Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 24, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-30169 Network Preservation Reveals Shared and Unique Biological Processes Associated with Chronic Alcohol Abuse in NAc and PFC. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Vornholt, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. You will see the detailed comments of the two Reviewers below. However, I am particularly concerned with the potential RNA degradation in the PFC samples, as mentioned by Reviewer 2 . Differential degradation could impact brain regional analysis. I hope you can adequately address this concern. If you can, I also suggest to add a more generalized take-home message to Discussion section. If you feel that are able to adequately address these main concerns, I invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses all points raised during the review process. If you decide to do so, please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 11 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Andrey E Ryabinin, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Rigorous and interesting analysis of mRNA and miRNA expression associated with alcohol dependence in post-mortem male human brain. Methods. Very detailed and well described methods. Might be interesting to the reader to comment on which covariates had a larger effect on gene expression. S1 Table. Probably need better legend. What do the numbers mean for Hemisphere, Neuropathology, Hepathology (#should be hepatology?), Toxicology, Smoking. Results. Figure 3. Significance levels for DE not noted in figure, legend, or text. Hub genes of potential biological significance. This section is less interesting. Are they enriched for relevant biological processes or GWAS hits? Are they sig. DE between cases and controls? Other than their high degree of connectivity within modules enriched for AD, what is there biological significance? Or maybe integrate into another results section? Figure 5. Units of expression not clearly described in the legend. Discussion. Further discussion of the interesting finding of cilium assembly in the NAc but not in the PFC may be warranted. Adult neurogenesis in the NAc? Neurogenesis of medium spiny neurons in the nucleus accumbens continues into adulthood and is enhanced by pathological pain. García-González et al., Mol. Psych. 2020. PMID: 32612250 Reviewer #2: The report by Vornholt et al. is a descriptive study that utilizing genome-wide mRNA and miRNA expression from postmortem brain of AD cases compared to matched controls. Gene co-expression networks, mRNA/miRNA interactions, and eQTL analyses were used to identify expression patterns that are uniquely and differently dysregulated in the PFC and NAc. The analytical pipelines are well described and mostly robust. The Methods indicates 42 cases and 42 controls. Then after matching, 72 total cases. Table S1 shows demos for 70 cases (1 case was a statistical outlier). It is not clear why the initial 12 cases were excluded from the original group (84). It is not clear from the beginning of the Methods section that the NAc data were reported previously by the same group. Utilization of the previously published data was clarified in the first section of the Results but needs to be outlined clearly in the Methods. Also, for clarity, any annotation updates and data handling differences for the dataset should be listed since the data were published in 2015. There is significant concern about the within subject RNA quality differences for each of the brain regions. A major goal of the reported work was to identify overlapping and unique expression differences in PFC and NAc. There are clear differences in RNA quality between the 2 brain regions. This is likely degradation due to the sample processing at different times. The authors argue reliable data can be obtained from RINs<=4; however, the impact of RNA degradation on downstream expression analysis can be significant, especially when trying to compare multiple brain regions from the same individual. The cross-region analysis is likely compromised. The major components of the study (descriptive statistics, WGCNA analysis, network preservation, mRNA/miRNA interactions) are potentially interesting; however, there is not a well-integrated overview or thematic model presented from consolidated findings. It is especially hard to understand exactly what the reader will gather from complex mRNA/miRNA interactions. Functional validation of key findings would significantly strengthen the study. At a minimum, testable hypotheses should be discussed based on the integrated analyses. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-20-30169R1 Network preservation reveals shared and unique biological processes associated with chronic alcohol abuse in NAc and PFC. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Vornholt, Thank you for resubmitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Specifically, there is still a concern regarding the low RINs. As one of the reviewers suggests, there could be more quantitative arguments on this issue. In addition, I could not find the database used for sample access. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 03 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Andrey E Ryabinin, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: There is lingering concern about the impact of the low RIN samples on the analysis. The authors argue that RIN values are consistently low within PFC (thus impacting cases and controls similarly); however, the concern from the initial review concerned a major goal of the work--to identify overlapping and unique expression differences in PFC and NAc. At a minimum, the proportion of variance explained by the known covariates such as age, gender, RIN and PMI should be reported using violin plots or other graphics. Linear mixed models can then be used to quantify the contribution of multiple sources of variation and identify any covariates that should be corrected in the final analysis. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. 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Network preservation reveals shared and unique biological processes associated with chronic alcohol abuse in NAc and PFC. PONE-D-20-30169R2 Dear Dr. Vornholt, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Andrey E Ryabinin, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-30169R2 Network preservation reveals shared and unique biological processes associated with chronic alcohol abuse in NAc and PFC. Dear Dr. Vornholt: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Andrey E Ryabinin Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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