Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 25, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-05418 PFP-WGAN: Protein Function Prediction by Discovering Gene Ontology Term Correlations with Generative Adversarial Networks PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rabiee, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Two expert reviewers have seen your manuscript and I trust that you will find their comments (see at the bottom of this email) invaluable for preparing a revised version of your work. They highlight several important points - both in terms of presentation as well as technical issues - that should be carefully addressed in a revised manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 07 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript entitled “PFP-WGAN: Protein Function Prediction by Discovering Gene Ontology Term Correlations with Generative Adversarial Networks” by S. Seyyedsalehi, M. Soleymani, H. Rabiee and M. Mofrad describes PFP-WGAN, a sequence-based tool for protein function prediction. The Authors constructed PFP-WGAN, a conditional generative adversarial network which helps to effectively discover and incorporate term correlations in the gene function annotation process. PFP-WGAN is evaluated and compared to a similar methods reported previously. According to the authors, one of the key advantages of the method is the increased accuracy in predicting more specific function terms associated with the gene. The manuscript deals with the important problem and tackle it with cutting edge methodology. However, more detailed explanations are necessary to bring the methodology closer to the PlosOne readership. Major concerns: Generative Adversarial Network should be mentioned in the Introduction, together with a few lines of description advantages of the approach. The section "Generator Structure and Loss Function" needs to be described in more details. The authors stated that convolution filters allow for filtering meaningful patterns. Please, explain in more details the filtering procedure and what is meaningful pattern. Figure 1 needs to be describe in many more details. If possible stages of biological data flow should be presented also. This will facilitate method comprehension to the life scientist. The Authors should provide information on processing time. How fast PFP-WGAN is in prediction of function for 1000 proteins? How PFP-WGAN compares to similar method such as DEEP-GO? The Authors should provide an example of both input and output files. Contrary to what is claimed in Fig. 4 description, FFPred is superior in predicting CC terms. This should be corrected and discussed. Case studies on how PFP-WGAN outperforms other methods in predicting deep terms in various subontologies would be valuable addition to the manuscript. The complete training and test sets need to be submitted. Minor concerns: Please, use term “child terms” instead of “children”. Reviewer #2: General Summary: The manuscript by Seyyedsalehi et al. proposes a novel way to train neural protein function predictors. Instead of a standard classification loss, they authors attempt to capture GO term correlations by training an adversarial network. They compare to a multi-label CNN and a multi-task multi-layer perceptron and show that their approach achieves higher Fmax. The GO is a complicated structure with several constraints such as the true-path rule, term co-occurences and mutual exclusivities, making it difficult to come up with a good “hand-crafted” loss function that also reflects the “realism” of a predicted GO annotation. Therefore, the concept of this study, i.e. learning if a prediction is realistic or not from data is innovative and very interesting. However, I have some concerns about the experiments, mainly the use of appropriate baselines, and the lack of interpretation of the results. Major comments 1) One thing that troubled me while reading the manuscript is whether this model should be called a GAN. GANs are Generative models whose input is a noise vector (and an extra feature vector in the case of the conditional GANs) and their goal is typically to generate realistic-looking data, such as images, from scratch. Here, there is no noise input (Fig. 1), only a feature vector, and we are dealing with a classic classification task, where an output y is deterministically assigned to an input x. It is trained in an adversarial way, which is the novelty here, but I find that calling it a GAN is a little misleading. 2) In lines 40-51, three previously published methods of exploiting label correlations for function prediction are mentioned (refs 31,32, 28), but the authors do not compare to any of them, because they are “shallow”. I find that this is not a convincing argument not to compare to at least one of them. Comparing to a linear model would give a good baseline for label-correlation-based methods and provide further insight on the superiority of the proposed model. Another relevant linear label dimension reduction model that the authors could compare to is the following: Bi W., Kwok J. (2011) Multi-label classification on tree-and DAG-structured hierarchies. In: International Conference on Machine Learning 3) Related to that, in lines 88-90 the authors claim that “this is the first time that a deep model is used to explore complex relations and semantic similarities between the GO terms”. This statement is incorrect. The authors should consider the following works: a) GO2vec, Zhong et al., BMC Genomics, 2020, b) Onto2vec, Smaili et al., Bioinformatics, 2018, and c) GOAT, Duong et al., biorxiv, 2020. The last one was specifically modelling GO terms with a deep net for protein function prediction. These are very relevant works and the authors need to benchmark their method against (some of) them. 4) Line 205, The authors mention using a validation set to tune hyperparameters, but in lines 178 and 198 they report “manually” setting the hyperparameters. It has to be clarified what other values were considered for these parameters and how the “manual” decision was made. If the test set is used to decide on these parameters, then the results cannot be trusted. 5) I completely missed the interpretation of the results. Yes, the proposed model works clearly better, but there is no evidence provided that the improvement is indeed due to exploiting label correlations as the authors claim. The first thing that I would like to see is whether the label vectors that are the output of the generator are consistent with the “true path rule”. 6) Again on the interpretation of label correlations: could the authors provide some examples of relationships between labels that their model manages to capture that are not captured by a traditional neural network? For example, there is already evidence that linear GO term correlation models can capture co-occurrence and mutual exclusivity relations between pairs of terms (ref 28). Can the proposed method go beyond this and find more complex relationships? 7) The generator is trained using a weighted sum of a standard cross-entropy loss and the novel adversarial loss proposed in this work. What is the effect of changing the weight parameter lambda_1? What if one makes it really small to only use the cross-entropy? Is then the performance gain lost? And if it is made much larger? Can the model learn to predict functions without the cross-entropy component? Minor comments 8) The figures are barely readable in the pdf version. The authors should provide higher resolution versions. 9) Broken link that should contain the data (error 404:not found) https://github.com/ictic-bioinformatics/ 10) GANs have been previously used in protein function prediction to generate negative examples (Wan and Jones, 2019, biorxiv) 11) Shouldn’t p_m and p_r be flipped in equation 1? Typically in GANs the discriminator has high output for real examples. 12) The DeepGO method is not really modelling label correlations, it is simply enforcing the “true path rule” of the GO graph. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-20-05418R1 PFP-WGAN: Protein Function Prediction by Discovering Gene Ontology Term Correlations with Generative Adversarial Networks PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rabiee, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 06 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have satisfyingly addressed my comments. However, data are still not accessible as link http://git.dml.ir/seyyedsalehi/PFP-WGAN is not active. This should be fixed before manuscript is accepted for publishing. Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed most of my comments, but some minor points remain: 1. Table 3 shows that the WGAN is better at capturing (linear) co-occurrence relations between terms. In lines 124-125 the authors state that this model ‘ is able to model more complicated and higher level correlations that are not necessarily available in the current DAG model’. The results do not show any evidence of ability to model higher order relations, so this statement should be removed or changed to something like ‘is able to mode co-occurence relations that are not necessarily available in the current DAG model’ 2. In the text authors mention the use of dropout to avoid overfitting, but from their answers to comment 1 it seems they also use dropout to provide stochasticity for the generator. If this is the case, it should be mentioned in the manuscript 3. The authors should explain the TPR score better: preferably provide a formula and explain what it means 4. Typo in line 56 5. The figure definition is better, but still not publication-quality in my opinion. The editorial stuff can perhaps provide information on how to generate high-quality figures ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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