Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 13, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-14231 Small, Dense LDL-Cholesterol and Coronary Heart Disease: A Systematic Review and Meta-analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Liou, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process in a point by point fashion. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 31 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review PVZ GENERAL COMMENTS This work is a meta-analysis paired with a narrative review on data regarding small dense (sd) LDL and their cholesterol content. A total of 17 observational studies including about 29000 subjects who suffered 4900 events (i.e. around 17%) entered the meta-analysis. The authors investigate the predictive value of these parameters for the incidence of coronary artery disease. From this background, it is necessary 1) to more clearly state what is sdLDL(-C); 2) which particle characteristics are measured thereby; and 3) to more clearly state that the reports included investigated healthy of high risk individuals (which they do) but not patients with established disease (which they do not) SPECIFIC COMMENTS The Introduction is appropriate to introduce the topic to the readership of an open access journal with holistic spectrum. However, one misses quotes on the pioneering work of Melissa Austin and the connection to triglyceride handling by Ron Krauss. Methods Again, it appears necessary to give more details on measurement of sd particles, also on their total cholesterol content, free and esterified cholesterol composition. Supplementary Table 4 is not sufficient for the reader who should learn about the validity and limitations of the assays in clinical terms Results These are clearly stated. However, one misses more details on the absolute values of sd particle and their prospective value. One would like to know if there is a continuous risk or a threshold. If results are not clear – as Figure 4 suggests - this should be stated in the discussion under limitations. Discussion In the first paragraph the OR is discussed. Considering that quartile or tertile studies are included, the numerical value (1.5) should somewhat be de-emphasized although it is of considerable dimension. When the authors allude to Mendelian randomization studies, they should go more into details which functional properties are attributable to the SNP`s. This text segment is too superficial. The landmark paper by B. Ference on LPL is not even considered (vide infra). Here, more work is necessary. Line 229: more insight into fasting and postprandial triglyceride handling and the link to sd particles is necessary. The discussion of guidelines is partly wrong. One would like to read more about levels of evidence and classes of recommendation, e.g. in the 2019 EAS/ESC guidelines. A more cautious statement is necessary. References Ref 55 is (Brian Ference et al.) is not referred to in the text, at least I did not find it, not even by a search program. This is unacceptable. Reviewer #2: The authors report on the results of a systematic review and meta-analysis on the association of small dense LDL and CHD. The topic is of high interest and the manuscript provides interesting results on the question whether small dense LDL has a prognostic value for cardiovascular risk prediction. The manuscript is well written, statistical analyses are state of the art and the presentation of the results is appropriate. However, there are concerns about the search strategy and the discussion. Specific comments: 1. The title is misleading. The review includes not only studies with sdLDL-cholesterol but also studies with sdLDL particle number. 2. The authors searched for "small dense LDL" or "small dense LDL-Cholesterol". However, some methods, such as NMR, determine the particle number and size and not the density. Thus, papers that use the term "small LDL" are likely to be overlooked. The authors should include also include the terms "dense LDL" and "dense LDL cholesterol" in their search strategy. 3. The most interesting question is whether sdLDL (particle number and / or cholesterol concentration) has a prognostic value in addition to established lipid biomarkers, especially LDL-C. In this context the adjustment strategies of the reviewed studies are important: some studies adjusted for lipid markers and others not. Interestingly, studies that determined sdLDL particles and adjusted for lipid parameters (Zelijkovic, Kwon) reported ORs of 2.87 and 2.0, respectively, whereas the ORs for sdLDL-C plus adjustment for lipid parameters were lower (Arsenault, Koba) (Fig 2A and B). The authors should discuss this observation. 4. There are some inconsistencies regarding the methods between Table 1 and Supplemental table 4 (assay details): e.g. Mykannen (Ref 34) used electrophoresis, and the two studies of Koba from 2002 also (not LDL-EX from Denka). 5. The authors reviewed studies with incidence of CHD as primary outcome, studies using cardiovascular mortality as endpoint were not included. Therefore, the conclusions drawn from this meta-analysis on the prognostic value of sdLDL and its potential as a therapeutic target are limited to primary prevention. The authors mentioned this in the methods section, but it should also be included in the limitations. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Association of Small, Dense LDL-Cholesterol Concentration and Lipoprotein Particle Characteristics with Coronary Heart Disease: A Systematic Review and Meta-analysis PONE-D-20-14231R1 Dear Dr. Liou, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Andreas Zirlik, MD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: All points are well addressed now. The authors have done a very good Job. They have included more references, addressed all criticisms and even made further calculations. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Heinz Drexel, MD, FESC, FAHA, FRCP (Ed.), Professor of Medicine Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-14231R1 Association of Small, Dense LDL-Cholesterol Concentration and Lipoprotein Particle Characteristics with Coronary Heart Disease: A Systematic Review and Meta-analysis Dear Dr. Liou: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Univ. Prof. Dr. Andreas Zirlik Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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