Peer Review History
Original SubmissionApril 30, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-12693 Emergency department visits among patients transported by law enforcement officers PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rosen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 04 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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In line with the substantive and framing insights offered by the Reviewers, the authors would be well-served in situating this manuscript within the broader discourse about the role of law enforcement in responding to mental health and other health crises. Journal requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting analysis that sets out to describe frequency and patterns of law enforcement transport to emergency departments in North Carolina. This is a very worthwhile analysis to undertake, not only for its own relevance to contemporary issues of public health and public safety but for the research this study indicates clearly needs to be undertaken in order to optimize health care delivery and the treatment of individuals with severe mental health concerns and/or who are subject to involuntary commitment in the state. My biggest complaint about this submission is that it doesn't quite provide enough information. I am of the strong opinion that more data than the authors provide - and which the authors certainly possess - should be included. I have elaborated these data, which should be included in the manuscript, immediately below: 1) The authors note in the footnote below figure 1 that IVC calls and mental health calls are not exclusive. First, this observation absolutely must be made in the main body of the text, not only in the footnote of a figure. Second, the authors should indicate the degree to which these two types of cases do and do not overlap. I understand why they drew up the figure the way they did. This makes sense and I have no problem with it. But in the body of the text, the reader should be informed of the # and % of MH calls that were not IVC calls, the # and % of IVC calls that were not MH calls, and the number of calls that were BOTH. Understanding the extent and shape of this overlap is essential for interpreting the data presented in this manuscript. 2) Nowhere in the estimations of the prevalence of law enforcement transport do the authors indicate what percentage of all emergency personnel transports are conducted by law enforcement. Ostensibly, the denominator necessary for making this comparison (total number of EMS transports, most likely) are available in the NC DETECT dataset. It is hard to know how to interpret the prevalence rates of LE transport in urban and rural areas without also having an understanding of how often LE are transporting when EMS might have otherwise been called upon to make the transport themselves, had they been available. These numbers should be calculated and presented in the text. 3) The authors present the reader with the overall gender and age breakdown of individuals transported by LE for any reason on the bottom of Pg 7. But I am more interested to know what the demographic characteristics are of individuals transported for specific concerns. I believe it is of particular interest to public health and law enforcement researchers to know (a) the demographics of patients transported for IVC, (b) whether those demographics are significantly different between rural and urban areas, and (c) whether those demographics differ significantly from the general population. This same analysis is also worth doing for MH calls, overdose, and traumatic injury. 4) Is no data on race or ethnicity available? If so, it must be included in the calculations requested above. If not, please state so clearly and offer a brief explanation of why (i.e. "it's not record in DETECT" or "it's not standardized and the data is muck" or whatever). With these additions, this manuscript will make a much more robust contribution to literature. Minor comments about the draft are below: 1) line 45: For non US readers, please briefly define what categories of professional title are included in the category "law enforcement officer." I assume it is sworn police officers, sworn sheriff's deputies, state patrol, hwy patrol...anything else? 2) lines 69-70: Please clarify when stating the aims of the study that the authors are seeking to understand prevalence etc. *in North Carolina*. 3) lines 78-79: The authors describe the time frame (2009-2016) as the most recent data available. That 2016 is the most recent year of data available makes sense. But what does recent availability have to do with data from 2009? Why doesn't the data go back further? Is it available in this database? Please explain. 4) line 81: What do the authors mean by "when appropriate"? When, pray tell, is appropriate? 5) line 83: were census estimates obtained for each year under consideration (2009-2016, inclusive)? If so, please say so. If not, please explain. 6) line 89: On what do the authors base their confidence that the transport code of "walk-in following non-ambulance law enforcement transport" is overwhelmingly inclusive of all ED arrivals recorded as LE transports? As a reader who is not personally familiar with this dataset, I need some more detail to understand why this is sufficient. Are there only a few codes that can be chosen from? Is this code strictly standardized across all NC hospitals? Was there a review of any number of selected or discarded transport records to check for validity? 7) line 96: Please unpack how NCHS categories were collapsed (which old categories into which new ones) and justify the collapsing. How does this help us better understand the data? 8) lines 101-104: Could the authors do us the kindness of actually informing us of what these 13 major and 10 substituent clinical categories are? This comment in the methods section is otherwise totally uninformative. 9) lines 115-117: What does "based on" mean? Is this an exhaustive list of all codes used to indicate IVC cases identified in the review of that subset of 1000 records? We need more detail about how this list of search terms was come to in order to have any faith in its validity. 10) line 130: What do the authors mean by "overall"? Is this meant to indicate a comparison between 2009 and 2016? This is not clear. 11) lines 141-144: This may simply be a difference of disciplinary norms. If so, the authors are free to disregard this comment. But I do not think of "statistically different" as standard language for describing these findings. I would suggest replacing this term with language like "the difference was/was not statistically significant." 12) lines 156-157: Here, again, as mentioned at the very beginning of this review, the authors should reiterate the proportion of arrivals that were iVC alone, the proportion of calls that were MH alone, and the promotion that were both. 13) lines 162-163: What were the causes of death in these IVC patients? This seems a terribly important detail to include. 14) lines 217-222: I may be off the mark here, but shouldn't an increase in the number of MH tranports to EDs be an indicator that CIT programs are effective at diverting people with severe (and persistent, perhaps) mental health issues away from the criminal justice system? Where are these individuals meant to be diverted to? Because I am struck that counties with the highest number of MH transports also appear to be the counties with the lowest levels of CIT training. This reflects really poorly on CIT does it not? 15) lines 217-222: on a separate, but no less important note, the authors are presenting new data in the discussion section. This observation, in my view, needs to be moved to the results section. 16) lines 229-230: It is not clear to me how allowing IVC patients to be transported by entities other than law enforcement responds in anyway to delays in behavioral and mental health care. Are the delays caused but he patients waiting around for a cop to pick them up? That seems unlikely. 17) lines 233-235: The authors are again presenting data for the very first time in the discussion section. This comparison needs to be made in detail in the results section. 18) lines 263-264: There seems to be a run-on sentence here or perhaps a word missing. 19) line 272: What do the authors mean by "given their nature"? The meaning is not clear. I suggest they be more explicit rather than insinuate. 20) line 302: if Ms. DiRosa was involved in manuscript preparation, she should be listed as an author. Reviewer #2: This is an important paper on an understudied and timely topic. Some major and minor points: Major:1) In the introduction, there is a mention of NC policy re: law enforcement transport, but the intro would benefit from more in depth information relative to how unique the NC policies on law enforcement transport are; 2) In the discussion the authors allude to the fact that officers may not have medical training that equips them to properly deal with many folks they encounter who may need medical transport. In the context of a growing call to defund police and divert resources toward social and public health services, I would ask the authors to consider going one step further and speculate whether other trained public health professionals would be better equipped to respond to these types of medical emergencies. The authors do not have to belabor the point, but it should certainly be raised that perhaps law enforcement are not the right agency to respond. Minor: 1) male and female seem switched in table 1; 2) there is no fifth limitation (but there is a sixth). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I commend the authors on their hard work with this manuscript. This version is substantially improved and, after reading it through a few times, I only have 2 extremely minor comments, both of which can be handled in proofing. First, I suggest adding a citation for the reference to Daniel Prude's death from police violence, just so readers have a source to go to for more info or, alternatively, a date and location for his death. Second, The first instance of "North Carolina" at the end of the introduction should be followed with the acronym "(NC)" that is used throughout the rest of the manuscript. This is a really lovely piece and, with the additional detail the authors provided in the revision, is going to make an extremely valuable contribution to the literature. Kudos to all who worked on this. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
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