Peer Review History
Original SubmissionAugust 4, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-24280 Predictive value of preoperative CT for postoperative pancreatic fistula in patients following pancreaticoduodenectomy PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kim, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 02 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this article, the authors conducted a retrospective analysis of 107 patients who underwent pancreaticoduodenectomy (PD). They performed univariate and multivariate logistic regression analyses to identify independent risk factors for POPF. They demonstrated that risk factors for POPF (grade B and C) were larger area of visceral fat and pathology other than pancreatic adenocarcinoma or pancreatitis. This research provides us new insights of preoperative CT for postoperative pancreatic fistula in patients following pancreaticoduodenectomy. However, the study has some weakness and concerns before the paper can be published. Major revisions: 1. For the “Material and methods” part, the authors did not explain the authors did not explain the uniform standard for tissue sample texture. Moreover, the pancreatic texture of all subjects was examined by the surgeon, which is too subjective. 2. In Table 4, those variable whose p-value was over 0.05 should be listed. Reviewer #2: This is a study on the prediction and evaluation of pancreatic leakage after pancreatoduodenectomy, which has certain clinical application.However, in this study, the interval between CT detection and surgery was the longest about 50 days, which significantly affected the evaluation effect.If the interval is about a week, the credibility is much higher. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-20-24280R1 Predictive value of preoperative CT for postoperative pancreatic fistula in patients following pancreaticoduodenectomy PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kim, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 27 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: This is a well written paper looking for associations that lead to post operative pancreatic fistulas, which is an important sequelae following pancreaticoduodenectomy. I have a few comments: 1. I agree with reviewer 1, that points out that pancreatic texture hardness/softness is a subjective measure, though from clinical experience I agree that a 'soft' pancreas is more likely to lead to a leak. I accept that the authors have responded to the reviewer's comments: I would add that perhaps the authors add a sentence or two in the limitations of their work that this is a subjective measure, and more work needs to be done to be able to characterise pancreatic tissue density (and also reference the work relating to MR elastogram etc) within the actual paper. 2. Can the authors just clarify which multivariate logistic regression was used, it is mentioned it is stepwise, but was it forwards or backwards entered? 3. I may have missed it in the text, but re: the CT performed preoperatively, I note that the median time was 14 days, but why was it done? i.e. as part of the preoperative staging? Secondly re: CT postoperatively, I note that the exclusion criteria was any CTs beyond 50 days were excluded, but again in your unit did all your patients have CT scans post operatively, or was it due to post operative management looking for a complication? 4. I think the title is slightly misleading, as the title suggests that the CT scans preoperatively can identify potential patients who develop postoperative pancreatic fistula - however even in the abstract the finding of patients with pathologies other Pancreatic adenocarcinoma or pancreatitis is a significant finding (but not a radiological diagnosis!). Hence I would probably alter the title to reflect factors that may lead to POPF instead?? Reviewer #4: The authors assessed the risk factor of postoperative pancreatic fistula in patients who underwent pancreaticoduodenectomy (PD). Multivariate analysis showed the larger area of visceral fat and pathology other than pancreatic ductal adenocarcinoma (PDAC) or pancreatitis as risk factor of clincially-relevant POPF (CR-POPF). Authors reported that anthropometric measurement might be useful in detecting high risk patients with CR-POPF. The following issues need to be thoroughly reviewed. Major problems 1. Authors should analysis the previous established risk factor of CR-POPF such as drain amylase fluid on postoperative day 1 if they use final diagnosis of the tumor. 2. Authors should show the clinical characteristics of patients who with visceral obesity and those without. 3. In discussion (Page 11, Line 18), author speculated that the difficulty of operation in patients with greater visceral fat is the reason of high rate of CR-POPF. Do authors have objective data that shows the difficulty of pancreas anastomosis. 4. Moreover, do authors have objective data that excessive visceral fat is associated with insulin resistance and other morbidities in their study. 5. In discussion (Page 12, Line 18), authors stated “The mechanism by…soft pancreas parenchyma”. Is it correct? Many studies reported that PDAC decreased the risk of POPF. 6. Please describe about drain management in Method. Did authors place drain in all patients? And, did authors measure amylase level of drain fluid in all patients? 7. In statistics, authors used P-values of <0.05 on univariate analyses to select factors that were entered into multivariate analysis. This cut off of p-value is not common so that author should explain why they used this method. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #3: Yes: Franscois Runau Reviewer #4: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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