Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 3, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-23872 Calcification of the thoracic aorta on low-dose chest CT predicts severe COVID-19 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Fervers, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: All issues raised by expert reviewers are required. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 15 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The Authors investigated aortic wall calcification on chest CT in 70 COVID-19 patients, as a surrogate of atherosclerotic burden, and its relationship with the severity of COVID-19 clinical manifestations. The topic is interesting, but the analysis needs to explore some points deeper. -The results that "Multivariate regression analysis including AWC, patient age and sex, volume of AWC was the only significant regressor for severe COVID-19" indicated the the Authors did not take into account other clinical and demographic data. This has been acknowledged in the discussion: "Comorbidities of patients were not respected, since our aim was to model a prediction solely based on imaging and generic patient data. This recognizes that a comprehensive clinical examination and anamnesis might not be achievable for every individual during the pandemic". Actually, the collection of simple clinical data (BMI/obesity, history of hypertension, diabetes, hypercolesterolemia, smoking habit, prior myocardial infarction, drugs...) would be necessary to explore whether AWC predicts COVID-19 outcome independently from a simple anamnestic score, or whether AWC is a marker of the cardiovascular burden, useful only for patients whose anamnesis is not available. Most COVID-19 patients are indeed able to provide simple clinical data (medical history and drugs) to reconstruct their cardiovascular history and risk, so that the analysis of AWC might present very limited clinical usefulness. "Outcome was rated moderate (no hospitalization, hospitalization) and severe (ICU, tracheal intubation, death)". It would be interesting to explore a more detailed outcome score (1-5) and its relationship with AWC, rather then using a binary outcome (moderate 1-2 vs severe 3-4-5). In the Methods, "Aortic valve calcifications and calcifications associated with the coeliac trunk were excluded." Why not considering calcium burden in other sites, such as aortic valve, abdominal vessels...? It might further stratify patients' risk. In the Methods "All mentioned values are stated as average ± standard deviation, if not otherwise specified." Actually, AWC (Table 1) should be expressed as median (interquartile range), because it is clearly not normally distributed. In the discussion, the Authors correctly stated that "The short-term 5-day outcome of COVID-19 has been successfully predicted by quantification of lung involvement" despite being "highly susceptible to the time point of imaging during early COVID-19." Nevertheless, I would try to explore whether the extent of lung involvement is somehow correlated to AWC and whether it provides additive prognostic information on top of AWC. Reviewer #2: General comment: Generally, this is an interesting paper, which seems to have significantly benefited from previous reviewers’ comments. The idea of the paper to quantify aortic calcium burden to help predicting the course of COVID19 might be a helpful tool in clinical practice. However, the authors may not over exaggerate the findings of a small retrospective study by including prediction assumptions but rather state the correlation and, potentially, recommend a prospective study setting. Specific comments: Introduction: It is still fairly long and may benefit from further shortening. The objective may be rewritten because AWC does not influence the course of COVID19 but might represent some kind of biomarker, which helps to predict the course of COVID 19. Material and Methods: LDCT scanning protocols: it seems the tube voltage of the CT scanner was 100kVp while the voltage of center 1 was 120 kVp. It is known that lowering the tube voltage increases the CT numbers of calcification, yielding false high measurements. Has this been compensated? Was the Philips software feasible to correct for this? Otherwise, measurements might be skewed. It appears that the radiation dose of both centers differed significantly, and you analyzed images of different slice thicknesses, which is also prone to systematic errors. Has this problem been considered? “For independence of imaging results” might be omitted, since it has not been tested. Statistical and data analysis: Multiple regression analyses should be screened for interactions of variables. Based on experience and literature, interactions of age, gender, and AWC are highly suspected. Further demographic data (e.g., patient size) may be included in multiple regression analysis, as they will affect the total amount of AWC. Results: Discussion: May be shortened and focused on the discussion of the study’s results. 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