Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 15, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-21892 Characterizing Gait Pattern Dynamics during Symmetric and Asymmetric Walking using Time Series Analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Morgan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Overall the reviewers expressed some enthusiasm for this manuscript, but highlighted several areas that will benefit from additional clarity. Please carefully address each comment in your revision. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 25 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this manuscript, the authors use vertical ground reaction forces to differentiate symmetric and asymmetric walking patterns. They induce asymmetric walking using a split-belt treadmill. Their autoregressive (AR) modeling revealed differences between the symmetric and asymmetric walking conditions. TITLE I suggest that the title could be made clearer with revision, as “time series analysis” is quite vague (i.e., many different variables could be subject to time series analysis when investigating gait dynamics). ABSTRACT Lines 33 and 34: the authors suggest that new methods are needed to detect to detect changes in vertical GRFs during asymmetric gait, but also state that these changes are “commonly observed”. These statements seem to contradict one another. Line 42: I suggest using a colon rather than a dash to indicate the split-belt treadmill speeds. Line 44-45: this sentence requires revision for grammar and punctuation. INTRODUCTION The justification for this study is somewhat unclear to me. While I certainly agree with the authors that it is important to be able to quantify the asymmetry of gait in clinical populations. there are already many well-established ways to do this. It would be helpful if the authors could provide some perspective about why this particular approach may be better than existing approaches, or at least how this approach may provide unique information relative to others. The authors provide a broad introduction with regard to gait asymmetry, but it seems as though the primary interest is in leg loading and likely patients with knee injuries (knee injury is listed as specific exclusion criteria). If this is true, I suggest that they could provide a more focused introduction about how this technique could specifically be useful for certain populations. They authors make a couple of references to the ability of AR modeling to “visually” detect differences in gait parameters. Further clarification would be helpful, as it is not clear to me what this means or why it is useful to detect a result “visually” when the same result can be expressed quantitatively. METHODS Line 115 – how was self-selected speed determined? Lines 159-161 – was any quantitative analysis performed to determine that AR(2) was the best fit model or was this done by visual inspection? A quantitative analysis would provide much stronger support for this model selection. RESULTS Were the left and right legs subjected to separate analyses? This is appears to be the case in Table 1. If the authors wish to analyze the legs separately, I suggest a two-way (leg x condition) ANOVA. DISCUSSION No comments. Reviewer #2: 1. Abstract a. Primary analysis: autoregressive modeling (previously used for running but not walking). b. Hypothesize that autoregressive model coefficients better detect gait asymmetries than peak vGRF magnitude. c. Used second order AR model d. The asymmetric condition notation is confusing and could be presented more clearly. Perhaps (Side 1: XXX & Side 2: XXX). 2. Introduction a. Gave good justification for the importance of quantifying gait asymmetry. b. Gave compelling reasons for using AR and its success in previous studies. c. Objective: “investigate how AR modeling could be used to both quantitatively and visually identify differences in gait pattern dynamics during symmetric and asymmetric walking.” i. Can you please clarify if by “visually”, you are referring to graphical interpretations or clinical assessments? ii. Induced asymmetric walking with instrumented split belt treadmill. d. Hypothesis: ARM model coefficients will detect differences in giat patterns based on vGRF peak patterns than peak mean vGRF magnitudes. i. Did you consider comparing RMS differences of interlimb vGRF? ii. Are there other measures that may isolate differences in separate phases of the gait cycle? Although mean peak vGRF is often used, it’s easy to see that it may not be the most sensitive measure. It might be good to address why you chose to only consider the mean magnitude. 3. Methods a. Gait Analysis i. Were the trial orders randomized? If not, how do you mitigate potential learning effects? ii. Line 118: “walked at an asymmetric gait” is awkward. iii. From my understanding, individuals only have 10 strides in an asymmetric condition before data is collected. Is the goal to collect data in a transient or steady state condition? If steady-state is the goal, I would be hesitant to say this is steady-state. b. Peak vGRF Extraction c. Autoregressive Modeling & Analysis i. Modeling was described very clearly! d. Statistical Analysis 4. Results a. Figure 4b: interesting that some people have “more stable” gait patterns in the 0.75 m/s Left condition than they are in the symmetric condition. Do you have an explanation for that? b. Lines 233 -235: are these interlimb differences, differences across conditions, or differences between your calculation methods. Would be helpful to explain. c. Table 1: Can you provide more explanation to make the information in this table more clear? i. Are these Mean and distance parameters form the AR models? Or are they differences in mead vGRF magnitude? ii. Which comparisons are the p values for? Is this symmetric vs both asymmetric? iii. I see the note about ABC for grouping variables that are not significantly different from one another. It might be more useful to just see the asymmetric conditions compared back to the symmetric. 5. Discussion a. Lines 244 – 249 & figure 4b: I see pretty clear clusters for the left 1.5 and symmetric conditions, but the left 0.75 seems to be all over the place. How do you explain that? b. Discussion section would benefit from a more thorough comparison of the different symmetry conditions and model parameters. For example, discussing why some models were more or less stable. Did the AR modeling differentiate all asymmetric conditions from the symmetric? Was this method able to differentiate differences between the asymmetric conditions? Are there any clear metrics or measures that a clinical could take away from this when treating patients (i.e. if they are asymmetric, but “more stable” than most symmetric adults, how does that affect their treatments)? 6. Conclusions a. I agree with the overall conclusion and think this work supports it. However, it would be nice to have more clarification/interpretation of the results between numbers on a graph and the big picture (AR modeling is good) at the end. 7. Figures a. The figures appear blurry in the pdf but clear in the download. Be sure to confirm hat the clear ones are used in the final publication. b. Table 1: It’s best practice to keep significant figure or decimal places consistent in tables. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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