Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-29375 “Impact of social isolation due to COVID-19 on the seasonality of pediatric respiratory diseases” PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nascimento, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 27 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The current manuscript describes the seasonality of pediatric upper respiratory infections and the impact of the COVID-19 on the incidences. The report is written in understandable English. The topic is current as the pandemic is still going strong globally. The authors however have some difficulties in presenting the results and the discussion in relation to current knowledge remains vague. I have some questions and comments to be addressed by the authors: 1. Abstract. I’d like the authors to comment shortly about the change in the seasonality that was observed. For example: the social isolation guideline decreased majorly pediatric hospitalizations due respiratory infections. As now the conclusion only states that seasonality was interfered. 2. Abstract line 60, correct COVID-10 to COVID-19. 3. Abstract lines 61 and 63. I would suggest the authors to redefine this statement as now it is unclear, and the final message needs to be more precise. 4. Introduction: I would like to hear more about the social restrictions implemented in Brazil to battle covid-19. For example, were day care centers or pre schools closed in the study area? 5. Introduction line 86: the authors aim to report the prevalence of the hospitalizations, however exact numbers are given and no pediatric population size for the area has been given. Incidence would be more suitable in this given context or if population size is unclear then rates should be interpreted. 6. Methods first chapter: The size of the pediatric population in the area could be provided and the profile of the hospital should be mentioned as primary, secondary or tertiary level center. 7. Methods line 103. The exact grouping of the ICD-10 codes into each subcategory should be specified. 8. Methods line 111. The results of these analysis are not shown. Please provide these, as in the results line 146 the authors state evidence of the association was seen… p<0.001, which is not enough. 9. Methods line 120-121. Please provide the version of the R software and the names of the packages that were used. 10. Results table 1, the length of hospital stay is in Portuguese, please translate to English. 11. Results: I’d personally would like the authors to present more results, as now, mostly the results section is only stating what the tables and figures contain, instead of picking results up 12. In order the compare the effect of the lockdown the table 1 could compare the lockdown period to non-lockdown period. 13. The figure 1 is understandable and clear but the resolution of the image is poor and the numbers small 14. The figure 2 is hard to read as the lines are too close to each other. This figure could benefit from. My suggestion is that the authors could consider presenting the figures 1 and 2 together for example as a stacked area chart, where the number and trends of monthly admissions and the reasons for admission could be seen. 15. Results line 137: The adjusting could be described shortly here. Crude report showed xx.x and when adjusted with gender and age the adjusted xxx was xxx. This would benefit the reader majorly. Although I give credit for using confidence intervals here. 16. When adjusting any statistical models the rational behind the selection of the covariates included in the adjusted model should be presented in the methods and explained, why these variates were taken into the model. 17. Discussion: lines 185-187 could be removed. 18. Lines 200 to 203 have no references. I’d suggest the authors to cite for example: -Seasonal Influenza Activity During the SARS-CoV-2 Outbreak in Japan JAMA 2020 May 19;323(19):1969-1971. doi: 10.1001/jama.2020.6173. - Does COVID-19 infection impact on the trend of seasonal influenza infection? 11 countries and regions, from 2014 to 2020 Int J Infect Dis 2020 Aug;97:78-80. doi: 10.1016/j.ijid.2020.05.088. Epub 2020 May 31. - Effect of Social Distancing Due to the COVID-19 Pandemic on the Incidence of Viral Respiratory Tract Infections in Children in Finland During Early 2020 Pediatr Infect Dis J. 2020 Jul 28. doi: 10.1097/INF.0000000000002845. Online ahead of print. 19. The newly published results from other countries on the incidences of respiratory infections during social isolation could be discussed in relation to the results in this study. For example: - Effect of Social Distancing Due to the COVID-19 Pandemic on the Incidence of Viral Respiratory Tract Infections in Children in Finland During Early 2020 Pediatr Infect Dis J. 2020 Jul 28. doi: 10.1097/INF.0000000000002845. Online ahead of print. - Social Distancing for COVID-19 and Diagnoses of Other Infectious Diseases in Children Pediatrics. 2020 Sep 2;e2020006460. doi: 10.1542/peds.2020-006460. Online ahead of print. 20. Conclusion is sound and based on the provided results. However the authors could improve the result and the discussion. In conclusion the authors should address the methodological problems, the issues in presenting the results and how the results are discussed. Reviewer #2: PLOS ONE manuscript review Impact of social isolation due to COVID-19 on the seasonality of pediatric respiratory diseases This is an important paper that highlights the effect of public health strategies instituted to control the spread of COVID-19 globally in 2020. It highlights that these strategies yielded an overall reduction in hospitalisations due to lower respiratory tract infections especially in the under 5 age groups. My comments below for the authors to consider:- Abstract: Rephrase the sentence….. we will only know if there is a change in behaviour observed in 2020, it will also influence the seasonality of 2021 with the continuity of results for…… Methods Line 94: Patients aged 0 to 17 years and 11 months….. On the results sections, the highest age recruited was 17 years; probably delete the 11 months part on the methodology or just state children under 18 years were recruited. Line 103 and 10: regarding groupings of the various diagnosis, how was this classification arrived at? Please see my comment below regarding this classification in Table 1. Results Table 1:” to” is missing in the rows reading age group Age group: 0 a 2 years old 3 a 5 years old 6 a 10 years old 11 a 17 years old Diagnosis I am not clear why the diagnosis of pneumonia is separate from Bronchopneumonia instead of classifying these two categories under pneumonia. Also the diagnosis of bronchitis versus bronchiolitis, how were the two diagnoses differentiated especially in the younger children age-group? It is unclear in the results section the various viral aetiologies depicted under viral pneumonia yet we see this on line 202 in the discussion. The row that reads …Tempo de internação (dias).. please write this in English Line 137-that starts…..In the adjusted model,….A table showing the results of this analysis will be useful. Figure 1: This trend is for all groups. Possible to show the trend for different age groups in Figure1? Figure 2: Classify pneumonia and Bronchopneumonia together (please see my comments above). Also make the markings on the graph clearer. Figure 3: see my comments above on the classification of the various diagnosis. Please make the labels of figure 3 clear. Also rephrase line 147 to 149 which is the narrative for figure 3 Discussion Line 165- again pneumonia and bronchopneumonia terminologies… Please see my comments above regarding these two terminologies Conclusion: This is well written and summarises the overall take-home message well from this study ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-20-29375R1 Impact of social isolation due to COVID-19 on the seasonality of pediatric respiratory diseases. Dear Dr. Nascimento: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Brenda M. Morrow Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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