Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 13, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-21354 Sensitivity and specificity of rapid hepatitis C antibody assays in freshly collected whole blood, plasma and serum samples: a multicentre prospective study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Vetter, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers' comments can be found at the end of this email. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 07 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. We note that you have stated that you will provide repository information for your data at acceptance. Should your manuscript be accepted for publication, we will hold it until you provide the relevant accession numbers or DOIs necessary to access your data. If you wish to make changes to your Data Availability statement, please describe these changes in your cover letter and we will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a well conducted study evaluating the accuracy of two hepatitis C virus (HCV) rapid diagnostic tests (RDTs) in matched whole blood, plasma and serum samples compared to a WHO composite reference standard in three hospitals in Cambodia and Georgia. Statistical analysis was generally well conducted using the even too conservative approach of Bonferroni correction for p-values. I have a few questions, suggestions and comments: Main Points 1. Known HCV positive individuals from the site databases were contacted and invited to participate in the study. How many of these were confirmed HCV+ by CSR? It would be interesting to do a sensitivity analysis restricting to only people with unknown HCV-status as this is the typical target population for screening. 2. The number of testers for full blood was larger than for the other type of samples. Could this explain some of the discrepancy? 3. The whole analysis focusses on sensitivity and specificity of the RDTs. Besides random variation and variability due to the testers, these are expected to be fixed features of the tests regardless of the setting in which the test was used. On the other hand, because DAA provide cure in 99% of cases and are well tolerated, the most important thing for screening and for individuals is a high positive predictive value (PPV). Because prevalence of HCV was much lower in Cambodia as opposed to Georgia, I expect the PPV also to be much lower. It would be good to quantify this and give the probability of being HCV+ and viremic in people who are tested positive with these RDTs. 4. A number of potential reasons for the lower sensitivity of the tests in full blood and in Cambodia have been provided but are rather speculative (undetectable HCV-RNA, older infections, HCV subtype, number and expertise of the testers, etc.). Average age was much older in the Cambodia site and could be used as a proxy of duration of infection. Is it not possible to identify which of these factors are more likely to explain the discrepancy by formally modelling the false positive rate (e.g. by multivariable logistic regression analysis)? 5. Eleven participants have been excluded. It would be good to describe the reasons for exclusion. It is also unclear why 73 samples were excluded. If each participant provided 3 samples, why 73 and not 33? 6. How were the Bonferroni corrected p-values actually obtained? Bonferroni suggested to use a change of the threshold for significance from the original α to α/k where k is the number of tests performed. To my knowledge, a Bonferroni-corrected p-value as such does not exist. Maybe the authors used the Benjamini–Hochberg false discovery rate correction? It would be a better approach, as Bonferroni is known to be too conservative. 7. Prequalification WHO sensitivity criterion was narrowly missed by both tested RDTs in serum, and one of two in plasma. This should be mentioned in the Conclusions of the abstract and the tone of the whole paragraph consequently lowered. Other Points 1. Table 1. I would flip row and columns like in Table 2 (country as column headers). I would also include number and proportion of HCV+ by CRS and add percentages for all variables (HIV, on ARV, etc.) and p-values for difference between countries. 2. I would add a decimal figure to whole p-values even for those fully compatible with the null hypothesis (p=1.0). 3. Lines 259-261. Given the variability in sensitivity in whole blood with HCV RDTs seen in earlier studies, achieving lower but acceptable sensitivity in whole blood may be considered adequate performance for the two investigational RDTs evaluated here. Sentence seems a little too bald? Are not RDTs most useful as tests to be done outside of the laboratory on fingerstick whole blood samples? Reviewer #2: This is a well written manuscript addressing one of the important issues in hepatitis C diagnostics - the use of DBS for detection of anti-HCV. I would have much preferred for authors to include additional WHO-prequalified RDTs. Reviewer #3: This work shows the results of the comparison of a comprehensive number of two rapid diagnostic tests (RDT) for hepatitis C antibodies in the real world setting on a relatively high number of samples, and compared to a reference RDT and to a composite reference standard cconsisting in gold-stadard serology tests performed in the same samples. The paper is well-writen and the main conclusion is that the two evaluated RTDs perform well in the filed, perhaps with decreased sensitivity for whole-blood samples and for negative viremia samples. SPECIFIC COMMENTS: -In the abstract include the numbers for sensitivity and specificiy; and mention the performance with respect to the composite reference. - P5, L104-106. I would recommend movind this sentences ti the first paragraph in the "study design" - P5, L112: What were the methods used for VL determination? What was the LOD? Was VL performed in freshly frozen samples? Pelase, specify. - P5, L117. Plese detail inclusion and exclusion criteria. - P6, L167. Specify why samples were excluded, based in the inclusion/exclusion criteria. - P11, L204-205. The majority of FN in whole blood in Cambodia were HCV-1b..This is intringuing, do you have any potential explanation? What was the viral load for these samples? - P14, L245 ...mention test name / brand here. - P15, L254 other studies have also shown decreased sensitivity of Ab-RTDs after treatment-induced clearance in the clinical setting (see i.e. Carvalho-Gomes, Plos One, 2020) MINOR COMMENTS: p3, L58 ...ease of use and feasibility to... p4 L69-70 ...lower in samples from HCV infected patientes as compared samples from HI uninfected...//...majority of FN anti-HCV in samples from HIV infected patients did not... P16, L281...Because the sensitivity... P16, L283...feasibility of the RDTs... P16, L293 HCV genotypes... P17, L328 ...particularly... ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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PONE-D-20-21354R1 Sensitivity and specificity of rapid hepatitis C antibody assays in freshly collected whole blood, plasma and serum samples: a multicentre prospective study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Vetter, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses a final point raised by the reviewer regarding the data in one of the supplemental tables. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 25 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Mohamed Fouda Salama, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): You need to address the reviewer's comment regarding data in S. table 4 [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors addressed adequately all reviewers' query. My only last comment regards Supplemental Table 4. It would be useful to add the estimates of the OR and 95% CI and report the exact p-values rather than the cryptic '<0.05' ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-20-21354R2 Sensitivity and specificity of rapid hepatitis C antibody assays in freshly collected whole blood, plasma and serum samples: a multicentre prospective study Dear Dr. Vetter: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Mohamed Fouda Salama Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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