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PONE-D-20-16580 Galectin-1 and platelet factor 4 (CXCL4) induce complementary platelet responses. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Koenen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Specifically, please compare platelet responses to galectin-1 in platelet rich plasma (PRP) and whole blood. A common platelet agonist should be added as positive control and reference. Please address experimentally, or at least discuss, potential discrepancies in the release of different secretory proteins (refers to P-selectin). Please discuss in more depth potential translational aspects of this study, including plasma levels. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 13 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows: [Netherlands Foundation for Scientific Research (ZonMW VIDI 016.126.358), the Landsteiner Foundation for Blood Transfusion Research (LSBR Nr. 1638) awarded to R.R.K. www.zonmw.nl, www.lsbr.nl The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.] [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting experimental study providing a further insight into the molecular mode of action of galectin-1 and CXCL4 in platelet activation aiming the questions whether they act in synergy or in a complementary manner. The authors apply a sufficient spectrum of experimental approaches to follow this concept and provide a convincing introdution for the readers into that topic. Although the study is well performed and data presentation and interpretation is mainly clear, some minor concerns remain to be addressed: Concerning the experimental strategy: - The authors show that gal-1 induced the release of CXCL4. Although the amounts of CXCL4 released (Figure 1) appear to be below the activity level shown in Figure 3, an isolated consideration of gal-1 and CXCL4 activities could be achieved by blocking released CXCL4 using a decoy approach. Have the authors tried that? In light of the high concentrations of CXCL4 mentioned (line 36-37) that could be released, this would be a valuable appraoch, that, if not performed, at least could be mentioned in the discussion. - Why didn't you check other, easy to perform platelet activation readouts, such as alpha granule release (ATP), to further differentiate the activities of the two components? Have you tried this? Concerning the experimental details: - The integrin activation studies (Figure 2A, 3A) have been performed by binding the PAC-1 antibody, but data are given in 2E and 3E as expression in %. How is this calculated and what is 100% control? - Why do the authors stop in Fig. 3D the aggregation curve just in the on-set of aggregation? Why not taking a later time point than 15 min for comparing the aggregation outcome? - Figure 4E, the individual data display a strong deviation and it appears questionable to derive a statistics from this data set. How do these data correspond with the curve in Figure 4D, is this a representative one? -When blocking the GPIIbIIIa to check a potential receptor function for gal-1, have the autors tried eptifibatide for that, which appears more promising in light of the greater expansion . - please add statistics in the legend of Figure 6 Other minor points to be addressed: - GPIb, could that be a probable receptor for gal-.1 considering the high glycosylation of GPIb, has this been postulated in literature and is this worth to considerer as option to be mentioned in discussion - line 35; 2 % of mass; mass of platelets or mass of granule content? - Mat Meth section, the authors inconsistently mentioned the sources, company, partly the location and country, please make it more consistent - minor misprints line 13, 280, Reviewer #2: In this study Dickhout et al. investigate synergistic effects of galectin-1 and CXCL4 on platelet activation and aggregation using an in vitro approach. The authors found that exogenously added galectin-1 and CXCL4 exerted additive effects on platelet aggregation with galectin-1 leading to integrin activation and CXCL4 mediating P-Selectin surface expression. Desialysation by neuraminidase lowered thresholds for galactin-1- and CXCL4-mediated effects and additionally induced a pro-coagulatory platelet phenotype. Further, neuraminidase treatment abolished CXCL4-induced pro-aggregatory effects, while CXCL4 prevented increased galectin-1 binding induced by neuraminidase. This is a small in vitro study, experiments are straightforwardly designed and technically mostly well performed. The hypothesis is interesting in principle as galectins and CXCL4 both are interesting players in thrombo-inflammation. However, due to the in vitro-only design and exclusively exogenously added galectin and CXCL4, pathophysiological relevance of the findings remains somewhat speculative. Despite the lack of a straightforward translational aspect, for people in the field this study would still add something to the current state of knowledge. Accordingly, I would support publication in this journal after a major revision of the article, if the authors adequately address my comments/questions listed below. Major comments/questions: 1. The authors should discuss more concretely for what pathophysiological conditions their findings might be relevant. Could galectin-1 possibly trigger/propagate heparin-induced-thrombocytopenia (HIT) where CXCL4 plays a key pathophysiological role? 2. Does galectin-1 induce similar platelet responses in platelet rich plasma (PRP) and whole blood? 3. Can concentrations of gal-1 that induced platelet activation in vitro be reached in human blood under some circumstances? 4. In the discussion interaction of gal-3 with GPVI on platelets is mentioned. Could a similar mechanism be responsible for galectin-1 mediated effects? Authors should check how blocking of GPVI or co-stimulation with GPVI-ligands (collagen or CRP) affect galectin-1 mediated platelet activation and aggregation. 5. Galectin-1 induced CXCL4 release and surface expression, however (according to results shown in figure 2) this was not able to induce the effects exerted by exogenously added CXCL4. Does endogenous CXCL4 play a role for galectin-1 mediated effects? Given the fact, that platelet-derived CXCL4 would not be sufficient for the observed additive effects with galectin-1, what would be the main source of such concentrations of exogenous CXCL4 in vivo? 6. In figure 2 and 3 a positive control (e.g. a classical platelet activator) should be included for each experiment. This is particularly important for P-Selectin in figure 2, as not only conflicting results to previously reported data have been observed, but results stay also in some conflict with the observations that galectin-1 induced CXCL4-release which is also supposed to be stored in alpha granules. The authors might consider to validate the results using a second P-Selectin antibody. 7. To investigate gal-1 binding to platelet integrin-receptor after neuraminidase treatment authors should make additional experiments using antibody-based integrin-inhibitors (e.g. Abciximab) rather than only small molecule inhibitor Tirofiban. 8. Authors should discuss in more detail why neuraminidase abolishes CXCL4-induced platelet aggregation but on the other side lowered threshold for P-Selectin expression. Minor comments: 1. In figure 1 one could assume some co-localization of galectin-1 and CXCL4, however the cross-section used for intensity profile does not seem representative for the figure. Increased image quality would strengthen the results, additionally for the PF4-antibody a respective isotype control image should be demonstrated to show antibody specificity. 2. The experimental design in figure 4 is not appropriate to investigate influence of CXCL4 on galectin-1-induced integrin activation. Further effects of increasing concentrations of CXCL4 cannot be excluded as 3 µM of galectin-1 already showed almost maximal activation. Experiment should be repeated using a lower dose of galectin-1 or the conclusion and interpretation must be revised. 3. Result section related to figure 4 (page 8, line 150-160) is confusing and somewhat contradictory. 4. It is not always clear whether galectin-1, CXCL4 and neuraminidase were added simultaneously or which treatment was first. 5. Y-axis in graphs showing PAC-1 expression should be labeled “activated integrin expression”. ********** 6. 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Galectin-1 and platelet factor 4 (CXCL4) induce complementary platelet responses. PONE-D-20-16580R1 Dear Dr. Koenen, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. During this process, please also address the two remaining points raised by reviewer 2. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have significantly improved the paper and have well addressed the issues of concerns and answered the open questions partly by performing new experiment, so that I recommend strongly acceptance in the present form. Reviewer #2: I acknowledge that the authors put considerable effort to answer and discuss the reviewers’ questions, and therefore also performed some interesting additional experiments such as SPR (to investigate a possible influence on HIT). The additional results and technical controls support and endorse some of the data, however they do not increase evidence for a possible and conclusive role of the findings in an in vivo situation. Further, (even after extensive discussion by the authors) the findings about “interaction” of CXCL4 with Neuraminidase/Neuraminidase-desialylated platelets remain somewhat elusive/confusing. Yet, and despite the lack of an obvious translational relevance, after this careful and honest revision the study considerably improved, and the data may build the groundwork for further studies investigating the role of gal-1/CXCL4-interaction in disease models of thrombo-inflammation (for this genetic animal models probably will be required). I have 2 more comments that should be addressed: 1. New data now presented in fig. S1 suggest that platelet-derived/released CXCL4 induced by gal-1 does NOT contribute to (auto-/paracrine) platelet activation as compared to exogenously added CXCL4 (which induces robust P-Selectin expression, see fig. 3). Thus, the conclusion made by the authors “… activation of platelets by gal-1 led to an increased release of CXCL4, which not only co-localized with gal-1 on the platelet surface, but was also able to activate platelets by itself.” (revised manuscript line 313-315) is not supported by this data and must be revised. 2. In vivo platelets are considered to be the main source of CXCL4. Given that according to the newly provided data in fig. S1 platelet-derived CXCL4 does NOT contribute to activating effects of CXCL4, the authors should discuss the alternative source of CXCL4 (rather than platelets) in vivo (see my comment 5 of the first review). Otherwise the setting chosen by the authors (i.e. adding exogenously rather high doses of CXCL4 in vitro) seems very artificial and constitutes a major limitation for translational interpretation of the findings. Therefore, I suggest to add this information in the title and change it accordingly to: “Galectin-1 and platelet factor 4 (CXCL4) induce complementary platelet responses IN VITRO” ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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