Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 21, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-15232 Altered kinetics of circulating progenitor cells in cardiopulmonary bypass (CPB) associated vasoplegic patients: An observational study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Thangaraj, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Specifically, the patient population should be expanded and a control group should be added. Furthermore, more detailed statistical analysis, such as a multivariate analysis and a propensity score matching, are needed to confirm the strenght of the results. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 10 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dr. Thangaraj, We would like to thank you and your colleagues for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. This type of translational research is much welcomed to this journal. Cardiothoracic surgeons constantly deal with the vasoplegic patient after cardiopulmonary bypass and therefore, attempts to finding biomarkers to help determine which patients may have a vasoplegic response can result in many rescued patient. This type of study is particularly difficult to pull off, due to multiple confounding factors regarding patients so I commend you on the attempt. However, there are multiple concerns I have regarding your study. 1. This study is severely limited by the sample size of patients. In order to make any meaningful generalizations, sample sizes of 11 and 8 are inadequate. Please do a power analysis if possible. 2. The patient population is not adequately described in multiple areas. There is a range for the ages of the patients which is 40-70. This is a very wide range and there are multiple studies showing that age affects inflammation. The study has medication intake per group, but statins are not included and statins are showed to be anti-inflammatory. Lopressor is a very popular medication which has also been shown to be anti-inflammatory. Also, preoperative comorbidities like COPD, chronic liver disease, steroid use, etc can have such a major impact on outcome. Did any of the patients have heart failure? What was the PREOPERATIVE LVEF of the patients? Was there pulmonary artery hypertension or RV dysfunction? At this point, I have no clue what types of patients are being operated on. 3. Please use a score to determine risk assessment of the cardiac surgery patients. This will give us an idea of how sick the patients are that were included in the study. In the US, we use a the STS-PROM. Whatever score is suitable for you, please include. If could very well be the patients who had an increase pro-inflammatory response were patients who were sicker prior to surgery. 4. Operative details were left out. What type of operations did these patients undergo? I don't believe a 40 year old undergoing a CABG and a 70 year old undergoing CABG will react differently. A 70 year old is expected to have level of CAD, while a 40 year old is likely to not have CAD. I would assume the 40 year old may have increased proinflammatory markers prior to surgery, does this affect your study? What about a 40 yo undergoing a MVrepair for flailed mitral disease whose relatively healthy vs. a 40 year old with endocarditis? We see these patients all the time. 5. More on operative detail - What were the CPB times for the patients? What was the cross-clamp times? What cardioplegia did you use? What MAPs were maintained in the OR? What was the flow for the patients? All of these things that happen in the OR affects pro-inflammatory markers and lactic acidosis, etc. If you have a patient undergoing a cross-clamp time of 180 minutes vs. 80 minutes, I would assume that the longer cross clamp time would have more pro-inflammatory markers. We certainly see that these patients are usually sicker coming out of the operating room. You may want to look into the affects of CPB time or cross clamp time on the markers you discussed. 6. Post-operative course is not described passed 24 hours. First, the study has a 10% mortality rate, which is exceedingly high depending on the operation and how sick the patient is prior to surgery. Once again, this is a reason patient population needs to be more adequately described and a risk assessment score needs to be included in the paper. 7. Norepi is the drug that was used as a consensus for clinical vasoplegia. How was it determined to place this patient on norepi vs. epi. What about norepi vs. vasopressin? What about clinical fluid status? Maybe the patient is not vasoplegic, but dry and required fluids? Once again, patient population needs to be described. Once again, I commend you on a very difficult study. The results of the study were definitely interesting. However, without the information stated above, I cannot agree that there is applicability to these findings. There are many pro- and anti-inflammatory aspects of the patients that are confounding your study. A multivariable analysis may need to be done. I am happy to re-review the study once more information and work is done. I encourage the authors to look into some of my suggestions as I believe it would make this work clinically more applicable. Reviewer #2: The subject of the paper is scientifically relevant and the the work performed correctly, as to my expertise. Nevertheless, the population enrolled to the study is small, considered the following sub-categorization in two groups. The differences observed by the authors wil certainly be reinforced by inclusion of 10-20 more patients and scientific soundness of the paper would benefit from including other groups of patients - off-pump cardiac surgery as a "control group" and ECMO patients. Reviewer #3: I congratulate the author for the great job. The authors analysed vasoplegia observed post-cardiopulmonary bypass and the correlation with CD34+ cells and CD34+CD133+ hematopoietic stem cells. This is an important topic in cardiac surgery, source of important comorbidity and post-operative mortality. The paper is well written and the conclusion are definitely supported. Regards ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Cristina Barbero, MD, PhD [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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PONE-D-20-15232R1 Altered kinetics of circulating progenitor cells in cardiopulmonary bypass (CPB) associated vasoplegic patients: An observational study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Thangaraj, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Specifically, a thorough grammar revision is needed. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 28 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Antonio Cannatà Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): A thorough grammar revision is needed. Please consider using an external proofreading before resubmitting the manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for revising your manuscript. I do very much appreciate the fact that a lot of the data that I requested was added to the manuscript. I think when you talk about vasoplegia, it is important to also have a good clinical picture for such a picture. With regards to this, I think I would like to see more about what to do with this information in a more clinical setting? Do we prophylactically treat these patients who are predisposed to vasoplegia? Please add something short regarding what to do with your information. Also, please review grammar and english syntax. I commend the authors on an interesting study and a well written paper. Reviewer #2: The authors correctly addressed my comments and those of the other reviewer. The reason of enrolling such a small population of patients is now better outlined and is reasonable. In my opinion, the pilot nature of the study must be clear from the very title of the paper, so my suggestion is to add "a pilot study" to the title. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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Altered kinetics of circulating progenitor cells in cardiopulmonary bypass (CPB) associated vasoplegic patients: A pilot study PONE-D-20-15232R2 Dear Dr. Thangaraj, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Antonio Cannatà Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-20-15232R2 Altered kinetics of circulating progenitor cells in cardiopulmonary bypass (CPB) associated vasoplegic patients: A pilot study Dear Dr. Thangaraj: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Antonio Cannatà Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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