Activity Levels of College Students” Cheng Wang, Omar Lizardo, David S. Hachen In this paper, the authors present an observational analysis on the NetHealth project dataset to identify the effect of different factors on physical activity of college students. The authors use latent growth-curve model for estimation purposes. They show that physical activity is driven by peer effects and more general the students’ network. They also explore some heterogeneous effects with respect to the gender. Despite some limitations of the current study the paper is well written, the study technically sounds, and the topic is interesting in the areas of social science and public health. In addition, the manuscript has improved substantially taking into account the comments from the editor and the two referees. For those reasons, I think that the paper can be accepted for publication. I have one final remarks: In my question about novelty and how this study can be differentiated from previous knowledge on the topic, the authors responded by citing a 2005 review paper. It sounds like an old reference to base the novelty of a 2020 contribution. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Using Fitbit Data to Examine Factors that Affect Daily Activity Levels of College Students PONE-D-20-21952R2 Dear Dr. Wang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Amir-Homayoun Javadi, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-21952R2 Using Fitbit Data to Examine Factors that Affect Daily Activity Levels of College Students Dear Dr. Wang: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Amir-Homayoun Javadi Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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