Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-17402 Peripheral Blood Levels of Brain-Derived Neurotrophic Factor in Patients with Post-traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD): A Systematic Review and Meta-analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rezaei, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 04 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Therefore, BDNF levels in the human blood are total BDNF and proBDNF. Please discuss the following articles. Yoshida T, et al. PLOS ONE 2012; 7(8): e42676. Hashimoto K. Eur Arch Psychiatry Clin Neurosci 2016; 266(3): 285-287. Journal requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. We noticed you have some minor occurrence of overlapping text with the following previous publication(s), which needs to be addressed: https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0278584609001286?via%3Dihub In your revision ensure you cite all your sources (including your own works), and quote or rephrase any duplicated text outside the methods section. Further consideration is dependent on these concerns being addressed. 3. Please remove your figures from within your manuscript file, leaving your figures uploaded only as individual TIFF/EPS image files, uploaded separately. These will be automatically included in the reviewers’ PDF. 4. Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting and ambitious meta analysis of the association between peripheral BDNF and PTSD. There are several, mostly methodological issues that need clarifications in order to properly assess the conclusions. The authors need to define how the diagnosis of PTSD were determined in the meta analysis. In the original 20 studies, there is a mixture of clinically diagnosed PTSD, and diagnosis based on scores on PTSD rating scales. For examples, what cut-off scores were used in the various papers to classify a person a suffering from PTSD. How was exposure defined? To what degree were prior trauma, e g adverse childhood experiences accounted for? And, what scales were used, apart from clinical diagnostic interviews, to determine a person had met exposure criteria required at the time for the dx of PTSD. There is no info as to the time between the critical exposure event and the diagnosis of PTSD, nor time between diagnosis and the respective study date. Looking at the original studies, there peripheral concentration of BDNF various in both directions (higher/lower) comparing PTSD cases with controls. In most cases, the 95% confidence interval overlaps with 1, that is, the risk ratio does not significantly differ from the null hypothesis. More info is needed as to how the NOS scores were assigned since these scores are critical because they appear to significantly change the weighting of studies and thus overall outcomes. The authors relate trauma exposure to increased neuroplasticity and memory consolidation. There is a need to expand the Discussion section in terms of why one would expect lower levels of BDNF in PTSD patients - apart from referring to SNP and other pre-exposure changes. In terms of the hippocampus, well-controlled studies, e g involving twins where one has been exposed to trauma and develops PTSD, that there are no differences in hippocampal volume. Overall, a potentially interesting study. However, the reader would benefit from more detailed information as to methodological approaches used in terms of a comparison across studies with very different design and study participants. Reviewer #2: The authors examined the difference in the blood levels of BDNF between patients with PTSD and healthy subjects using the meta-analysis. They showed that the BDNF levels in patients with PTSD were lower than those in health subjects. They suggested that PTSD might be a neuroplastic disorder. This is an interesting study because several animal studies using an animal model of PTSD reported the decreased levels of BDNF in the brain including hippocampus. However, there are several issues to be clarified. Results: In this manuscript, the authors demonstrated that the blood levels of BDNF in patients with PTSD were lower than those in healthy subjects. However, numerous factors other than the diagnosis of PTSD affect the blood levels of BDNF. Although the authors mentioned that subgroup meta-analysis was not appropriate because of the small size of subjects in Discussion, it is required to demonstrate several factors that substantially affect the BDNF levels in Result. As the authors mentioned in Discussion, it is well known that the blood BDNF levels in depression are lower. In this context, they have to show that how many papers assessed depressive mood in patients with PTSD in these 20 studies. If possible, please compare the blood BDNF levels between PTSD patients with and without depression. As the authors mentioned, the polymorphism (Val66Met) of the BDNF gene affects the BDNF levels. So, they are required to show how many papers examined the genotype difference in the BDNF levels in these 20 studies. It is well know that administration of SSRIs increased the blood levels of BDNF in patients with depression. Similarly, it is conceivable that SSRIs increase the blood BDNF levels in patients with PTSD. Thus, they should show the difference between unmedicated and medicated patients. Discussion: Although the authors did not demonstrate the influence of the genotype (Val66Met) on the BDNF levels in Results, they precisely discussed in Discussion. Because the section of the genotype in Discussion is redundant, please concisely discuss this issue. As I mentioned in above, many factors affecting the blood BDNF levels were not examined in this study. In this context, the authors should provide the section of Limitation in Discussion in which they describe what factors are required to be examined to determine whether the blood levels of BDNF are involved in the pathophysiology of PTSD. In addition, the authors did not show the ELISA kits used in these 20 studies. The study conducted by Placchini and colleagues in Scientific Reports (DOI: 10.1038/srep17989) reported that the 5 different kits exhibited very different inter-assay variations, and they identified two assays to obtain reliable measurements of human serum BDNF. Based on this finding, please mention the limitation of the BDNF assay in Limitation. Reviewer #3: The authors performed a systematic review and meta-analysis on blood BDNF levels in patients with PTSD. I have the following comments: 1, the manuscript reported significant between-study heterogeneity. However, how the heterogeneity was calculated was not described. More importantly, the authors shoud use subgroup and meta-regression analyses to address the high levels of the between-study heterogeneity. 2, the authors may need to discuss the sampling source as an potential variable for the observed heterogeneity( reference see : Mol Psychiatry. 2017 Feb;22(2):312-320.). 3. Sensitivity analysis shoud be performed to demonstrate the robustness of the meta-analysis outcome 4. The authors described non-PTSD controls, were those healthy controls or disease controls or both included? 5. The language of the paper need to be thoroughly edited. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Bengt B. Arnetz Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. 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PONE-D-20-17402R1 Peripheral Blood Levels of Brain-Derived Neurotrophic Factor in Patients with Post-traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD): A Systematic Review and Meta-analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rezaei, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Although you addressed to reviewer's comments, you did not respond my comments carefully. Please revise your manuscript again. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 06 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Kenji Hashimoto, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Although you addressed all comments from three reviewers, you did not respond my comment. Commercially available BDNF ELISA kits can recognize both BDNF and its precursor proBDNF. Therefore, many reports show total values of BDNF (mature form) and proBDNF in the human blood. In the limitation section, the authors should add some sentences including references suggested by the editor. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have carefully addressed my critique in the revised version of the manuscript . I have no further comments. Reviewer #2: The authors appropriately responded to all comments. In addition, DNA methylation status of the BDNF gene will be attractive. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Bengt B. Arnetz, MD, PhD, MPH, MScEpi Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-20-17402R2 Peripheral blood levels of brain-derived neurotrophic factor in patients with post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD): a systematic review and meta-analysis Dear Dr. Rezaei: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Kenji Hashimoto Section Editor PLOS ONE |
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