Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 23, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-11808 Selecting home care quality indicators based on the Resident Assessment Instrument-Home Care (RAI-HC) for Switzerland: a public health and healthcare providers' perspective PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wagner, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 16 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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In addition to naming the author group, please list the individual authors and affiliations within this group in the acknowledgments section of your manuscript. Please also indicate clearly a lead author for this group along with a contact email address. 4. We noted in your submission details that a portion of your manuscript may have been presented or published elsewhere. [Our manuscript relates to our systematic review on RAI-HC quality indicators performed in the context of the same study (forthcoming, Wagner et al., BMC Health Serv Res). In the submitted manuscript, the RAI-HC quality indicators identified in our systematic review were further analysed by having experts and health care providers evaluate their appropriateness of measuring quality of home care in Switzerland. The papers report on two separate sub-studies and do not overlap. The pending paper does not constitute dual publication. A copy of the paper reporting on our systematic literature review has been uploaded. ] Please clarify whether this [conference proceeding or publication] was peer-reviewed and formally published. If this work was previously peer-reviewed and published, in the cover letter please provide the reason that this work does not constitute dual publication and should be included in the current manuscript. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: When you mention the different language regions of Switzerland, could you provide a little more elaboration on that? I am guessing that the surveys were pre-tested for these various populations, correct? On lines 148-149, it appears a little confusing as to what you mean by QI numerators and denominators. Please elaborate further. On line 162, change to “analysis was carried out…” Around line 166, I would think that a greater elaboration on the “disagreement index” might be warranted. On line 176 (and perhaps other places), you use the word “criterium”, which refers to a cycling race. Is it possible you mean “criterion”? It also shows up on line 227 and other places as well. On line 206, I believe that you meant to say “rationale”. On line 211, replace with “relevance, potential of influence, practicability, and consensus”. Reviewer #2: This paper performed a series of discussion groups that asked health care professionals from Switzerland to evaluate a set of quality indicators for home care. Through these discussion groups, participants were asked to select quality indicators that they felt were appropriate for home care in Switzerland based on their expertise and experience. The results found 18 out of 43 indicators available from literature review. The results of ratings used to select the final indicators were reported. Some discussions were provided regarding why these were selected. However, in its current form, the manuscript is not ready for publication. I am not suggesting any new experiment, but a major revision is required. I believe the manuscript lacks depth in the following areas: context of home care in Switzerland (comments #1-3), rationales for chosen methods (comment #4), lack of reporting of qualitative results or observations from discussion groups (comment #5), and lack of interpretation and further synthesis of the results (comment #6). Major comments 1. In the Background section, I think the authors should elaborate more on the definition of home care. In addition, I think readers would appreciate some description of how home care in Switzerland is organized, funded, staffed, and delivered to fully understand to what extent the results can be generalizable beyond Switzerland. 2. The authors made some comments regarding home care versus institutional care throughout the manuscript. Therefore, it may also be helpful to define what you mean by institutional care. Did you mean inpatient acute care or nursing home or some other types of services? 3. I believe the discussions need to speak to potential usage of these QIs in Switzerland's home care. For example, will there be incentive, bonus, or penalty attached to each QI? If not, how are performance being rewarded or penalized? In addition, I was very curious about how home care performance are currently being evaluated, if any (which should also be included in the Introduction). 4. In phase 2, the health care providers were only given 18 QIs from phase 1, and not the full list. First, I could not find a rationale for this in the Methods section. Second, is it not a limitation if the health care providers did not get to review the full list? Could more QI be selected otherwise? 5. The results section reported mostly quantitative results. I am curious why the qualitative results from the focus groups, panel meetings, etc. were not included? Were they any themes that the participants discussed beyond the quantitative measures? For example, nurses mentioned lack of control over taking medications in the discussions. Were there others? Reporting these will help your discussion on rationale of ratings. 6. I am not sure why urinary incontinence was the focus in the discussions, and was the only example mentioned in the discussion. Other QI's, such as Hospitalization or falls due to difficulty in locomotion, can arguably be expensive for the health care system as well. My suggestions for the discussions: 6.1 You have a set of chosen QI's. Let's first summarize the themes of these QI's. For example, it was mentioned that 7 were pain related. What about the others? 6.2 Similarly which themes or groups were not included? 6.3 This may help set you up to explain why some QI themes were included and some weren't. 6.4 Why each theme, provide some rationales for selection or rejection. 6.5 Everything should tie back to the context of home care in Switzerland of why something makes sense and others did not. Minor comments 7. "The perspective of healthcare providers, for example, focus primarily on the care provided by practitioners to individual patients." on lines 69-70 need a citation. 8. "Literatur" misspelling Figure 1. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Selecting home care quality indicators based on the Resident Assessment Instrument-Home Care (RAI-HC) for Switzerland: a public health and healthcare providers' perspective PONE-D-20-11808R1 Dear Dr. Wagner, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Valérie Pittet, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I believe that the authors have provided the requisite changes that were asked of them by the initial reviewers. The subject matter seems important as well, and thus I believe that it will be wekk received by the PLoS ONE audience. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Andrew T Carswell |
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PONE-D-20-11808R1 Selecting home care quality indicators based on the Resident Assessment Instrument-Home Care (RAI-HC) for Switzerland: a public health and healthcare providers' perspective Dear Dr. Wagner: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of PD Dr. Valérie Pittet Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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