Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 26, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-26747 Mutual cooperation and defection affect subsequent cooperation in direct reciprocity: Behavioral experiments and analysis using multilevel models. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Horita, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 16 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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I was unable to find another reviewer, but this review is very detailed - certainly more than the average review - therefore I feel confident making a decision based on this review and my own reading of the paper. Therefore, I would like to invite you to revise your work following the reviewer's comments. I am looking forward for the revision. Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Please change "female” or "male" to "woman” or "man" as appropriate, when used as a noun. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This article studies two multilevel models and their effectiveness in predicting the cooperation in direct and generalized reciprocity from two behavioral experiments. The results suggest that the model that takes into account both one's own previous action and one's partner's previous action predicts better, and observes several subtypes of behavioral strategies including tit-for-tat and win-stay-lose-shift. The overall motivation of the paper is quite interesting. The writing would benefit from additional clarifications on technical details. Other than the writing revisions, I believe this would require additional analyses to support several statements made in this article. The points of suggestion and concern is as follows: Line 176 Fig 1. The caption should be self-contained without referencing the main text. It is not informative enough. Please elaborate. Line 284. "v denotes the cooperative tendency". Please include more details. Does v range from 0 to 1, and refer to the probability to cooperate? Line 292. "mean 0 and standard deviation 10" should be "mean of 0 and standard deviation of 10" Line 315. "where lppd and pWAIC mean the log point-wise posterior predictive density and the effective number of parameters". Please provide more details for lppd and pWAIC. It is hard for the readers to decode the results in Table 1 and how the authors compute this two values exactly without necessary details and references. Line 371. Fig 3 Caption: "Filled symbols and bars adjacent to the right side of each boxplot indicate the predicted distributions of group-level cooperation probabilities inferred from the OPA model". Not exactly. The grey filled symbols actually corresponds to the PA model. Please clarify it with more details to avoid the confusion. Line 409/414. The presentation of Fig 2 and Fig 3 (a main discovery) is lack of proper statistical tests to support the argument. "overlaps the empirical overall fractions of cooperation" is a vague and loose evaluation. The readers cannot conclude whether the prediction from OPA and PA are significantly different from the behavioral data or not. Line 403/457/458 and more. The usage of square bracket and parentheses are inconsistent throughout the entire paper: e.g. use "(namely, p(C|DD))" instead of "[namely, p(C|DD)]" Line 433/438. Incorrect statement. "predicted distributions of the difference" should be "the difference of predicted distributions". The model is not predicting the difference. Line 455 and Fig 4. In the case of p̂(C|CD)– p̂(C|DD), the generalized reciprocity game is very different from that of the direct one, which likely suggest the candidate multi-level models are predicting generalized reprocity poorly. As the authors also pointed out in Line 557, the lack of mutual reciprocity would make mutual cooperation not expected in the generalized condition. Thus, the choice of using OPA and PA seems a little far-fetched to apply to the generalized condition in the first place. Please clarify the rationale. Table 3. Incorrect rounding. In "Direct reciprocity", number 13 should correspond to (.33) instead of (.32). In "Generalized reciprocity" 1 should correspond to (.03) instead of (.02). Line 552 "If humans generally did not react to the objective value of earnings but subjectively weighted higher the value corresponding to mutual cooperation, the behavioral patterns observed in the direct reciprocity game would be consistent with the argument of human pro-sociality." This sentence is a little hard to comprehend. Please clarify. The authors argues that a popular alternative method, maximum likelihood method, "can be uncertain when the data sample is limited or there exists an imbalance of cases among individuals". I find the conclusion of not using it unconvincing. Please consider include maximum likelihood method as a comparison to support the previous statement. One missing modeling component, is the lack of a model that only takes into account of one's own previous action, in another word, Own Action (OA) model. Please consider including this condition. The results in Fig 3 suggest that OPA's predicted cooperation probability is quite different from that from PA. One likely factor could be simply one's own previous action. Please consider including it. The authors also didn't convince me that the direct and generalized reciprocity game settings are comparable in the first place. The direct reciprocity game, the cooperation and defects have different stages of risks and rewards, as well as a mutual cooperation component. There is a "dilemma" component involved. The generalized reciprocity game, however, at least in this specific experimental setting proposed by the authors, involves monetary gains that have no serious consequences of defecting. The contradicting results of p̂(C|CD)– p̂(C|DD) in Fig 4 also supports my concern that the generalized reciprocity case is an entirely different case that might be insuitable to be compared with the direct version. Title inconsistency: The main title is "Mutual cooperation and defection affect subsequent cooperation in direct reciprocity". The paper, however, devoted around half of the space investigating also the generalized reciprocity. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Greater effects of mutual cooperation and defection on subsequent cooperation in direct reciprocity games than generalized reciprocity games: Behavioral experiments and analysis using multilevel models. PONE-D-20-26747R1 Dear Dr. Horita, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Valerio Capraro Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for revising the manuscript. Your responses and revisions have addressed all my previous concerns. Therefore, I recommend it to be accepted. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Baihan Lin |
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