Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 26, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-26816 Type and amount of help as predictors for impression of helpers PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Erlandsson, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 10 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for giving me the possibility to review the manuscript “Type and amount of help as predictors for impression of helpers”. The topic is socially relevant, the manuscript is well written and the argumentation is consistent. Giving the number of experimental conditions, I find that authors structured very well the paper, in such a way that is easy to follow. However, there are some concern that could be improved for a higher quality in the final document. 1. Research question and literature review, argumentation of hypothesis are well explained and structured, in line with the hypothesis proposed by the authors. On page 6, line 114, the authors explain that the “types of helping were chosen to represent a wide array of motivational and situational aspects…”. How were they chosen? How was the representativeness decided or what was the criteria? 2. The potential differences in experimental effects between individual and groups are only introduced on page 11, when the studies are presented. The authors should previously argument the decision of introducing it. 3. Study 1a, page 12, line 266, is not clear why 6 out of 7 vignettes were reported in the manuscript. 4. For the vignette “matching others”, and “changing amount” study 1b, the results might be affected by an anchoring effect. The authors could explain how was that considered or not? 5. If for the Study 1b, the authors calculated the sample power, given the considerable sample size, it should also be calculated for the study 1b, where the sample size was smaller. 6. For study 1a it is not indicated what was the reward of the participants in the study, as for study 1b, it is specified that the participants received 2$. 7. ANOVA analysis relies on normality assumptions. The authors should provide a test of normality to justify such tests. 8. I recommend including the direct effects and the interaction effect in a table as supplementary file. It would be much easier to flag the relevant results for the three studies. 9. The sentence starting at line 502 is not clear. Please rephrase. 10. There is no information what is the level of prosociality or the previous experience on prosocial behaviours of the participants in the study. When studying perceived situation, it is an important factor to control for. 11. Formal aspects: in some cases, the brackets are not closed (). 12. References list are not in the PlosOne format (Vancouver style). Please revise. Reviewer #2: This paper examines how type and amount of help contribute to the impression that third parties have about helpers. This is an interesting issue. The paper could make progress in understanding how humans make evaluations about other’s morality. However, I have some concerns that I describe below. 1- In the first part of the manuscript I miss more information about the specific contribution of the study. What is the difference between this study and previous research efforts? I also miss convincing initial arguments about the relevance of selected variables. 2- As the authors reported on page 4, first paragraph, research has demonstrated that negative behaviors are more influential in explaining moral judgments than positive ones. However, they focus on positive behaviors (helping) without providing a convincing explanation or justification in terms of contribution to knowledge. Why, if the negative has more influence, does the manuscript focus on the positive? 3- Regarding the influence of “amount” on impression, there are previous studies that reported lack of significant impact (pages 5-6). Thus, what is the contribution of the current study? More specific information is needed to evaluate the current contribution. 4- I also have doubts about the contribution of the study to previous literature in other propositions: the role of emotions (pages 6-7); empathy (page 7); pure-mixed motives (pages 7-8); direct vs indirect help (pages 8-9); costs (page 9): public vs. private (pages 9-10); norms (page 10); equal vs. unequal allocations (pages 10-11); and upward vs. downward (page 11). In all these propositions, there are previous research efforts. It is not clear what is the specific contribution of the manuscript. On page 11 (first full paragraph), the authors explain their rationale. It is, however, a short paragraph. There is no significant information about the contribution to knowledge. 5- One important concern is related to the research design. The authors carried out three studies with different combination of vignettes. There is no information about the rationale underlying this design. Why? What is the intention of authors with this design? Why does this design allow advances in knowledge? Some aspects are provided (e.g., on page 26) but more effort is necessary to provide significant and substantive arguments related to the decision-making. 6- Thus, I urge the authors to describe the contribution in detail (comparing the current manuscripts with previous ones); explain the logic underlying the decisions about selected variables; and explain the decision-making about the design (why these studies and their format) in terms of contribution to knowledge and solid response to the research questions. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Type and amount of help as predictors for impression of helpers PONE-D-20-26816R1 Dear Dr. Erlandsson, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I have now revised the manuscript with the suggested changes inserted. I would like to thank the authors for responding and including all the questions addressed during the revision process. I believe the manuscript now is more clear to the readership and some important issues have been address in the methodology part. On my behalf, the manuscript is ready to be published in its actual form. Reviewer #2: Dear authors, thank you for considering my comments and for the opportunity to read this manuscript. I appreciate the contribution but also the solid efforts to replicate previous findings. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-26816R1 Type and amount of help as predictors for impression of helpers Dear Dr. Erlandsson: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Valerio Capraro Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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