Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 5, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-20748 Estimating the real burden of disease under a pandemic situation: The SARS-CoV2 case PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Fernández-Fontelo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 21 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PONE-D-20-20748R1 Estimating the real burden of disease under a pandemic situation: The SARS-CoV2 case PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Fernández-Fontelo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. See referee report. Please submit your revised manuscript in one months timeframe if possible. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Paul K. Newton, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): This manuscript introduces a new observation model that accounts for underreporting of SARS-CoV2 cases by combining an SIR model with a stochastic observation model. In general the manuscript is clear and well written and the methods used are clearly described. I have two main comments though, the first one a technical concern, while the second one has to do with framing of the research. Firstly the proposed model seems to allow for double counting of infections to occur, because tested individuals are not taken out of the number of real cases (Xn). This is especially a concern on days that the number of counted cases is (almost) as high as the number of actual cases, because on those days none of the cases should carry over to the next day. In that light alpha also seems extremely high, with in many locations, more than 90% of the cases being carried over from one day to the next, which could easily lead to cases being counted many times. Related to this the underreporting rate (1-q) also seems low (below 0.5 in many cases). Especially compared to other estimates of the ascertainment rate (e.g. 0.23 [3]). A low underreporting rate with a high alpha would lead to cases being double counted extremely often. With regard to the framing of the research. In essence, the work presented here is seems to be about fitting a (simplified) SIR model to the outbreak, using an observation model. This is already an extremely rich field (e.g. 1-4) and many of those models do use observation models of various complexity. As far as I know the presented observation model is new in that it carries over cases from previous days using a stochastic process and the observation probability changes with the day of the week (q). Still I believe the work would be strengthened by a comparison with such models. Minor comments: - The logistic function should be represented with logit^-1 not logit (equation 10 and throughout the text) - In the first supplementary material, equation labels are inconsistent. The equations are labelled using S1.x, while they are referred to (in the text) as A.x. References: [1] Baguelin, M., S. Flasche, A. Camacho, N. Demiris, E. Miller, and W. J. Edmunds. ‘Assessing Optimal Target Populations for Influenza Vaccination Programmes: An Evidence Synthesis and Modelling Study’. PLoS Med 10, no. 10 (2013): e1001527. https://doi.org/10/gbfntv. [2] Birrell, Paul J., Richard G. Pebody, André Charlett, Xu-Sheng Zhang, and Daniela De Angelis. ‘Real-Time Modelling of a Pandemic Influenza Outbreak’. Health Technology Assessment (Winchester, England) 21, no. 58 (2017): 1–118. https://doi.org/10.3310/hta21580. [3] Hao, Xingjie, Shanshan Cheng, Degang Wu, Tangchun Wu, Xihong Lin, and Chaolong Wang. ‘Reconstruction of the Full Transmission Dynamics of COVID-19 in Wuhan’. Nature 584, no. 7821 (August 2020): 420–24. https://doi.org/10.1038/s41586-020-2554-8. [4] Hill, Edward M., Stavros Petrou, Simon de Lusignan, Ivelina Yonova, and Matt J. Keeling. ‘Seasonal Influenza: Modelling Approaches to Capture Immunity Propagation’. PLOS Computational Biology 15, no. 10 (28 October 2019): e1007096. https://doi.org/10/ghfqrm. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. 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I have two main comments though, the first one a technical concern, while the second one has to do with framing of the research. Firstly the proposed model seems to allow for double counting of infections to occur, because tested individuals are not taken out of the number of real cases (Xn). This is especially a concern on days that the number of counted cases is (almost) as high as the number of actual cases, because on those days none of the cases should carry over to the next day. In that light alpha also seems extremely high, with in many locations, more than 90% of the cases being carried over from one day to the next, which could easily lead to cases being counted many times. Related to this the underreporting rate (1-q) also seems low (below 0.5 in many cases). Especially compared to other estimates of the ascertainment rate (e.g. 0.23 [3]). A low underreporting rate with a high alpha would lead to cases being double counted extremely often. With regard to the framing of the research. In essence, the work presented here is seems to be about fitting a (simplified) SIR model to the outbreak, using an observation model. This is already an extremely rich field (e.g. 1-4) and many of those models do use observation models of various complexity. As far as I know the presented observation model is new in that it carries over cases from previous days using a stochastic process and the observation probability changes with the day of the week (q). Still I believe the work would be strengthened by a comparison with such models. Minor comments: - The logistic function should be represented with logit^-1 not logit (equation 10 and throughout the text) - In the first supplementary material, equation labels are inconsistent. The equations are labelled using S1.x, while they are referred to (in the text) as A.x. References: [1] Baguelin, M., S. Flasche, A. Camacho, N. Demiris, E. Miller, and W. J. Edmunds. ‘Assessing Optimal Target Populations for Influenza Vaccination Programmes: An Evidence Synthesis and Modelling Study’. PLoS Med 10, no. 10 (2013): e1001527. https://doi.org/10/gbfntv. [2] Birrell, Paul J., Richard G. Pebody, André Charlett, Xu-Sheng Zhang, and Daniela De Angelis. ‘Real-Time Modelling of a Pandemic Influenza Outbreak’. Health Technology Assessment (Winchester, England) 21, no. 58 (2017): 1–118. https://doi.org/10.3310/hta21580. [3] Hao, Xingjie, Shanshan Cheng, Degang Wu, Tangchun Wu, Xihong Lin, and Chaolong Wang. ‘Reconstruction of the Full Transmission Dynamics of COVID-19 in Wuhan’. Nature 584, no. 7821 (August 2020): 420–24. https://doi.org/10.1038/s41586-020-2554-8. [4] Hill, Edward M., Stavros Petrou, Simon de Lusignan, Ivelina Yonova, and Matt J. Keeling. ‘Seasonal Influenza: Modelling Approaches to Capture Immunity Propagation’. PLOS Computational Biology 15, no. 10 (28 October 2019): e1007096. https://doi.org/10/ghfqrm. ********** 7. 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Estimating the real burden of disease under a pandemic situation: The SARS-CoV2 case PONE-D-20-20748R2 Dear Dr. Fernández-Fontelo, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Paul K. Newton, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-20748R2 Estimating the real burden of disease under a pandemic situation: The SARS-CoV2 case Dear Dr. Fernández-Fontelo: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Paul K. Newton Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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