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PONE-D-20-19028 Analysis of Molecular Markers in the Environmental Strains of Vibrio Parahaemolyticus Isolated from the Oyster (Crassostrea virginica) and Water Samples of Delaware Bay PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ozbay, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 14 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dears authors: The manuscript entitled: "Analysis of Molecular Markers in the Environmental Strains of Vibrio Parahaemolyticus Strains Isolated obtained from the Oyster (Crassostrea virginica) and Water Samples of Delaware Bay", submitted by: Esam Almuhaideb, Lathadevi K. Chintapenta, Amanda Abbott, Salina Parveen Gulnihal Ozbay represents a topic of interest in his field of knowledge, it is well presented and the methodology in general was well conducted; however, before it can be considered for publication, I recommend attending to the following general recommendations: 1) The title requires improvement, it does not specifically reflect the topic it addresses. 2) The abstract does not mention all the methodology used. 3) in the introduction it should be emphasized that molecular markers are relevant to identify pathogenic strains of importance in human health. 4) In the methodology, justify why using the colony count with a presumptive microbiological method and not with a confirmatory method such as coupling the PCR to the most probable number (MPN). 5)En el primer párrafo de la conclusión: "This study assessed V. parahaemolyticus CFU/g (or mL) levels to evaluate the bacteriological conditions of seawater and oyster samples collected from Delaware Bay. V. parahaemolyticus levels in oyster samples were notably higher than seawater samples", se requiere justificar que los métodos de cuantificación son igualmente efectivos para los dos tipos de muestras, sobre todo en cuanto a la cantidad de muestra tomada y analizada. Likewise, attend to some specific recommendations indicated in the attached document. Reviewer #2: Analysis of Molecular Markers in the Environmental Strains of Vibrio parahaemolyticus Isolated from the Oyster (Crassostrea virginica) and Water Samples of Delaware Bay Esam Almuhaideb, Lathadevi K. Chintapenta, Amanda Abbott, Salina Parveen, Gulnihal Ozbay This study compared levels of Vibrio parahaemolyticus in seawater and oysters in Delaware Bay over 5 months, using culture-based plating as well as genetic markers. Relationships to physico-chemical data were explored using Spearman’s rank correlation analysis, and the co-existence of key genes were assessed. I believe the manuscript is suitable for publication, but have made some comments below. I have reattached the manuscript with corrections. Overall, the manuscript needs a grammar polish. Change sentences so that references are in parentheses and author names not repeated in the sentence Eg Line 83… Miyoshi et al. and Kim et al. [24, 25] have reported that V. parahaemolyticus harbors a V. parahaemolyticus metalloprotease (vpm) gene that expresses extracellular zinc metalloprotease and shows sufficient proteolytic activity towards type I collagen. Should be written as: V. parahaemolyticus harbors a V. parahaemolyticus metalloprotease (vpm) gene that expresses extracellular zinc metalloprotease and shows sufficient proteolytic activity towards type I collagen [24, 25] And Line 98.. According to Ritchie et al. [32], an infant rabbit model infected with V. parahaemolyticus revealed that T3SS2 is essential for intestinal colonization. Should be written as: An infant rabbit model infected with V. parahaemolyticus revealed that T3SS2 is essential for intestinal colonization [32]. Be consistent: U.S. (eg line 118) or USA (line 136) Line 153: peptone water (PW) – brand or composition? Line 166: Tryptone Soy Broth (TSB) - brand or composition? Line 170: Alkaline Peptone Water (APW) - brand or composition? Line 177: The PCR reaction mixture (10uL) – should be 10 μL Table 1 is not well laid out. I suggest the following columns: Gene Primer Sequences Cycling conditions Line 184: positive control – ATCC or some sort of identification number for V. parahaemolyticus? Line 201 and elsewhere: 14.63 °C should be 14.63°C (no space between temperature and °C) Line 202 and elsewhere: space between value and ppt Line 209: 8.23 mg/L not 8.23mg/L Fig 2 & Fig 3: It is not accurate to draw the temperature and salinity as lines as they are not a continuous series; either group by location and leave the temperature/salinity as lines, or use a symbol to represent those variables. Table 4: column headings should read: Column 1: Water Parameter Column 2: Spearman’s correlation coefficient, r Column 3: significance level (oyster) Column 4: significance level (seawater) Fig 4 legend should be: Percent and number of isolates with detected tdh, trh, toxR, vpm and tlh genes in oysters and seawater. Y-axis should be “Number of isolates” Fig 5 legend should be: Number of isolates with coexisting genes among total confirmed V. parahaemolyticus isolates. Y-axis should be “Number of isolates” Line 328: (n ₌ 39) & (n ₌ 31) should be (n=39) & (n=31)? Fig 6 legend should be: Co-existence of genes among confirmed V. parahaemolyticus isolates from oysters. Y-axis should be “Number of isolates” Fig 7 legend should be: Co-existence of genes among confirmed V. parahaemolyticus isolates from seawater. Y-axis should be “Number of isolates” Conclusion Line 357-358: Better first sentence needed eg This study assessed V. parahaemolyticus levels in oysters and seawater in Delaware Bay in relation to physico-chemical variables and the presence of key genes. Line 360 Occurrence of the virulent (should be virulence) genes (tdh and/or trh) in oyster samples were notably higher – higher than what? Need to mention the relationship of V. parahaemolyticus levels to physico-chemical parameters Line 371 “virulent” should be virulence Line 373 “inhibiting” should be inhabiting References Check scientific names need to be italicized I do not have expertise in statistical analyses so cannot comment on the appropriateness of the method used. ********** 6. 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Assessment of Vibrio parahaemolyticus levels in oysters (Crassostrea virginica) and seawater in Delaware Bay in relation to environmental conditions and the prevalence of molecular markers to identify pathogenic Vibrio parahaemolyticus strains PONE-D-20-19028R1 Dear Dr. Ozbay, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, José A. Fernández Robledo, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed the issues raised in the first review. I suggest next time that the manuscript be sent for English editing. Some minor edits are attached. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Josefina León Félix Reviewer #2: No
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