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PONE-D-20-11194 Highlighting a population-based re-emergence of Syphilis infection and assessing associated risk factors among pregnant women in Cameroon: Evidence from the 2009, 2012 and 2017 national sentinel surveillance surveys of HIV and syphilis. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. KENGNE-NDE, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 22 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. The manuscript a very important issue in public health and in the efforts towards the dual elimination of mother to child transmission of syphilis. The paper is generally well written but I think that the methods have not been sufficiently described or are inadequate to warrant the conclusions made. The authors conclude that there was a massive increase in syphilis prevalence among first ANC clinic attendees without providing sufficient evidence to exclude sampling issues, testing procedures, and errors in the analysis e.g. lack of weighting in the analysis. I have detailed my comments to the authors below Abstract • Line 3: This sentence should be syphilis and HIV can be transmitted from and not by • Lines 8- 14: you need to clarify that the survey was conducted at the same sites every time and how many were enrolled in each survey. • Lines 27-28: Please use word as suggest and not confirm as you haven’t provided evidence that syphilis has been re-emerging in Cameroonian general population besides the findings from the surveys Introduction • Line 33: sentence should read “Sub-Saharan African”. Please change this here and elsewhere where you have used this term – see line 54 • Line 42: remove “HIV and” and write sexual transmitted as sexually transmitted • Line 67: in the methods, you refer to a nine year period and here to an eight. Please clarify Methods • Generally the methods need to be improved. • Lines 70- 88: The design should be a secondary analysis of data from three ANC sentinel surveys. There after you need to put an extra section on the description of the three surveys. A table mighty be useful to highlight differences and similarities in the survey methods used across the 3 surveys Some important information to include is o How often are the surveys done? Are they done on a regular basis or as needed? o You say the surveys included 20 sentinel sites in 10 regions. Were these sentinel sites the same across all three surveys? How are the sentinel sites selected? o You also say you included 10 surveillance health facilities. What is the nature of the surveillance health facilities and how do they differ or how are they related to the sentinel sites? o What is the nature of a sentinel site – is it a clinic or hospital • Lines 89- 110: This should be a sub-section of the proposed section on description of the surveys. Was syphilis testing conducted in all three surveys? If so how was it done in each if the survey? Later in the methods section (line 131- 134) you mentioned that only the 2017 did you have women tested for both HIV and syphilis at PMTCT sites. It’s not clear what this means? Where were the labs located in relation to the sentinel sites? • Lines 124- 142: You did not define what your outcomes of the analysis are. Does the outcome have more than 2 responses? If yes which ones? This would justify use of the multinomial logistic regression. • Since the data were collected in a survey where there might be clustering of outcomes, was the data weighted? Were the same data weights used across the 3 surveys? If no weights were applied, I would recommend a weighted analysis for calculating the survey specific syphilis sero-prevalence’s and even the analyses of trends across the surveys or at least some justification for why a weighted analysis is not necessary Results • Lines 151- 175: Please combine tables 1a, b and c to make it easier to compare the characteristics of participants across the surveys. Why not categorise age into fewer categories – 15- 24, 25- 35, 35- 49. Why were variable available different across the surveys? • Lines 176- 183: Did you do a trend analysis? How? Please describe in the methods • Lines 184: Figure 2 is not clear at all. A simple bar graph with error bars could be clearer • Line 186- 192: what % of those enrolled in the 2017 survey did the 3901 tested for syphilis represent? Why were only these ones tested for syphilis? Please the information in the methods • Line 196: please add the numbers for the total population and HIV positive population to table 2 • Also are the results in Table 2 weighted? • Did you collect information on ART for the women who were HIV POSITIVE? Discussion • Line 248 – add HIV to co-infection • Line 249- 253: I would tone down this assertion that syphilis prevalence is increasing given the methodological issues highlighted. Perhaps say maternal syphilis seroprevalence maybe increasing • Have you looked at other data sources on maternal seropositivity e.g. from DHIS that you can triangulate with • Line 259: not sure what middles in this sentence means • Line 266- 269: you don’t discuss reasons why syphilis is higher in HIV positive women and how future surveys or studies can untangle this. The HIV/syphilis positive women – are they more likely to be on ART? Are they not on ART? • Line 274: what was ANC attendance like in rural areas and has it changed over the 8/9 year period here? You don’t present rural urban distribution in the 2009 and 2012 surveys? It is possible that the increased prevalence is due to more rural women taking part in the survey? Reviewer #2: This is an interesting study that provides a lot of food for thought: how can syphilis explode while HIV declines? Fascinating. I have a few comments/suggestions, mostly minor but one major. Minor 1. Did availability of antibiotics (e.g. over the counter purchases) change between the surveys? 2. line 57-59. This is stating the same thing twice. Also the causal link between syphilis and HIV is not realy proven, so please weaken your statement (e.g. syphilis has been implicated in susceptibility to HIV) 3. line 272. Please change "is the result" to "may be the result" 4. line 279. Is region associated with religion? If so please mention this. 5. While the ms is generally well written a few sentences seem to be not standard English. While acceptable it might be useful to have a native speaker check its grammar. 6. Were the same ANC sites used in the three surveys? This also impacts analysis Major 1. Statistical analysis seems to ignore the structure/design of the survey which looks more like a multi-stage survey than a simple random sample. STATA offers excellent routines for analysing this type of data. Same applies to sample size calculation. 2. Perhaps the different logistic regression analyses can be applied to the all three surveys? 3. The increase in syphilis should also be demonstrated using logistic regression with survey year as one of the covariables. One can thereby adjust for changes in other risk factors. Reviewer #3: The purpose of this article is to monitor changes in the seroprevalence of HIV/syphilis co-infection and syphilis infection and associated risk factors in Cameroon from 2009 to 2012 and 2017. These questions are important as they provide evidence for interventions for the prevention and control of HIV/AIDS and syphilis. To carry-out the objectives, the authors use cross-sectional antenatal care surveys conducted in 2009, 2012, and 2017 from 20 sentinel surveillance sites across 10 regions of Cameroon. The authors found the following: 1) HIV/syphilis co-infection increased from 0.05% in 2009 to 0.49% in 2017. Pregnant women aged 25–49 compared with those aged 15–24 were 15.1 times more likely to be co-infected. Single or unmarried compared to those who were married, cohabitating, widowed, or divorced were 2.9 times more likely to have a co-infection. 2) Syphilis infection increased from 0.6% in 2009 to 5.6% in 2017. Pregnant women living in rural areas were 1.8 times more likely to contract syphilis than those in urban areas. Pregnant women living in Northern Region were 0.6 times as likely to have a syphilis infection than those in the Southern Regions. 3) HIV infection decreased from 7.6% in 2009 to 5.7% in 2017. Pregnant women aged 25–49 compared with those aged 15–24 were 2.7 times more likely to be HIV positive. Multiparous pregnant women 2.0 times more likely to have an HIV infection than non-nulliparous. This work provides evidence for national policy, resource allocation, and the evidence base for interventions for the control and prevention of HIV and syphilis in Cameroon and the global elimination of mother-to-child transmission of HIV and syphilis. Comments/Questions: 1. In the methods section, please specify the sampling method used. Specify probability or nonprobability sampling and type of sampling (ie. simple random, systematic, convenience, …) that was used. 2. Did the analysis have 2 or more dependent or outcome variables or were there multiple independent or response variables? The methods mention multivariate and multivariable interchangeably. 3. The results sections is bit hard to follow. Consider grouping results by the specific infection and co-infection so that the reader can look to the results to inform the story that is being told in the discussion section. 4. On line 156, what is meant by the term ‘monogomous regime’? 5. “Enroled’ (British English) and ‘enrolled’ (American English) are used interchangeably throughout the paper. Choose one or the other according to the journal’s style guide. 6. Also check for capitalization where it is not needed (ie. see line 270 “In contrast of Syphilis trend”, line 279, …). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-20-11194R1 Highlighting a population-based re-emergence of Syphilis infection and assessing associated risk factors among pregnant women in Cameroon: Evidence from the 2009, 2012 and 2017 national sentinel surveillance surveys of HIV and syphilis. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. KENGNE-NDE, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== I would be happy to accept your manuscript for publication once you have addressed the reviewer's minor comments. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 23 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Remco PH Peters, MD, PhD, DLSHTM Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this revised manuscript. The authors have addressed most of the comments I had on initial review. The paper reads much better than the initial version and the methods section clearer. However in addressing these, new comments have arisen. I have listed them below: Abstract Line 9: add each year Line 13: add outcomes of the multinomial logistic regression Introduction Line 47 – the authors need to add the phrase “such as ” before HIV and syphilis Line 53- delete the words the highest risk. It sounds repetitive with most in that sentence Lines 60- 63: the authors don’t address why syphilis is an important co-infection in HIV + patients. Does it have an effect on HIV progression Methods Lines 73- 89: The authors clarified what constituted a sentinel site – health facility including its 3 testing points. This is not clear in clear in this paragraph Lines 112- 115 syphilis testing – how was a case of syphilis decided. Please include the algorithm like you have for HIV. Was the algorithm reverse or traditional. Were titres measured for VDRL to determine current vs old infection Lines 130- Is the CSPRO software a registered brand? Add developer, city and country Line 138 – the authors refer to a sub-set to be tested for syphilis. How was this subset selected. Later on they state that shortage of test kits meant sites with no test kits could not be selected for the analysis. Results Line 163 – please change from involvement to particioation Table 1- present medians (IQR) as well as age in cvategories Table 2 – present numbers before percentages Table 3: for overall population and those HIV positive add the values of N- the totals Also primiparous and number of pregnancies overlap as variables. Primiparous and # pregnancies =0 are one and the same thing. Table 4: see comment above Fig 1: add syphilis testing algorithm Discussion Lines 278- 286: the authors have not addressed the issue of access to treatment as a factor that could explain high rates of syphilis in rural areas. From about 2016, there has been a global benzathine penicillin shortage. Please comment on this Lines 296- 308: The list of limitations is incomplete. Because selection of sites for syphilis testing were not random, discuss that it was possible that sites which higher syphilis rates could have been included in the survey Reviewer #2: No further concerns. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Highlighting a population-based re-emergence of Syphilis infection and assessing associated risk factors among pregnant women in Cameroon: Evidence from the 2009, 2012 and 2017 national sentinel surveillance surveys of HIV and syphilis. PONE-D-20-11194R2 Dear Dr. KENGNE-NDE, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Remco PH Peters, MD, PhD, DLSHTM Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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