Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-19103 An Institutional Analysis of Graduate Outcomes Reveals a Contemporary Workforce Footprint for Biomedical Master’s Degrees PLOS ONE Dear Dr. McKinney, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 15 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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It would also be helpful to describe the demographics of your population, selection criteria for the programs, and average debt. Similar to the analysis that was done with the international and national graduates it would be interesting to know if there were any differences in the outcomes by gender or race. Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper adds to the current work on biomedical science career paths and navigation and importantly focuses on programs for MS graduates, rather than PhDs. This is a segment that is missing in the current literature, and the authors do a nice job of describing the project and outlaying the results. Some areas to revise for clarity-- 1. Abstract line 3: "one to two year" instead of "one-two" 2. In some areas, it shows "masters degrees" or "Master's degrees" or "master's degrees" 3. Similarly, there are a lot of words that are often hyphenated "full-time" "short-term" "cross-functional" "long-term" 4. Introduction paragraph 1 sentence 2, "most" and "others" could be more specific. 5. Introduction paragraph 3 lines 1-3, need citation. If it is related to the rest of the paragraph, you could move up the [9] to end of the first sentence and then have a transitional word for sentence 2 to let the reader know these are tied together. 6. Tried to access citation 10 for question re: page 4, but the link in reference list goes to error. Question is about the NSF data--is this master's degrees in total or on the way to doctoral degree. Many institutions are now awarding MS on the way to PhD or if the student exits the program where previously they were only offering a PhD for full completion. 7. The link for citation 11 also does not open. 8. I would argue this is not a longitudinal study as there are two data collection points over a short time. Two years seems like a long time when conducting a study, but when it involves career paths, it is a very short time. This seems more like a repeated measures study. One should not expect a graduate to have changed careers (sectors or industries drastically or to have increased significantly in job responsibility) within 2 years of obtaining a master's degree. Where graduates initially go is key, as are useful skills obtained from graduate program. The point on p 10 re: using terminal MS programs as stepping stones is central to the authors' points. I would add that the workforce experience or capstone projects also allow the students to connect and network with industry leaders, which paves the way for the transition to a position and career path or perhaps connecting with someone who may fill the role of a mentor to the new graduate. 9. p6, line 6, more clear to say "(the definitions we used for these assignments are provided for reference in Table 1)." 10. In results section, chi square symbol is replaced with box. 11. A few places throughout need comma or have extra space. 12. p11, last line of first paragraph, replace "education" with "educator" or "teaching" for clarity 13. p12, last paragraph, is it that the graduates used jobs with research functions intentionally as gateway to other responsibilities or are those the only jobs a graduate with MS can access and then needs to gain experience before finding another job? 14. p13, line 4 "managerial" 15. p13, end of paragraph 1, internships give graduate opportunity to explore career but do not ensure they find career aligning with passions and goals. This is in part because internships are brief and have less responsibility and lower range of job tasks or that the student is still determining preferences and path. Also, jobs immediately after graduation or ones offered as internships are not often the ones students envision as long-term career. 16. p13, paragraph 2, line 6, "-level" not needed 17. p14, "were" not needed at end of next to last line of 1st paragraph. "with the remaining 8 pursuing...." 18. p14, paragraph 2, line 3, "of" not needed before "graduates" 19. p15, paragraph 2 line 1, add "visa" to "F1 student visa status" 20. Discussion is very brief. Were there any limitations to this study? More information on what to study next or important considerations needed. A point was made about this being important due to self-funding, but I would argue that if self-funded, it is important to the student this work be done but should be important to federal funding agencies and institutions if those are funding it. Additionally some work and programs are arguing the case that master's prepared graduates perform essential STEM functions and education should be financially supported. Last line about institutions needing to provide career development infrastructure and employer engagement--there is some research about the many institutions that do provide career development opportunities and resources. It may need to be revised or increased, but this statement indicates it is not being done. 21. p17 top line, '"is in line with" to "aligns with" Reviewer #2: This manuscript explores the significant issue around outcomes for students graduating with an MS degree from an academic medical center. In an era when many PhD graduates are pursuing a range of career outcomes, it begs the question whether for some of these careers, advanced study at the MS level would be a more direct route to the goal. This analysis helps to address this question, but a few improvements are suggested to the authors. • The manuscript begins with a statement of the results in the initial sentence. It would be better to frame the context of this work, the types of degrees earned in the biological sciences, and to define the terms terminal (vs. professional) MS degree. o Use of the word terminal implies PhD students who have left their doctoral programs and are now pursuing an MS. Is that the intended meaning? That would also influence the analyses looking at long term career goals. o Along these lines, some background of the 15 included degree-granting programs and the typical outcomes for which they try to prepare their graduates would be useful. Surely, not all MS degrees are created equal, with some focusing more on career outcomes immediately after graduation and others positioning graduates for further advanced study. • Figure 1 is drawn from NSF data, and readers are pointed toward NSF technical notes, but the reviewer advises inclusion of a brief statement indicating what types of institutions were included and what subfields are represented. • On page 7, the authors describe outcomes for 337 graduates across the programs with respect to the degrees they are currently pursuing. Given the stated goals upon matriculation, we would expect closer to 600 graduates in advanced degree programs. Reasons for the large discrepancy in the initial goals vs. the actual outcomes should be explored further in the discussion. • Some aspects of interpretation appear in the results and would be a better fit for the discussion, e.g. page 8 (last paragraph on page) and page 10 (top of page). • Page 9: change “very proportionate” to “proportional.” • Statistical outcomes – letter conversion introduced an error. Should the square boxes be replaced by chi-squared? • Do domestic and international graduates represent the same programs? How would this track back to the reviewer request for more information on goals for the graduates of each program? In other words, is the higher proportion of international grads heading to PhD programs in line with initially stated goals upon matriculation or program selection for MS programs that are more research-focused? • It would be helpful to know what sorts of career mentoring is available to students in each of the programs. It is briefly mentioned in a very specific case at the bottom of page 10, but further information on the sorts of assistance provided to the students and in which career domains would be helpful. This may help readers understand if certain outcomes are supported to a greater extent than others. • For the analysis looking at two year career status, can this be tracked back to initially stated career goals at the time of matriculation? Or were those data not yet collected for that cohort? Can it be provided for some of the graduates? o Also for these graduates who are in an advanced degree program after two years but not initially, is it possible to determine if there was an unsuccessful application cycle in between, thereby necessitating the gap year? • Figure 5c is probably adequate as text, but if there are no limits on figures, do not object to keeping it. • Recommend in the discussion spending some time thinking about the transferability of the findings and the relevance of this work in the overall context of the biomedical workforce. • The data are mentioned as being available with restrictions, and are provided as a supplemental dataset, but I defer to the editorial staff to determine if the restricted dataset meets publication requirements. Overall, these are interesting findings, and with a bit of clarification of terms and context as well as some of the more nuanced analyses suggested above, this work is likely to be of interest to the readers of PLoS One. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Andrea M Zimmerman Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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