Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-17797 Step width and frequency to modulate: Active foot placement control ensures stable gait PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bruijn, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. It has been reviewed carefully and the reviewers have provided some suggestions for improvement. If you could please address these concerns, and provide the journal with a point-by-point rebuttal as described below, I would very much like to see it again. Please note that if you feel that any of the concerns are beyond the scope of the work, you may say this in the rebuttal. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 08 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript reports the results of one experiment designed to investigate the mechanisms for maintaining gait stability. The study builds upon previous research suggesting that step-by-step variations in the mediolateral position of the foot play a key role in gait stability but that other strategies (e.g., the ankle push-off strategy) play a complementary role. The present study examines the interplay between these strategies by exploring how the degree of foot placement control varies as a function of constraints placed on ankle moments and foot placement. The results support the hypothesis that the degree of foot placement control is dependent on foot placement constraints. However, constraints on ankle moment did not affect the degree of foot placement control. Overall, this is a solid study that makes a nice empirical contribution that advances our understanding of the role of foot placement control in gait stability. On the positive side, the rationale for the study is solid, the methodological approach is sound, the data are properly analyzed, and the interpretation of findings is reasonable. The authors preregistered their study, identified deviations from the preregistered plan, and will make their data available. There are a few issues that I think should be addressed before a final decision about this manuscript is made. (1) The logic of the experiment appears to be sound but was not clearly presented. I believe that I was able to figure it out, but it required more effort than should be necessary. The basic aim of the study and the hypotheses are clearly explained in the introduction but the specific predictions are missing. What would be useful is a set of statements that connect the hypotheses (H1, H2, H3) with specific predictions for the analyses that were conducted (e.g., “If H# is true, then the R^2 of Model # should increase/decrease.”). (2) I understand that the primary manipulations were the ankle moment and foot placement constraints, but it would be helpful if the authors could clarify the purpose of the walking speed manipulation and the predictions associated with this manipulation. (3) Hypotheses 1 and 3 seem to capture the same idea. What is the difference? Is it possible for one to be true and the other false? Deriving specific predictions (as described in the previous comment) from both hypotheses would help to address this issue. (I wrote this comment after reading the Introduction and Methods. The difference eventually becomes clear to the reader but not until the Results section. The authors should clarify the difference earlier in the manuscript.) (4) It would help the reader if the authors could begin each section of the results by explaining the question that each analysis is intended to answer. (5) The manuscript has some grammatical issues, some of which are listed below. These should be addressed in the revision. SPECIFIC COMMENTS AND MINOR ISSUES Title: The title is awkwardly worded. I’m not sure what they mean by “Step width and frequency to modulate”. Line 91: “vis-à-vis” is not properly used in this sentence. I think what the authors mean is “rather than”. Line 92: Likewise, “accumulates” is not properly used. Line 141: Replace “conform” with “in accordance with”. Line 149: Add “phase” after familiarization. Line 151: “Participants *were* familiarized with…” Line 153: “…five *minutes*…” Line 165: Did subjects receive any feedback about the accuracy of their footsteps? Line 285: Delete “finally” Reviewer #2: Review of “Step width and step frequency to modulate: active foot placement control ensures stable gate” My summary of the paper: In this paper, the author inquires how active foot placement control is compensated when the ability to modulate ankle moment is constrained or when step width is constrained. The author finds that instead of any modulation in foot placement control, the average step width and step frequency are changed. As the author admits, this does not necessarily mean that active foot placement does not adapt when constrained, because the ankle moment constraint imposed here could have inadvertently constrained the ability for active foot placement as well. The paper also replicates two results from past papers. A summary of my review: The paper is well-written and the results are discussed and interpreted with care and insightfully, in the context of the literature. Also, it is to be appreciated that the author appropriately preregistered their methods and declared deviations from preregistrations. It is great that the author will make the data available. One main suggestion I have to the author is to explore if there were any systematic trends in the CoM and foot placement states, which needed to be accounted for when demeaning. Secondly, I suggest the author compare the step width constrained control results to Perry and Srinivasan 2017, which doe a similar thing. In the writing, some further details and justifications need to be provided in the methods section of the paper and I provide specific suggestions for these below. Detailed review (key changes suggested): When the author says that the hip states and foot placement variables were “demeaned”, do they account for any systematic trends in the states over time? If not, I suggest the author de-trend these variables and perform the regression models again after de-trending to see if this changes the results. This is essential because, if there is a systematic trend over time in these states, it will affect the central results (the control gains) in this paper. I believe this will not take much time to add as it will just need the addition of one line of code. The constraint condition in which the step width is constrained is similar to the constraint in Perry and Srinivasan 2017. I think it would be appropriate for the author compare and discuss the results here in comparison the results in that paper. There are some additional details and justifications needed in the methods section. (i) Why did the author choose to constrain the step frequency? Neither of the papers this paper replicates use a metronome (Wang et al. and Rankin et al.). So, the author should justify this experimental choice to constrain step frequency. Also, it is unclear if the metronome was used for all the conditions i.e. steady-state, ankle constraint, and foot placement constraint. (ii) The author use a certain method to calculate the CoM (using regressions), could they provide more details about how the CoM was calculated or refer to a previous paper that calculates the CoM using a similar method? (iii) Further details need to be provided on the setup used for projecting beams onto the treadmill for the foot placement constraint condition. (iv) I suggest the author add a glossary explaining all the variables used in the paper in a single location. Line-by-line comments (mostly minor): Title: Can the title be revised for clarity? “step width and step frequency to modulate” sounds a bit unclear. Also, the focus of the paper is on the added constraints so that should feature in the tile in some way. Abstract: In line 20, “ankle strategy” is unclear. Maybe say “ankle moment modulation strategy” to show the link to the previous sentence. In line 31, I think it is misleading to say “foot placement control was not tightened”, because a change in average step width and step frequency (as was found here) is also achieved through foot placement control. Maybe revise to “step-by-step foot placement control was not tightened”. Introduction: Very well-written. No changes suggested. Methods: Line 141, what is “conform Hof”? Line 217, I assume COMpos and COMvel are vectors consisting of x, y, and z components? Please elaborate on this. Line 224, there is a superscript “|” over the word “seconds” and it is not clear what this means. This shows up in other places in the paper as well. Please clarify. Line 231, contralateral foot is also at midstance? Line 233, stance foot is also at midstance? In general, please make sure that if states are being measured at a particular gait event, that is mentioned clearly. Line 233, not sure what the word “predictors” refers to. Line 238, why is the EMG variable subscripted “swing”? Was the EMG only calculated at swing? The result figures with EMG indicate it was calculated throughout the stride cycle. Please state If FP2 and the EMG variables in equation 2 are demeaned or not somewhere in the methods section. In equation 1, if CoM_pos(i) and CoM_vel(i) are written with (i) to indicate step cycle i, should FP also not be FP(i) and not just FP? I have a similar question about equations 2: to my understanding, the EMG are also for one step cycle, so should that also not be (i) ? Results: Figure 3 caption states that medial burst is greater than lateral burst, is this difference significant? It looks very small from the figure. In figures 3 and 4, the y axis does not have any number scale. Figure 4 caption says “higher emg activity during early swing”, but this appears to be true only for slow speed. Please clarify this in the caption itself. Line 335, please state the R^2 value there itself. Did Rankin et al. have a similarly low R^2? Please discuss what this could mean. Discussion: The discussion is generally very well written and the interpretations are made carefully. In line 395, maybe use the word “relaxed” instead of “adapted”, to contrast with “tightened"? Line 414, unclear what “serially coordinated as a balance response” means, please clarify Line 420, could you elaborate on why you say “this does not necessarily imply more accurate control” Conclusion: In line 511, the use of the word “other” seems to indicate that foot placement control compensation was clearly eliminated in this study. However, as the author admits, this is not the case. It is possible that the LeSchuh did not allow for easy foot placement modulation. This can be explored with further experiments to see if the foot placement control compensates with practice with LeSchuh. Please add this caveat in the conclusion. ********** 6. 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Active foot placement control ensures stable gait: Effect of constraints on foot placement and ankle moments PONE-D-20-17797R1 Dear Dr. Bruijn, I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements (formatting, etc.). These requirements (if any) are determined by the production office and are separate from the content review provided by the academic editorial process. Personally, I am happy to congratulate you on a very methodical and thorough study, and commend your group for pre-registration. Very nice work. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, J. Lucas McKay, Ph.D., M.S.C.R. Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-20-17797R1 Active foot placement control ensures stable gait: Effect of constraints on foot placement and ankle moments Dear Dr. Bruijn: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. J. Lucas McKay Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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