Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 23, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-22939 Elevated Coronary Artery Calcium scores are associated with tooth loss. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Donders, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Donders et al. describe the association between dental diseases and coronary artery calcium scores. While this is interesting and original research, reviewers propose critical points to be addressed proposed. Below you will find these reviewers' comments. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 05 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting and valuable manuscript that examines the correlation between age related dental pathology and coronary calcium score, which is known to be a marker for coronary artery disease and an independent predictor for myocardial infarction and sudden death. It is shown that the number of missing teeth in an older person is correlated with the coronary calcium score, and shows a stronger correlation than other markers of inflammation such as CRP. A sophisticated statistical approach (backwards analysis of variance) is used to determine whether absence of teeth is an independent predictor of a high coronary calcium score, and is not a coincidental finding attributable to coexisting conditions such as hypercholesterolemia, hypertension, smoking or male sex. The independent predictive value of tooth loss was most dramatic in patients who were edentulous. In patients with multiple missing teeth (3 to 19 missing out of the normal 32) the correlation with CAC was significant, but did not quite reach significance (P=0.076) when adjusted for the co-variables of age, male sex and hypercholesterolemia. Several other abnormalities -- periaptical lesions and mean alveolar bone loss, were also correlated with CAC. Examination of the mouth should be a part of every physical exam, and when the patient is edentulous, this fact is generally noted in the patient's chart. However, it is not routine for physicians internists, general practitioners or cardiologists to immediately think of coronary disease when they see a patient with who is edentulous. Moreover, the absence of multiple missing teeth is not normally noted in the chart, or considered in the differential diagnosis For these reasons, this article would be a useful addition to the literature. The paper is well written. Specific comments. Smoking is certainly a significant risk factor for coronary arter disease, and is known to produce atherosclerosis, which is a cause of coronary artery calcification. Do you know if smoking has a direct harmful effect on the gums which could lead to tooth loss? In Table II you could use symbols to highlight the P values that reach statistical signficance. For example the number of missing teeth increases with CAC in Table II and that has a significance lefel of 0.033 which is less than 0.05. One sentence in the first paragraph of page 13 is confusing. You say "versus 89% en 92%" (sic). Based on the comparison, it should be one value or the other. Delete the extraneous value. Also delete "en" which is not a word and must be a typing error. In the legend of Figure 3 you should say that "age, male sex and hypercholesterolemia accounted for most of the variance in CAC." Reviewer #2: Donders and co-workers investigated associations between dental pathologies obtained from panoramic radiographs and coronary artery calcium scores obtained by CT scans. The study is interesting and describes novel aspects. However, details of analyses are inadequately described, which makes the judgement of the quality difficult. Detailed comments: -Abstract, write out ACVD -CVD risk factors here include hypercholesterolemia, hypertension and diabetes. Were the diagnoses based on treatment and were all patients treated? -Table 2. Give the statistical test in the footnotes. Write out PA lesions. -Consider adding a histogram of the CAC parameter. -Table 3. It is not clear, how the final regression model was calculated. Did you include all dental parameters in the same model? Which parameters were categorical / continuous? Many of them are strongly correlated with each other. What is meant by ‘the mean number of dental pathologies’? -Did you do power calculations before the work, is the statistical power of this limited population adequate? -Considering the readers of the journal, you might consider revising the Discussion, it is a bit uninteresting and contains a lot of details on radiographic techniques and their comparisons. -Missing teeth as a predicting parameter of incident CVD has been published and it could be cited (Liljestrand JM, 2015). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Elevated Coronary Artery Calcium scores are associated with tooth loss. PONE-D-20-22939R1 Dear Dr. Marie-Chris Donders, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Luis Cordova Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The authors have addressed previous reviewer's comments increasing the clarity and value of this research. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: Thank you for the carefully done revision of the manuscriopt. The authors have adequately addressed my comments raised in a previous round of review and I do not have further criticism. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-22939R1 Elevated Coronary Artery Calcium scores are associated with tooth loss. Dear Dr. Donders: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Luis Cordova Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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