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PONE-D-20-00871 “You’re still worth it” The moral and relational context of politically motivated unfriending decisions in online networks PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Neubaum, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 16 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript describes a project focused on the moral foundations of political unfriending behavior on social media, providing evidence from two experimental studies conducted in Germany. I find the topic to be timely and the proposed theoretical development intriguing, with a potential to contribute to the growing body of literature on disconnective behaviors on social media. Although I am in principle supportive of publication of this manuscript, I have some serious concerns about its execution, particularly with regards to the experimental design and analytical strategy. First, although I think that experimental work is highly needed in this area, one of the key issues facing this study is its reliance on self-reported, hypothetical unfriending, rather than the actual unfriending behavior. Although I appreciate that the authors have noted this as a weakness, I still feel that there may be a long (and winding) road between “hypothetical unfriending” in survey context and the actual unfriending behavior on Facebook. Given the within-subjects design in Study 1, I can speculate about several confounding issues that could be at play, including social desirability, demand characteristics, etc. Second, the current experimental designs do not allow us to make inferences such as “moral judgement is a crucial driver of the unfriending decision” since no other drivers of this behavior were tested, and that morality was also made very salient in the study context. Indeed, perhaps the biggest problem in the study design is a lack of meaningful control (or let’s say comparison) groups that would test the power of moral judgements vs. other factors (e.g. perceptions of offensiveness or incivility). Indeed, a sizeable number of respondents report unfriending others for reasons unrelated to political and ideological disagreement (10-20%), but rather caused by incivility or information overload. Perhaps the authors should emphasize more that their sole focus is on moral outrage as a consequence of encountering political disagreement, rather than more general politically-focused exposure on Facebook. Third, although I am supportive of the authors theoretical agenda, I still find it little too exploratory and perhaps undertheorized. While the current data does not allow much more theoretical space, I would still try to consult few more studies on unfriending that could aid further theory development (e.g. John & Gal, 2018; Krämer, Hoffmann, & Eimler, 2015; Schwartz & Shani, 2016). Fourth, I feel that the analytical approaches used could be clearer and perhaps utilize interaction terms between the key predictor variables and the past unfriending behaviors. I would personally use more graphs and charts to demonstrate the differences between the experimental groups, for example. If the authors are keen to further develop their theoretical agenda, I would suggest using a different set of methods, which could provide a more in-depth understanding of the cognitive and affective processes at work. Furthermore, since most users today use a mobile app to access their Facebook profiles, I feel that the participants should be able to utilize their smartphones as mnemonic devices when answering the questions. I suggest looking into think-aloud protocols (Eveland & Dunwoody, 2000) and studies that use mobile media elicitation (Kaufmann, 2018; Robards & Lincoln, 2017). Minor issues: The manuscript still feels like an early draft and would benefit from a more structured and focused approach, and a greater attention to detail. For instance, there are still typos in several places in the manuscript (e.g. p. 10, “age raged from 18 to 75”) and the tables with bivariate correlations use a comma as a decimal separator, while the other use a decimal point. Since the manuscript is English, a decimal point should be used. I am also unsure whether the hypotheses H1a-d really need to be proposed and tested, as they are not the main focus of the study. I would recommend either discarding them, or labeling them as separate hypotheses, as Facebook use and political extremism have very little semantic similarity, for example. I also feel that all RQs and hypotheses needs to be articulated more clearly and preferably presented in a visual form too, as a process model or similar. Regarding the samples used in the studies, more information needs to be provided about the recruitment strategy, incentives and the demographics, comparing the participants to a general profile of German Facebook users. For instance, Study 1 seems to have a rather strong gender bias, so it would be good to discuss that further, especially in the light of the specific scenarios tested (and political ideology too). References: Eveland, W.P., Jr., & Dunwoody, S. (2000). Examining information processing on the World Wide Web using think aloud protocols. Media Psychology, 2, 219-244. John, N. A., & Gal, N. (2018). “He’s got his own sea”: Political Facebook unfriending in the personal public sphere. International Journal of Communication, 12, 2971–2988. Kaufmann, K. (2018). The smartphone as a snapshot of its use: Mobile media eliciation in qualitative interviews. Mobile Media & Communication, 6(2), 233-246. Krämer, N., Hoffmann, L., & Eimler, S. (2015). Not breaking bonds on Facebook–mixed–methods research on the influence of individuals’ need to belong on ‘unfriending’ behavior on Facebook. International Journal of Developmental Science, 9(2), 61-74. Robards, B. and Lincoln, S. 2017. Uncovering longitudinal life narratives: scrolling back on Facebook. Qualitative Research. 17(6): 715 -730. doi.org/10.1177/1468794117700707 Schwarz, O., & Shani, G. (2016). Culture in mediated interaction: Political defriending on Facebook and the limits of networks individualism. American Journal of Cultural Sociology, 4(3), 385-421. Reviewer #2: Review on PONE-D-20-00871 I think the authors’ study is carefully designed and well-executed experiment whose research aim is clear with good flow. However, I have some concerns over the manuscript as follows, Major concern over the main argument First and foremost, I am not sure whether this study secures satisfactory level of novelty or breakthrough. Novel contributions in the authors’ argument seem unconvincing, at least, to me. There are several studies reporting the importance of morality in political decision-making and behaviors; and some previous works reported ‘unfriending on Facebook’ is triggered by political disagreements. Of course, the authors aim to try link the two sets of studies, but I am not sure the authors’ efforts to link the two sets of findings could be accepted as theoretical breakthrough. While not exactly the same, there are some previous studies examining the effect of political thoughts or evaluations on ‘unfriending’ behaviors. While morality closely considered in this manuscript is distinguished from other predictors explaining unfriending behaviors on Facebook in former studies, I think the theoretical uniqueness may not so eminent. Five dimensions of morality, already acknowledged and widespread in the field of political decision-making and behaviors, are political enough. In order to be published, the authors have to convince people (like me) why this study takes theoretically novel step. I truly believe this manuscript is well-written with good flow, but well-written paper is not necessarily a novel study. When revising the manuscript, I do hope the authors put very persuasive reasons why the authors’ theoretical attempt should be acknowledged as novel, contributing to the advance of knowledge over the unfriending behaviors with moral reasons. The authors’ revision would be heavy because such efforts should appear in the Introduction, Literature Review, and Discussion sections (even in the Abstract section), but I believe such theoretical revision would be fruitful. Minor points but please take it seriously when revising the manuscripts Second, when reporting results of MANOVA, I think the authors missed to report Wilks Lamda or other equivalent statistics. Additionally I think other statistical approach might be better than MANOVA because the five moral dimensions would be correlated with each other. In other words, correlations between residuals of dependent measures would be treated with other statistical methods (e.g., SUR, SEM, or random-effect models). Given that the authors already relied on SEM when testing H4, I think this suggestion might not be so difficult for the authors to adopt. Third, the role of closeness variable in testing H4 is not clearly to me. Basically, the authors assumed that ‘closeness’ is the exogenous cause triggering mediators (i.e., Informational, Emotional, or Instrumental support) and outcomes (i.e., unfriending or blocking behavior). However, I think such mediational mechanism does not make much sense, and the closeness would take a moderating role influencing the relationships between “Informational, Emotional, or Instrumental support” and “unfriending or blocking behavior.” As reported in Table 5, most effects were found in direct effects (by the way, I calculate direct effects by taking the difference between total effect and sum of indirect effects), meaning three mediators do not well explain the relationship between closeness and both behaviors. Instead, for instance, what about hypothesizing the effect of emotional support on unfriending would be augmented under high closeness condition? Minor but important: Fourth, The authors posted online supplementary material at OSF, but there would be some technical problems. For example, when I clicked Table A1 on page 11, the page was not present: “The file "Moral Unfriending Study 1 and 2 - Supplementary Analyses.pdf" stored on OSF Storage was deleted via the OSF. It was deleted on Fri Jan 10 12:13:02 2020 UTC.” Other links are similar. Please check the status and please provide the supporting materials for better understanding of the readers’ manuscript. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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“You’re still worth it” The moral and relational context of politically motivated unfriending decisions in online networks PONE-D-20-00871R1 Dear Dr. Neubaum, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In general, I am quite satisfied with the revisions that the authors made to their manuscript in line with the reviewers comments. I still feel that the quality of writing could be improved a bit and that the research could be presented more succinctly. Related to that, I would personally discard H1-H4 and focus more on the other hypotheses and RQs. Since I know that the authors are keen on presenting the findings H1-H4, I suggest that they present them in a more descriptive form, without posing them as hypotheses and that their discussion is minimized. The contribution of this research should be more clearly stated in the discussion, preferably with some "big picture" view on the political implications of disconnection on social media. Reviewer #2: I found the revised manuscript is improved much better. While I have still a slight doubt over the novelty of the manuscript (see the first point in the previous round of review), I think the manuscript is a well-written paper with some noticeable findings. As a final word, I would like to suggest that the authors put clearer reasons why and how their study is discriminated from previous studies dealing with the similar, even though not identical, topics. I am unsure whether another round of review can remove the slight doubt in my mind; thus I would like to leave the final decision to the editors. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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