Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-20570 Evaluation of the undetected organ donor potential in Germany PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Schulte, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 05 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Proper revision will improve the readability of this work which demonstrates a difference between harvesting of appropriate organs by type of institution. The paper would be more impactful if it concluded with possible solutions that might improve organ harvest (donation) [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The fact that the highest proportion of potential organ donors can be found in category C hospitals is of paramount practical importance for addressing the problem of decreasing deceased donors in future. All over the manuscript the word donor has been implied to cadaver donors in Germany and for an international reader, it would be helpful to know what percentage of the total donors in Germany come from live donation and what is the temporal trends of that. In some regions of the world , increasing number of live donations, that have better outcomes, accounts for some of the decreased deceased donations. Reviewer #2: In their paper Evaluation of the undetected organ donor potential in Germany, Esser et al examined data from the German Federal Statistical Office to evaluate number of potential organ donors at German hospitals of different sizes and location and compared that to data from the German Foundation for organ donation.They found that the number of unidentified potential organ donors was greatest at so-called category C hospitals - those with ICUs but no neurological service - significantly in the largest quartile of category C hospitals. They found no diffidence in unidentified potential organ donors based on population size of the regions service by the hospitals. They concluded that about a third of the unmet demand for kidney transplants could be better met by better identification of potential donors in the larger category C hospitals. Their paper is interesting but raises several questions that need to be addressed. 1. Whose responsibility is it to identify potential organ donors? Is the problem that insufficient attention is being paid by hospital staff to notifying the DSO. Or is the problem that the DSO lacks the resources to perform outreach to these hospitals. The paper needs a little more background on the usual practices by which potential organ donors are identified and how their donation is realized. 2. The authors argue that the decline in organ donation is due to the number of unidentified potential donors. But they only provide one year of data and don’t show that that this number is growing. While their paper doesn’t make the case that this is the reason, it does seek to show that improving identification of potential donors would be a way to slow the decline. 3. Why were patients with brain injury not on mechanical in greater numbers at category C hospitals. Since the category C hospitals don’t have neurosurgery departments, is the implication was that these patients were not considered candidates for mechanical ventilation because their chances for recovery of meaningful brain function were considered poor? Is there any mechanism in Germany for transferring these patients to an A or B category hospital for neurosurgery evaluation? This is perhaps beyond the scope of the paper but gets to me next question... 4. What are the solutions for tapping this underutilized potential source of organ donors and what efforts are underway to do that. In my limited experience taking organ call at a US hospital, I often receive organ offers from potential donors who presented to small hospital, were identified with severe head trauma, intubated and sent to a larger center for neurosurgery evaluation. They are considered inoperable candidates and are referred to the organ procurement organization as potential organ donors. What is the system in place in Germany? 5. The title of the article needs to reflect the substance of the article. I would suggest something like “Evaluation of underidentification of potential organ donors in German Hospitals.” 6. At several points early in the paper, the authors refer to the different categories of hospitals as “clinics.” To avoid confusion and maintain consistency, I would refer throughout the paper to category A, B and C hospitals. 7. On line 101, the authors refer to the organ scandal of 2012 as a potential reason for the decline, but then without providing any background on the scandal, they say this doesn’t fit with the facts. Maybe better to take this reference out if it isn’t relevant. Otherwise they need some explanation of the scandal. 8. Why did they look at only one year’s worth of data, and why not chose a more recent year? 9. Line 191 please confirm the direction of the arrow.Are rural population really defined as “great than” 150 residents per square kilometer? Or should that be less than 10. Please define the term agglomeration for readers who are not demographers, or provide an example of such a region in Germany ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Evaluation of underidentification of potential organ donors in German hospitals PONE-D-20-20570R1 Dear Dr. , We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Larry Allan Weinrauch, MD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): It will be interesting to see their followup once more data becomes available from the DSO and whether efforts yield an increase in donations from the largest category C hospitals. It would be nice too see a chart with the differences in live related, live unrelated and cadaveric grafts Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I am satisfied with the answers. Still, it would be nice to have a figure to show the changes in deceased vs live donations in Germany in the comparison period. Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed my concerns and comments fully. It will be interesting to see their followup once more data becomes available from the DSO and whether efforts yield an increase in donations from the largest category C hospitals. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Bijan Roshan, MD Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-20570R1 Evaluation of underidentification of potential organ donors in German hospitals Dear Dr. Schulte: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Larry Allan Weinrauch Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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