Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-23455 Presence and abundance of bacteria with the Type VI secretion system in a coastal environment and in the global oceans PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sison-Mangus, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. First, I want to apologize for the long delay of this reviewing, but we have been waiting for the responses of a second reviewer, and despite regular reminders, we did not receive them. You will find below the extensive reviewing on one referee. As you will see, this referee acknolwedges that you report important findings, but lists a number of recommendations to improve the analyses and the manuscript. I therefore encourage you to carefully address the referee's comments and invite you to submit your revised manuscript by Nov 06 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this study, the authors use bacterial DNA isolated from marine water samples from several locations and at different time points to analyze the relative abundance of genera carrying genes encoding structural components of the type VI secretion system (T6SS). One of their main findings is that T6SS-carrying bacteria appear to be more prevalent in the particle-attached fraction of their samples. They also correlate relative abundances with several environmental parameters, such as nutrient concentrations, temperature etc. The study investigates the potential influence of an interesting bacterial phenotype (the T6SS machinery) on bacterial communities in natural environments, and I find the results to be intriguing and the manuscript well-written overall. My only major complaints would be the following: a) Relative abundances generally, and putative predation networks specifically. Fig. 6 shows interaction analyses based on relative abundance data of T6SS-containing bacteria in different samples and different time points (Santa Cruz wharf dataset). I am a bit sceptical of this analysis and the claims based on it, as these putative interaction networks are purely based on high-throughput sequencing data, and the relationship between absolute abundance in the environment (i.e. what we are actually interested in) and the relative abundance after sequencing (what we analyse) is often not predictable. See e.g. Fig. 1B and 1C here: https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/fmicb.2017.02224/full Given these inherent shortcomings of relative abundances as a metric, I am not convinced that the measured changes in relative abundances can be linked to an interaction between species here. If the analysis the authors did accounts for what is discussed in the paper above, I suggest this be addressed in this manuscript as this figure immediately raised a red flag in my mind. The same point of criticism applies to relative abundances as used in Fig. 2 in this study, and I’d be interested to hear the authors’ point of view on how their analysis might be generally influenced by the intrinsic shortcomings of relative abundance data. b) Labelling bacterial genera containing T6SS-structural genes as “predatory” (throughout the manuscript). “Predation” in the strict sense implies not only killing, but also consumption of the targeted cells and nutritional exploitation (as the authors explain in the introduction). Although the T6SS is putatively involved in some bacterial predatory phenotypes sensu strictu (e.g. in Myxococcus), the T6SS is extremely wide-spread among Gram-negative bacteria and a role for it in actual “predation” has not been shown for any other species to the best of my knowledge. In the vast majority of species where the T6SS has been studied mechanistically in the lab in great detail, the T6SS is used as anti-competitor weaponry to kill competitors, where the main benefit is not nutrient uptake from the killed cell but rather just the physical removal of a competitor, which leads to more space for growth, and decreased nutrient-based competition. The chain of showing predation would need to include: find T6SS genes --> show that T6SS is expressed --> show that T6SS kills competitors --> show that nutrients from killed cells are taken up and significantly enhance fitness of the attacker. Since the study at hand only focusses on finding T6SS genes, I suggest the label “predatory” bacteria is removed and replaced by a more conservative label, e.g. “T6SS-harbouring bacteria” or something along those lines. Similarly, instead of saying “predating on competitors” I would say “T6SS-dependent killing or -inhibiting of competitors”. In summary, I think this study contains interesting results on the distribution of T6SS-genes in marine environments but could use with some more discussion on how representative relative abundances really are for environmental communities, and I would also suggest not labelling bacterial genera harbouring T6SS genes as “predatory bacteria”, as several aspects of this definition are not fulfilled by this study system. Minor comments: 1. L82 -84: “Information is currently scarce …” We do have quite a bit of information on how the T6SS affects survival and success in host-associated communities though (e.g. Vibrio in squids https://www.pnas.org/content/115/36/E8528; Salmonella in guts https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/27503894/; and others), which should fall under an “ecological setting” as the authors have phrased it here. We do indeed have less information on non-host-associated environments like the ocean, and if this is the gap that the authors would like to emphasize than I suggest to rephrase this statement accordingly. 2. L84 Do --> does (T6SS most often written as singular, the T6SS as a whole) 3. L103 bacteria populations --> bacterial populations 4. L103 bacteria-bacteria --> Interbacterial (just a suggestion) 5. L104 in --> for 6. L111 for --> for the 7. L236 bacteria --> bacterial 8. Fig. 2: I’m a bit confused: why are there gaps in the plot at certain time points? is it because no DNA was isolated here, no T6SS-containing genera were present here, or no samples were taken (but then why plot)? 9. Fig 2. Legend: “Error bars … across those samples” Sample size should be indicated in all figure legends for figures that contain errors bars. 10. L296 Fig. 4 is cited, but I think this should be Fig. 3 (the one with the global map) 11. L300 Fig. 4 Legend, but I think this should be Fig. 3 Legend 12. L339 p-value: throughout the study, are p-values corrected for multiple testing? If yes, this should be mentioned in the method section. 13. L349-352: add units for all variables/environmental factors 14. L337+L339 + L366 p-values are > 0.05, which is above the significance threshold of 0.05 used in this study (or at least above all the thresholds I saw explicitly mentioned, e.g. in legends for Fig. 5, Fig. 6, and in the methods section). P-value cut-offs are of course inherently arbitrary, but if different cut-offs were used for different analyses this should be mentioned somewhere (e.g. in methods section). If these values are indeed considered “non-significant”, the claims based on the respective comparisons should be amended in the main text. 15. L373-375: add units for all variables/environmental factors 16. Fig. 6 Legend – since two different datasets are used in this study (SC wharf vs. TARA) it would be good to indicate here which dataset this specific interaction analysis is based on. 17. Fig. 6 title – I suggest changing the figure title to “putative predation networks”, since “predation network” strongly suggests that pairwise interaction assays were conducted experimentally, with cultured isolates. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Presence and abundance of bacteria with the Type VI secretion system in a coastal environment and in the global oceans PONE-D-20-23455R1 Dear Dr. Sison-Mangus, Thank you for submitting your revised manuscript, and for having addressed the comments of the reviewer. Your revised manuscript has been sent back to the original reviewer, who acknowledges that you have appropriately addressed her/his intiial comments and recommends publication. I am therefore very pleased to accept your manuscript. Please note that your work will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Eric Cascales Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
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PONE-D-20-23455R1 Presence and abundance of bacteria with the Type VI secretion system in a coastal environment and in the global oceans Dear Dr. Sison-Mangus: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Eric Cascales Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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