Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-16875 A prospective study to explore the relationship between MTHFRC677T genotype, physiological folate levels, and postpartum psychopathology in at-risk women PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Austin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers raised several important issues that should be resolved before considering publication in the Journal. Particularly, please pay attention to the methodological aspects. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 13 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The Authors analyse the relation between MTHFR C677T genotype, folate levels, and postpartum psychopathology in at-risk women. The Authors hypothesise that, in the first three months postpartum, compared to MTHFR CC homozygous women, TT homozygous women would have increased symptoms of postpartum depression and that this relationship would be moderated by physiological levels of red blood cell (RBC) folate. In addition, they conduct an exploratory analysis to assess the impact of MTHFR C677T genotypes and RBC folate levels on postpartum mania and postpartum psychosis. The paper could benefit from clarification about data as well as the methodologies used. The Authors should provide more details on the modelling choices to help readers in having a clear understanding on the proposed study. Some important issues are listed below. 1. The Authors conducted a longitudinal observational study on a sample of 365 pregnant women with a history of a mood or psychotic disorder and that data collection occurred at 4 timepoints. However, the longitudinal aspect of this study is not exploited in the analysis where only the highest postpartum EPDS and CARS-M scores (from all the available postpartum timepoints) and the corresponding RBC folate levels were selected. Along the same line, RBC folate levels corresponding to the first postpartum timepoint for which the participant met criteria for psychosis, or to the earliest time point for participants which never met criteria for psychosis were chosen. All these choices might be due to a high presence of missing values at different time points but this is not clear from the text, where the only reason provided is linked to differences in timing for the emergence of symptoms of depression, mania and psychosis. The Authors should discuss in more detail why they do not perform a longitudinal statistical analysis. 2. To assess the hypothesised relationships, the Authors run a moderation analysis but they do not include any references to the literature on the moderation model. They should provide a clear and rigorous description of the moderation model implemented. 3. The Authors affirm that there are outliers in the data but they do not specify if the outliers affect only the dependent variables or also the folate levels, and neither do they provide statistical results to support their claim 4. To evaluate the relationships included in the moderation model, the Authors use robust linear regression. At line 192, they refer to “minimum maximum likelihood estimation”, which to the best of my knowledge does not exist. They are probably referring to the MM-estimator introduced by Yohai (1987). The Author should provide references for this method and specify the software used to perform the analysis. Yohai, J. V. (1987). High Breakdown-Point and High Efficiency Robust Estimates for Regression, Annals of Statistics, 17, 4, 1662-1683. 5. How were post-hoc analyses conducted? Methodological aspect should be detailed in the manuscript. 6. I would suggest to move Table 1: Demographic information for each MTHFR C677T genotype, into the Supplementary data, and to include the results provided in Supplementary Table 1 in the manuscript, along with p-values, which are not reported in this Table. 7. In the Discussion, the Authors affirm that an inverse relationship between folate and depressive symptoms may exist in the postpartum for women with a MTHFR C677T 341 C. However, this conclusion is not supported by the analysis. 8. At lines 372-375, it reads “While there was no statistical difference in RBC folate levels […] between CC, CT, and TT genotypes,”. p-values reported in Tables 2 (p=0.08), 3 (p=0.004) and 4 (p=0.002) do not support this conclusion. This has to be clarified. 9. In the Limitation section, the Authors state that “participants with a TT genotype may, by chance, have been taking a greater amount of folic acid” (line 379). Could it be worth of investigation the inclusion of covariates, related to whether participants were taking a Folic Acid Supplement or a daily psychotropic medication, into the model? Reviewer #2: The manuscript entitled “A prospective study to explore the relationship between MTHFRC677T genotype, physiological folate levels, and postpartum psychopathology in at-risk women” is an interesting and well structured study investigating the influence of MTHFR C677T polymorphism and folate blood levels on the onset of psychopathological disorders in the postpartum. The study design is methodologically flawless and statistical data analysis is appropriate and properly conducted. The graphs are immediately explanatory. It is also written in fluent and clear English. The topic is interesting for a wide audience. An increase in homocysteine levels resulting from folate deficiency and / or MTHFR mutations, has also been described as a possible risk factor for neuropsychiatric disorders, as well as for various other pathological situations, such as cardiovascular disease and osteoporosis, probably facilitating an increase in inflammatory factors, as suggested in a recent paper, to which the Authors could possibly refer (De Martinis M, Sirufo MM, Nocelli C, Fontanella L, Ginaldi L. Hyperhomocysteinemia is Associated with Inflammation, Bone Resorption, Vitamin B12 and Folate Deficiency and MTHFR C677T Polymorphism in Postmenopausal Women with Decreased Bone Mineral Density. Int J Environ Res Public Health 2020;17(12):4260.doi:10.3390/ijerph17124260). Are there data available on homocysteine levels in the women studied? The lack of this information should be considered among the limitations of the study. It might be interesting to evaluate them, maybe even in a future study. Since hyperomocysteinemia could be a pathogenetic mechanism that may help explain the effects of folate deficiency and MTHFR C677T polymorphism, I suggest that the Authors briefly address this topic in the discussion. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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A prospective study to explore the relationship between MTHFRC677T genotype, physiological folate levels, and postpartum psychopathology in at-risk women PONE-D-20-16875R1 Dear Dr. Austin, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Kyoung-Sae Na, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The paper is acceptable for publication, although some interesting topics that we suggested to address in this first revision have been missed. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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