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PONE-D-20-15450 Influenza vaccination hesitancy in five countries of South America. Confidence, complacency and convenience as determinants of immunization rates PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gonzalez-Block, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Both reviewers have provided very positive comments about your paper but have also stated that there are critical issues with the approach taken to the analysis that need to be teased out. Can I please encourage you to carefully go through these issues and update your paper accordingly ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 19 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Overview: The paper reports the rates of vaccine hesitancy in respect to the adult influenza vaccine across five countries within South America. The confidence, complacency and convenience framework is use to assess different aspects of vaccine hesitancy. These factors are compared across risk groups, countries and to self-reported influenza vaccine uptake. General comments: The paper is well written and the topic is novel and importance to our understanding of global vaccine hesitancy. The data set clearly contains some important finding, however, the way in which you report the 3c factors and some of the statistical tests are confusing and would benefit from reworking. In this section I have outlined the 2 major issues from my perspective. Below this I have a few specific and minor comments. 1. Reporting of the 3c subscales: - As I understand it you have added the items of each of the 3c sub scales and then turned them into a number between 1 and 100 so that they are comparable. Then you have reported these as a percentage. I concerned that this makes your findings confusing, as when you report percentages it makes your finding sound like each component is a binary and the percentage is referring to how many people are e.g. complacent/not complacent (i.e. not a scale variable) - I suggest change these to a number between 1 and 10. This would make reporting clearer and distinguish these from where you report percentages of categorical variable (e.g. when you report vaccine uptake rates). If this change is made the analysis would need to be re-run, however, the conclusions would obviously remain the same. - Table 1 confuses the issue further. For the “Confidence in the vaccine” indicator you write “Resulting sum is rescaled to the interval (0,1) and expressed as %”. If I was looking at this out of context, I would assume that you had split the sample into high and low confidence and were reporting the percentage of those in one of the categories. 2. Comparison ANOVAs and Tables 3: - The use of letters to signify significance makes this table difficult to understand. It also means that the reader cannot see the level of significance or the effect size. My advice would be to check other papers in Plos One and see how they report multiple ANOVAs like this. - Type 1 errors: With the number of comparison ANOVA tests that you have conducted I am concerned with the possibility of false positives in your conclusions. At minimum a note of caution should be included in the discussion, however, I personally would reduce the alpha level throughout. This would of course change the conclusions of your analysis, especially for those results that are borderline significant, however, it would remove any spurious results. Minor comments: Line 105: Cross-section (rather than transversal) would be a more accessible, and the standard, term to use for this type of study. Line 119 -120: Please direct the reader to the section with the listed ethics details here. Line 146-147: Talking in terms of a higher and lower values and not “100 means less complacently” e.g. a higher value on complacence variable indicates a lower level of complacence. Line 169-172: As per the clarity of the 3c’s comment these would then be: “the highest normalised score for convenience (7.48, out of a possible 10)” etc. Line 173 - 182: Each comparison in this section should be accompanied with the reporting of a statistical test to demonstrate significant differences. Or point towards a table that reports all comparisons. Line 183 -185: This sentence would benefit from rephrasing. Something like “…with children and older adults reporting significantly higher levels of vaccination than the other two risk groups”, then point to a table reporting the means and statistical test. Line 202 -213: If these are correlations, please report the correlation coefficients for each. Either in the text or on the table. Table 1: - Change “Points added gradually” to “The scale was additive” - In “Complacency A. Influenza risk” construction you have the word “Idem.”, it is unclear what this means. Table 5: - Report all p values without first “0”, i.e. “<.01” - A p< .001 level of detail would be useful here. Supplemental materials: - Some parts of the questionnaire in the supplemental materials still require translating. - Data set should be made fully available Reviewer #2: This manuscript will make an important contribution to the larger literature on influenza vaccine hestiancy, particularly as it covers immunization in an understudied region. However, I think a revision is necessary to strengthen the connections between the vaccine hestiancy framework, particularly the 3 C's, and the study's research questions and conclusions. Introduction: I would have liked to see more explicit research questions. There are a lot of different factors at play here -- multiple risk groups, many different countries, several different theoretical constructs, etc. Outlining research questions may help the reader focus on the significance of this work and keep both the results and discussion sections more focused. Given the title of the paper, I was expecting more focus on the 3 C's. I find this overview of the constructs to be a bit superficial and lacking in support. Please incorporate more of the existing literature on vaccine hesitancy. Given that the conceptualizations of constructs at this stage is carried through to the development of survey measures and in analysis, this has significant bearing on the meaning of the results. Although a very different population, a recent study by Quinn et al. 2019 may be helpful. Quinn, S. C., Jamison, A. M., An, J., Hancock, G. R., & Freimuth, V. S. (2019). Measuring vaccine hesitancy, confidence, trust and flu vaccine uptake: Results of a national survey of White and African American adults. Vaccine, 37(9), 1168-1173. Ln 68: What does "mandated" mean in this context? I associate this with mandatory or required vaccination, yet the following sentences seem to suggest this is not the case. Ln 73: What would an ideal vaccination rate be? I was surprised to see rates this high. Methods: As alluded to earlier, more information is needed on item development and any reliability/validity tests that were performed. Also more information on the choice to combine all respondents into a single "high-risk" sample may be needed. What differences exist between risk groups and between countries? I need to be convinced that the measures are actually measuring what the authors claim they are. Ln 121: How does this sampling approach introduce bias? In what ways did the resulting sample differ from a more resprsentative sample? Ln 133: Since the 3 C's are so central to the arguements of this paper, it is worth describing the development of measures in greater detail in the body of the text, not just in a table. Specifically, what each indicator was designed to measure and then how well it measures it. Results: The indicators scores need to be contextualized to be meaningful. What does a convenience indicator of 74.8% mean in this context? I'm not sure what I'm supposed to take away from these results. I'm also not sure what is a "good" or "acceptable" level for any of these indicators and which are "bad" or "unacceptable" levels. Starting with how these scores correlate to vaccine behavior may be more helpful. ln 183: Why are vaccination rates so much lower than those described in the introduction? Any ideas? Ln 200: The differences in vaccination rates between Chile and Uruguay are pretty extreme. How does this impact the dataset? Did the 3 C's function the same across different countries? Discussion: With so many results to touch upon, the discussion section feels a little unfocused. Again, tying the paper more closely to the vaccine hestiancy framework and following a clear set of research questions may help tighten the focus of the paper. Some of these statments need to be further explained in much more detail. For instance, Ln 238-239. What does it mean to suggest that convenience is better than confidence and both are better than complacency? Ln 301 this paragraph feels more like a literature review than a part of the discussion. How is it tied to the study's findings? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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