Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 10, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-21446 A computational model of liver tissue damage and repair PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Adhyapok, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. The paper was sent to three reviewers, whose comments are appended below. I would be happy to reconsider the paper again after the manuscript is revised to address those comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 26 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript is a solid piece of science which I encourage publication with a minor set of changes that I think will improve its impact and reach. Line 94: Here is the first time pericentral and periportal are mentioned but, as scientist not well versed in anatomy, I would appreciate if you could briefly describe what it means the first time these terms are introduced. 115, 781: TNF-alpha 130: This interesting discussion about tipping scales and sudden transitions would be improved by some references about phase transitions from physics, pointing the reader to similar work (for instance percolation or infection dynamics) 142: The list of Celullar Automata references is quite short. It would be interesting to mention Forest Fire CA publications, as these recapitulate a conceptually similar process (3 states: empty, vegetation and fire, fire can propagate to neighboring vegetation and consumes itself creating an empty cell...) but also majority rule CAs and Ising model among others. 154: I would encourage the authors to move the mention that cells can indeed recover after being stressed here from the discussion were it currently is (line 782). The existence of such process indicates possible limitations of this model and needs to be justified as the model is explained. 181: It would be useful to state here directly that the automaton is synchronous. Do you think these results would be afected by using an asynchronous CA? There are families of solutions in lateral inhibition CAs that are artifacts caused by synchrony in the CA. 294: Bar = 300 microm 299, 590, 621: Different figures are given for necrosis to start, lower bounds of 1-2 hours and that it has begun by 4 h. However, if I understand correctly, the simulations use a beta probability that gives 5h average necrosis time, right? Given the interest to use experiments to inform the modeling, I would encourage the authors to consolidate these statements and offer an explanation as to why is 5h chosen. 432 and others: when there are phasepaces shown, could you describe how do you sample the space? how many simulations and is there any interpolation involved? 838: Any libraries or only custom code? Additional notes: I think a very interesting aspect that is not explored very deeply in the manuscript is the spatial structure that can emerge even in stochastic CAs, especially in the parameter space where there is coexistence of cellular states. Correlation functions between sites (like with Ising model) or information content / structural analysis could be used to quantify patterning and structure. It would also provide a prediction to match with real data and further validate the model. Reviewer #2: This manuscript by Adhyapok et. al presents a study drug injected APAP and how this can both lead to cell proliferation and cell death and tissue damage. In order to do this they construct a simple model, where cells can take 1 of 3 states, and introduce a rule where one cell can switch to another state dependent on specific rates. Using a 1-dimensional model, where every cell has two neighbours, they investigate parameter combinations, that induce the critical transitions from proliferating states to tissue damage states. They outline the ratio between key parameters that are important for this transition, and finds the critical threshold of damage pattern propagation. I believe that the work on a complex system, using a simple model to gain insight in the most important cellular mechanisms can be of great value, however I feel that many of the results in general can be stated much more clearly and more rigorously. General comments: The manuscript could be rewritten and many sections shortened and made much sharper. I feel it is sometimes difficult to figure out where the authors are heading with entire sections. Also I would make the figures sharper and probably move a large number of the current figures into supplementary material in order to focus on the real essential figures. Furthermore I would add error bars on several figures, and for instance add a colorbar to every heat map. Major revisions: 1) I don't think it is explained clearly why the 1D and 2D models are relevant for a problem that in reality is truly a 3D problem. I don't see why it should not be possible to carry out similar analysis in 3D and compare with the findings in lower dimensions. 2) Using rates, a cell will have an exponential waiting time to make a transition, however in reality there would probably be some time delay in this. The authors should address this, and show that it does not often occur that a specific cell changes state numerous times. 3) I find the results of coexistence states of great interest, but I would like to see how robust this result is to noise, for instance if there is a probability that a cell will be stressed even though the neighbourhood is not occupied by other stressed cells. 4) The majority of simulations are done with N being below 20. Why is it not realistic to consider N in one or two orders of magnitude larger? Would coexistence be more probable in this case? 5) Even though the comparison between experiments and modelling is nice, I fail to see convincing evidence that this model actually gives insight into the nature of liver damage. Does it produce testable predictions? Reviewer #3: This contribution by Adhyapok et al. presents a computational model of hepatocyte behavior in the liver tissue after APAP induced liver damage. The manuscript models the progression of liver damage using a cellular automaton model and performs simulations of linear chains or grids of hepatocytes. Remarkably, model was informed with well-described experiments. This article carefully explores the parameter space for the three main parameters of the model and includes relevant predictions like a minimum healthy population size for tissue recovery or bistable states of tissue survival or death. Some comments are addressed to Authors for their consideration to improve this manuscript: 1. There are some typos and grammatical errors. Please check and correct them to improve the manuscript. Line 129: Substitute ";" by "question;" Line 126: Coma missing after "regeneration" Lines 115, 294, 781: Missing symbols Line 489: a space is missing before "an" Line 493: a space is missing before "values" Line 526: a space is missing "and" Line 607: a space is missing before "is" etc. 2. Please include the number of replicates used for each experiment (figures 2 and 3). 3. In the discussion section I missed an in-depth look at the impact of the model results on experimental observations. Please include some discussion on how these results would translate into an experimental context or the possible applications of the model results on the treatment of liver damage. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-20-21446R1 A computational model of liver tissue damage and repair Dear Dr. Adhyapok: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jordi Garcia-Ojalvo Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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