Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 22, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-15383 Quantified dry cupping in baseball players with myofascial pain syndrome PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Chen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process., In general, this is an interesting study, and the most important and novel contribution of this study is devising a system that can quantitatively monitor the “dose” and effect of cupping therapy. However, based on the comments provided by all reviewers, I will suggest the authors to make a major revision for a further evaluation to see whether the quality meet the publication criteria of the journal., Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 21 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The signed consent form should not be submitted with the manuscript, but should be securely filed in the individual's case notes. Please amend the methods section and ethics statement of the manuscript to explicitly state that the patient/participant has provided consent for publication: “The individual in this manuscript has given written informed consent (as outlined in PLOS consent form) to publish these case details”. If you are unable to obtain consent from the subject of the photograph, you will need to remove the figure and any other textual identifying information or case descriptions for this individual. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): In general, this is an interesting study, and the most important and novel contribution of this study is devising a system that can quantitatively monitor the “dose” and effect of cupping therapy. However, based on the comments provided by all reviewers, I will suggest the authors to make a major revision for a further evaluation to see whether the quality meet the publication criteria of the journal. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Overall, the authors show very interesting results. They applied a new cupping machine on assuaging the myofascial syndrome. The introduction provided the relevant and sufficient information for the reader to under the idea of the work. Nevertheless, to polish the article, the authors may elaborate more on some paragraph. Specific comments follow. Material and method: P.4 line 94-95: in this part, the authors claimed that 9 baseball players were diagnosed with myofascial syndrome. However, the definition or criteria of myofascial syndrome remained unclear. The authors may provide more info herewith. Result: P10 line 209-211: It remains ambiguous that how authors defined “8 cases were cured.” Please consider rephrasing by adding more detail. Regarding table 3, the score of FLEX-SF of normal and myofascial group seemed to be the same at basal. In addition, the score of myofascial group barely increased after receiving treatment for 4 weeks. One paragraph regarding the limitation of FLEX-SF is recommended to be added (in discussion). On the other hand, the result of DASH showed consistency with muscle compliance. Conclusions: P16 line 339: Please provide more info regarding “8 cases were cured” in the result section, otherwise saying “some patients were cured” in the conclusion might be an overstatement. P17 line 342-343: The authors seem to attempt to term muscle compliance as an indicator for the pathological state of soft tissue. To enhance that, a scatter plot or correlation analysis of muscle compliance and DASH might be an option. Reviewer #2: Here are some questions: 1. Why conventional therapy was applied after intervention therapy? And the follow-up conventional therapy was not discussed in your study? 2. Why only upper fibers of trapezius were evaluated ? 3. How do your sample size been set up in your study design? The sample size seems insufficient to support the statistical hypothesis of this study. Under the statistical method with RM-ANOVA, the normal distribution is necessary. Should you consider using nonparametric statistics instead of RM-ANOVA analysis? Reviewer #3: This study raises important questions and suggests a way to address them. Although cupping is widely used, the quantitative analysis of its efficacy has been limited. The authors introduced a system that can resolve this issue to some extent, which should be considered as an achievement worth publishing. Here, I suggest some modifications. In my opinion, the most important and novel contribution of this study is devising a system that can quantitatively monitor the “dose” and effect of cupping therapy. (Although the authors also presented the results of the designed therapy, the outcomes were just consistent with those of previous studies, which reported the positive effects of cupping.) If the integration of such a system is the main contribution, the reliability and validity of the system should be clarified and emphasized. In lines 278-279, the authors actually claimed “The quantitative cupping system developed in this study can effectively monitor the pressure changes and soft tissue lifting response during cupping.” The authors show that both the pressure sensors and the optical sensors were working in some ways, but I could not find any solid evidence that the integrated system can provide sufficiently accurate and reliable measurement. Authors specified the reliability of the sensors in lines 146 – 162, but as they clarified themselves, the integrated system should work well under condensed humidity and non-negligible negative pressure. To avoid any malfunction, they also customized cases to protect the sensors. Then, it is naturally expected for the authors to verify whether the whole integrated system as well as the cases work well. The audience, including me, may expect that the measurement from the integrated system, which employs compact and inexpensive sensors, should be compared with any gold standard; although the accuracy and reliability of the system may not be perfect, are they good enough to quantify the “dose” and “effect” of the cupping therapy? If so, clearer justification (more than the specification from the manufacturer of each itemized hardware) is needed. Regarding the outcome of the designed (and quantitatively monitored) therapy, further clarification can improve the manuscript. The authors claimed that the soft tissue compliance of the experimental group approached the values of the normal group after cupping for 4 weeks (lines 249-251). Does it mean that the difference in compliance values between the experimental group and the control group is not statistically significant after the 4 weeks? Thorough comparisons between the two groups after 4 weeks therapy will be helpful for the readers to understand the effect of the designed therapy. In addition to these major suggestions, I have some minor comments: 1. I recommend that the authors should change the title so that it can reflect their main contribution. For example, the word “baseball player” does not seem important enough to be emphasized in the title. 2. Some sentences read awkward and seem to employ incorrect prepositions. (For example, the sentence starting from line 174 could be written much more concisely.) I recommend that the authors receive professional editing service. 3. Only after I read the manuscript for a while, I could understand that the control group is also from the same baseball team. This fact should be clarified much earlier. 4. The sentence in line 217-218 is very confusing. The current sentence reads that the tissue elevation reduced the pressure, which cannot be valid. The tissue elevation reduces the “magnitude of negative pressure”, or increases the absolute pressure value in the cup. The authors need to rephrase the sentence to clarify the meaning. 5. The sentence in lines 220-222 implies that compliance should increase or decrease due to the mechanical input to the tissue. This cannot be valid. Compliance (or the inverse of the stiffness) is the mechanical property of any system like human tissue. Mechanical input and output (e.g., force and kinematics or vice versa) can be measured to estimate this property. Although the compliance might be nonlinear and change due to the input, the specific tendency cannot be assumed before the actual estimation. If the authors defined compliance correctly, the phrase following “because” in the mentioned sentence cannot be the cause of the significant increase of the compliance. 6. The last statement starting from line 343 is clearly an overstatement. Either the suggested quantifying system or other more advanced system and the resulting quantified “dose” of cupping cannot “guarantee” the efficacy of cupping. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Sheng-Ju CHUANG Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Influence of quantified dry cupping on soft tissue compliance in athletes with myofascial pain syndrome PONE-D-20-15383R1 Dear Dr. Chen, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have modified the paragraphs accordingly and provided enough info to the questions. In addition, the authors addressed their ideas clearly and included adequate references. I really enjoy reading the article this time. I have no further suggestion or question to give. Many thanks for having me involved in the process. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Sheng-Ju Chuang Reviewer #3: No |
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PONE-D-20-15383R1 Influence of quantified dry cupping on soft tissue compliance in athletes with myofascial pain syndrome Dear Dr. Chen: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Yi-Hung Liao Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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