Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 5, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-17082 Histological, immunohistochemical and transcriptomic characterization of human tracheoesophageal fistulas PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Brosens, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers identified several errors in the text and missing technical details that need to be added. If possible, one reviewer requests that gender be considered as a relevant variable. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 11 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript aims to define a transcriptional signature of tracheoesophageal fistulas in humans. Secondarily, they provide histological and immunohistochemical data for further characterization. In general, the manuscript is straight forward and a characterization/description paper. However, it does add new data to the field and will serve as a basis for further investigations and characterization. Below are comments that require attention. Abstract Nice abstract Introduction Line 67, page 3, please define “CNVs” Materials and Methods Please list the Institutional Review approval number for the human studies. Please list inclusion and exclusion criteria for humans Please also provide the demographics of the patient population Please describe how RNA integrity was determined and the criteria using the RNA in downstream RNA-sequencing. Please provide the sequencing depth and number of reads. Please provide information about statistical analyses. As a general note, there are details about methods provided in the supplemental material – it would be beneficial to include notes in the main manuscript pointing readers to the supplemental material for more details about experimental procedures. Results Figures 1-3. Arrows pointing to the salient features of interest would benefit the reader. Page 13, line 223, a parenthesis is missing after KCNMB1 Table 4, please provide a reference for what the “+” means (for example how much more expression does +++ represent compared to + In table S2b, there was no obvious data presented in the row “TEF vs Esophagus and Trachea” For tables S2c-S3b, please indicate whether the p values were corrected using FDR. For tables S2c-S3b, please indicate the comparison made in the fold change column (TEF vs ?) For tables S2c-S3b, please also provide the units for columns TEF, E, T, L In tables S4-S5, some number are italicized, is there a reason for this and/or does this represent something the reader should pay attention to? Discussion There are no mentions or discussion about sex as a biological variable or whether sex differences were probed for. The authors should consider adding a statement or two related to this. In addition, the number of control samples is relatively small compared to the experimental population. The authors should include this as a limitation of their work and acknowledge that a larger control population might reveal more rigorous data/results. The discussion would benefit from a final summary paragraph and key take home message and potential future directions. Reviewer #2: Histological, immunohistochemical and transcriptomic characterization of human tracheoesophageal fistulas Interesting, well-written, straightforward descriptive paper looking primarily at gene expression using transcriptomics, followed by some eval of tissue organization, and immunohistochemistry of key protein patterns in trachea-esophageal fistula samples vs esophageal, tracheal and lung control samples. Some issues, mostly minor addressed below. Abstract: Not sure what last sentence means “This combined implies that EA/TEF etiology should not be sought in cell fate specification”. Methods: Patient characteristics: Where did control tissues come from? This information along with characteristics of patients from which 21 TEF samples obtained is well-described in supplementary methods. Should this information be in the main text? Results: Overall, may want to elaborate results a bit more so that discussion is better supported. Line 221: in this line and throughout the text, I am not clear what is meant by intestinal SMC in relation to TEFs or the esophagus; ACTG2 is most differentially expressed in T vs TEF – is this correct (Table 1)? Is ACTA2 present and in which tissue samples? line 223 (KCNMB1 needs another parentheses Line 263: verbiage – “both” needs to be removed; “RAR-beta staining was positive both in TEFs, especially in the basal epithelium.” Discussion: Not sure section headings in the discussion are helpful. Some editing needed e.g. Line 336 In response to TGFB1 fibroblast transform in smooth muscle like cells [104] with high ACTA2 (or the intestinal ACTG2?) in which actin associated proteins are induced[105]; also Minor editing: “There was no BMP4 protein expression nor is differentially expressed on mRNA level between preterm esophagus, preterm trachea or TEF.” May want to address limitations of study – whole tissue was submitted; wasn’t single cell sequencing (briefly mentioned) which may limit interpretation of your findings. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Histological, immunohistochemical and transcriptomic characterization of human tracheoesophageal fistulas PONE-D-20-17082R1 Dear Dr. Brosens, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, David D. Roberts Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Please correct the remaining typographical error identified by one reviewer. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed my concerns and the manuscript is now strengthened and improved. The only thing I noted on the revision is the typo or undefined term "-he" found in the discussion. Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed all my comments. Manuscript is technically sound and presented in an intelligible fashion. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-17082R1 Histological, immunohistochemical and transcriptomic characterization of human tracheoesophageal fistulas Dear Dr. Brosens: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. David D. Roberts Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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