Peer Review History
Original SubmissionSeptember 13, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-28810 PROGNOSTIC VALUE OF PLASMA PENTRAXIN 3 LEVELS IN PATIENTS WITH SEPTIC SHOCK ADMITTED TO INTENSIVE CARE PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Suberviola, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 23 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: - Describing Pentraxin 3 as a new marker for sepsis is not correct , many studies has discussed its role in sepsis . may be the Gap between the study period ( 2015-2016) and the submission for publishing is a factor . this time gap make most of the results of this study NOT Novel which is an important issue for publication. - A major drawback in this study is lack of control group -In Table one how can you make a statistical comparison between survival with UTI and non-Survival ( count = zero) - what were the results of cultures( blood, urine, etc) - Ptx3 levels increase in other NON-SEPSIS condition as hypoxia, renal insult . DO you exclude those patients?? - what is the initial diagnosis of your patients - it is recommended to include figures of ROC Reviewer #2: In the present study, Perez-San Martin et al. present data showing the prognostic potential of PTX3 in a cohort of 75 septic shock patients. They state that adding PTX3 to severity scores increased the predictive capacity of the latter for mortality, and that a single determination of plasma PTX3 on ICU admission was a better prognostic marker compared with PCT and CRP. The study is relatively limited in terms of number of patients involved, but it confirms the general messages of previous studies on the prognostic potential of PTX3 in sepsis. Major points: - The authors state that adding PTX3 to severity scores increased the predictive capacity of the latter for mortality. However, this increase is really limited and AUC reported in Tables 2 and 3 are almost identical. If there is any advantage, is this statistically significant? -The authors should better underline the novelties of this study compared to papers published in the last years on this marker in sepsis, which are collected in the review by Porte et al (Frontiers Immunol, 2019), in addition to ref 18. Among them, there are studies with larger sample size. -The authors discuss the difference with results reported in ref 12 and 15, pointing to the value of PTX3 levels at ICU admission found in this study, but not in the studies of ref 12 and 15, where the authors state that levels on day 5 and 7, respectively, correlated with severity, but PTX3 levels on day 1, did not. In this regard, it would be important to discuss criteria for ICU admission, and the time between sepsis diagnosis and PTX3 test, since these factors could explain the difference with previous studies. -It would be important to add figures, e.g. for AUC and correlation analysis. -It would be interesting to perform further analysis based on the characteristics of patients. For instance, is there any difference in PTX3 levels/predictive capacity depending on the infection site? Reviewer #3: The authors discuss the prognostic role of a single determination at the time of ICU admission of 3 biomarkers (PCT, CRP, PTX-3) in septic shock patients. They conclude that, after adjustment for confounding, PTX-3 has a prognostic value superior to the other two: the higher this biomarker, the higher the mortality. I have several concerns. 1) The authors state that biomarkers are needed to stratify the patients according to the risk of death. Indeed, severity scores gather several clinical characteristic to convert them into a risk of mortality. PCT and CRP, being inflammatory markers, are certainly related to the prognosis, however their clinical use is usually different: early recognition of infection, follow-up of a certain treatment, antibiotic stewardship. Do you really think that such biomarkers could perform better than a severity score in prognostication? In Table 2 and 3 the authors present these findings, but they do not discuss them appropriatedly. 2) The classical biomarker for sepsis prognostication is lactate, which is not discussed at all. 3) Premise: I am not a statistician. The ROC/AUC approach is ok, but I think that a survival analysis should be used rather than a logistic regression. The exposure-response trend with three groups does not add much to the analysis performed with two groups. Table 4 and 5 are redundant. Additional remarks - The biological and clinical role of the biomarkers should be clearly presented either in the Introduction or in the Discussion section without repetition - Try to discuss the discrepancies with Caironi's and Mauri's studies - Lack of a non-septic control group is not a limitation of the study - Conclusions, first sentence: PTX-3 is an actual, not potential prognostic factor. The sentence does not mean anything in this way. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-20-28810R1 PROGNOSTIC VALUE OF PLASMA PENTRAXIN 3 LEVELS IN PATIENTS WITH SEPTIC SHOCK ADMITTED TO INTENSIVE CARE PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Suberviola, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the following points: - the language used in the revised sections of the manuscript needs to be improved. In particular: 1. I suggest using an alternative phrase for describing/comparing the magnitude of AUC. Consider using "lower" instead of "smaller". 2. Please consider rephrasing the Conclusion sentence of the Abstract: instead of "Our results support the prognostic value", consider the following: "Our results suggest that the prognostic value of... may support..." 3. Please rephrase the following: "But even they have limited abilities..." 4. Please, try rephrasing the following sentence: "Lactate was the biomarker with higher associations..." 5. "Our results also support the severity scores..." Please consider using "Our results also suggest that..." 6. Please consider rephrasing: "slight increase" 7. Please revise the following sentence: "These conflicting outcomes may due to the heterogeneity..." I suggest proofreading/editing the manuscript from a proofreader with full professional proficiency in scientific English. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 31 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Aleksandar R. Zivkovic Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PROGNOSTIC VALUE OF PLASMA PENTRAXIN 3 LEVELS IN PATIENTS WITH SEPTIC SHOCK ADMITTED TO INTENSIVE CARE PONE-D-20-28810R2 Dear Dr. Suberviola, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Aleksandar R. Zivkovic Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-28810R2 Prognostic value of plasma pentraxin 3 levels in patients with septic shock admitted to intensive care Dear Dr. Suberviola: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Aleksandar R. Zivkovic Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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