Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 31, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-23889 Soluble dimeric prion protein ligand activates Adgrg6 receptor but does not rescue the myelinopathy of PrP-deficient mice PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Aguzzi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 09 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Henzi and colleagues from the Aguzzi lab have designed a soluble dimeric version of the PrP flexible tail (FT2-Fc) that, like the flexible tail itself, is capable of binding and activating Adgrg6. Application of FT2-Fc to SW10 cells, but not SW10 cells lacking Adgrg6, resulted in a dose-dependent increase in cAMP levels and a time-dependent increase in phospho-AKT levels. This suggested that FT2-Fc may be capable of counteracting the age-dependent demyelinating phenotype that occurs in PrP knockout mice. However, neither acute nor persistent injections of FT2-Fc into mice resulted in an increase in phospho-AKT levels. Moreover, when PrP knockout mice were treated with FT2-Fc for 4 months, levels of Egr2 remained low and levels of Gfap remained high (compared to wild-type mice), suggesting that FT2-Fc was not engaging the appropriate signaling pathway. Yet, gene expression studies demonstrated alterations to the transcriptome in the sciatic nerves of FT2-Fc-treated mice, suggesting that the molecule reached its anatomical target. However, FT2-Fc treatment did not result in alterations to expression levels in genes relevant to Schwann cell repair. Instead, changes were observed in genes that undergo differential regulation upon PrP overexpression. These results suggest that FT2-Fc may not be a viable candidate for treating peripheral demyelinating disorders. This is really nice, well-controlled study. The only major caveat to the conclusions, which is explicitly mentioned by the authors at the beginning of the Discussion, is that the mice were not treated long enough (or beginning at old enough ages) to directly test whether FT2-Fc rescues the peripheral nerve demyelination phenotype in PrP knockout mice. However, I do not fault the authors one bit for not doing these studies given the discouraging signaling pathway results from mice treated at younger ages. That being said, I think the authors should be careful with the wording of their conclusions in the Abstract and manuscript title. In the Abstract, it is stated that “no amelioration of the peripheral demyelinating neuropathy was detected.” A more accurate statement may be that “no amelioration of deficits in signaling pathways relevant to myelin maintenance was detected” (or something to that effect). The same goes for the title, since the authors did not actually test whether FT2-Fc “rescues the myelinopathy of PrP-deficient” mice. Otherwise, I think this is an excellent manuscript and have only a few other minor concerns for the authors to address: 1. Figure 3c clearly shows that Egr2 levels in ZH3 mice are lower than in wild-type mice. However, on page 16 it states in the Figure 3 legend that “ZH3 mice exhibited an age-dependent decrease in Egr2 levels” and in the associated main text that “Egr2 levels progressively decreased when compared to wild-type mice”. In my opinion, the Egr2 Western blot in Figure 3c does not clearly show a progressive decrease in levels with age in either the wild-type or ZH3 mice. The authors should quantify the Egr2 blot signals for these experiments, ideally from ~3 mice per age and genotype. 2. For Figure 2b, the authors need to briefly discuss why unexpectedly lower cAMP levels were obtained when using 9 or 10 µM FT2-Fc. 3. In the Methods section on page 5, I think one of the mouse lines should be CAG-/Cre+ (two are listed as CAG-/Cre- at the moment). Reviewer #2: This manuscript describes studies aimed at evaluating the possible binding of an Fc-fusion protein (FT2Fc) comprising two units of the myelinotrophic domain of the prion protein, PrP, coupled to Fc, to the G-protein coupled receptor Adgrg6, resulting in its subsequent activation. Once such binding and activation were confirmed in cellula, animal experiments were carried out to evaluate whether FT2Fc might also have an effect in vivo. Such effect would consist in a partial reversal of the molecular events leading to the demyelination that takes place in absence of PrP. This work is a follow-up of a previous study by the Authors in which they demonstrated that the myelinotropic domain of PrP binds to and modulates Adgrg6, contributing to myelin maintenance (Kuffer et al., 2016; Nature 536(7617):464-8). The Authors reasoned that such effect might be used to our advantage to develop pharmacological modulators of Adgrg6 to treat demyelinating conditions. In this context, rather than evaluating the effect of the myelinotrophic domain of PrP, a short peptide that within PrP is known to be very flexible and is therefore likely to be disordered when alone, they decided to build the much more solid FT2Fc protein, expected to have better pharmacokinetic properties. For their purposes, the Authors used a formidable array of molecular, cellular, histological, biophysical and electrophysiological techniques. Experiments were conducted rigorously, with adequate controls in every case; data were processed with appropriate statistical methods and are presented in a clear fashion. The results clearly show that FT2Fc activates Adgrg6 signaling in cellula, with the result of an increased cellular concentration of cAMP and increased AKT phosphorylation. Unfortunately, a similar effect was not seen in animal studies. Rather, and paradoxically, changes in gene expression reminiscent of those detected in mice overexpressing PrP, and associated to toxicity, were seen in the sciatic nerves of PrP-deficient mice treated with intravenous or intraperitoneal injections of FT2Fc. Given the solidity of the analytical approach used to assess the effect of the treatment, it is possible to conclude that the treatment failed. While negative results are always disappointing, I think that the study will be of interest to the research communities studying the biology of the prion protein and maintenance of myelin, because of the questions it raises and the methodology the Authors have developed to tackle them. I will list a number of minor suggestions and queries, mostly related to the Discussion: 1) The Authors carried out pharmacokinetic studies based on a relatively simple approach: immunochemical detection of FT2Fc in serum. Did they consider using the same approach to measure FT2Fc in nerve tissue? This might be of relevance to determine if FT2Fc failed to elicit a response in vivo simply because it did not attain a sufficient presence in the target tissues. 2) The altered pattern of gene expression in the sciatic nerve induced by FT2Fc treatment was compared with the effect of overexpression of PrP in the tibialis muscle of tg mice. Why not use the pattern of gene expression in the sciatic muscle of these PrP overexpressing mice as a more relevant comparison? 3) The Authors suggest that "the dimeric nature of FT2Fc could alter its biological activity when compared to monomeric FT and endogenous PrP" as a possible explanation of its lack of effect (Discussion, line 603). However, the studies conducted in cellula showed that the effect of FT2Fc in activation of the signalling pathways considered was similar to that of monomeric FT. 4) What would be the mechanism by which FT2Fc exerts its PrP overexpression-like effect in gene expression? Would it be mediated by Adgrg6? If so, it means that pharmacological activation of this receptor might be catastrophic if not precisely fine-tuned; if mediated by other receptor, it means that, interestingly, FT has more than one binding partner/function. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Soluble dimeric prion protein ligand activates Adgrg6 receptor but does not rescue early signs of demyelination in PrP-deficient mice PONE-D-20-23889R1 Dear Dr. Aguzzi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Giuseppe Legname Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Jesús R. Requena |
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