Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 17, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-18596 Emergence of a novel chikungunya virus strain out of the Mombasa, Kenya 2017-2018 outbreak. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Eyase, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. specifically, The 3 reviewers acknowledged the interest and quality of the results but asked for some improvement of the presentation and discussion. More importantly, more details about the NGS data have to be provided in order to give a stronger background as requested by the 1rst reviewer. As noted by the 2 rd reviewer, to adress the role of mutation in increasing CHIKV vector transmissibility, experimental proof have to be provided thus this part of the discussion should be balanced and is mainly (in the context of this article) suggestion for future work. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 30 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: While l agree with the authors that the emergence of CHIK in Ae. aegypti would potentially be a major issue for global public health, I have some fundamental issues with the strength of the argument they present. There are also some potentially important technical issues that need to be addressed. Technical issues 1. the authors describe a targeted amplicon sequencing approach for CHIK, but while they present the primer sequences, they only indicate “5 combinations of these primers” but - not the specific combinations or predicted amplicons. this should be corrected. 2. Furthermore, they do not provide any data on the quality of sequencing, number of reads per library, chemistry used other than “NexteraXT” which isn’t detailed enough (2x150, 2x250? single end reads?). ALthough the genomes are deposited to GenBank, the raw sequencing reads are not available from SRA, thus preventing anyone from attempting to reproduce their results. This must be addressed. 3. the sequencing library approach they used is seriously flawed. PCR amplicons from separate single-plex reactions, which are then pooled in “equal volumes” and then cDNA purified and a library prep’d is a poorly thought out approach. There’s no ability to control for amplification efficiency across reactions, and the “equal volumes” of amplicons could have orders of magnitude differences in reads from each reaction. 4. the bioinformatics Pipeline is poorly described. De novo assembly of deep amplicon sequencing data is not a good approach unless you do substantial preprocessing of the raw reads to downsample your data. SPADES assembler inparticular can produce assembly graphs that make no sense simply by overloading the algorithm with large amounts of identicle reads, while maintaining a relatively low error rate. This is because sheer numbers of reads with errors will create incorrectly assembled contigs. Second - the “NGS_Mapper” tool they reference has... no reference... what is this? I’ve never heard of it, and there’s no citation for it. Was this a place holder the PI put in that the postdoc was supposed to “please fill in the mapper name” ? this is hopefully the error made here. In any case, even if they names the mapper - (read mapping the appropriate approach to take with known small RNA virus genomes... no assembly) - the pipeline must account for how the primers are trimmed and removed from the reads. Since they did not present any details on the amplicons, but indicated NexteraXT as the library prep chemistry, I’m left to assume that tagmentation was performed, thereby shredding the amplicons into semi random fragments (as we would expect). the issue though is that once this is done you must remove the primer sequences _after mapping_ your reference genomes - otherwise you will have significant and unwanted bias in your consensus sequences. 5. The comments made about protein structural changes need to be toned done. These are predictions ONLY, and are at best “potential” changes that “might” result in structural changes. Without structural / biochemistry studies - they can’t be sure. 6. The phylogenetic analysis of the paper is the strongest aspect of their study. They did a very thorough job on this and (correctly) used a GTR+g model for the ML tree. thumbs up on this. Fundamental Issue a/ lastly - the authors have discovered three new mutations from an outbreak in Mombasa. They use “potential(ly)” at least three times in the abstract - but claim this -potential- mutations are somehow connected with Ae. aegypti transmissibility. But... no lab work was done to show these mutations have anything to do with host fitness, virus life cycle, or anything to do with increased pathogenicity. At best - these are forensic markers for the outbreak they investigated - and while interesting that three mutations were unique to this outbreak in Mombasa - that’s as far as the authors should speculate. I’m happy to discuss this review with the authors if they disagree. Reviewer #2: The authors obtained 17 human serum samples positive to chikungunya virus (CHIKV) collected from the 2017-2018 Mombasa outbreak. They were able to sequence 14 full genomes and 3 partial genomes from these samples. The full genomes were placed in a phylogenetic context within the Indian Ocean sublineage (IOL), including the 2016 Manadera outbreak and the 2004 initial coastal Kenya outbreak. They didn’t find the Aedes albopictus adapting mutation E1:A226V but observed Aedes aegypti adapting mutations E1:K211E and E2:V264A previously detected in India. They also found mutations specific to the 2017-2018 Mombasa outbreak, E1:S210R, E1:V80A, E1:T82I and E1:V84D that could bring some increase of transmission in A. albopictus. The analyses in the manuscript sound appropriate, figures are clear and the results support the conclusions. I have one major comment and few minors. Major comment: - The authors choose to mainly focus on describing mutations that could increase CHIKV vector transmissibility. I found that the manuscript lacks of results and discussion about the 2017-2018 Mombasa outbreak itself. The manuscript would benefit if the authors describe a bit more the phylogenetic patterns of the 2017-2018 Mombasa outbreak and discuss about its origin and spread. Minor comments: - A sequence assembly statistics table should be included in the manuscript to allow the readers to evaluate sequence and mutation robustness. - The three partial genomes that are not included in the phylogenetic analyses could be added if they have at least 50% of sequence coverage - A careful proofread of the manuscript is necessary to remove typos that are disseminated all along it Reviewer #3: This study analyzed and compared 14 CHIKV complete genome sequences obtained from patients and identified a triple mutation signature (E1-V80A, E1-T82I, E1-V84D) and a double mutation (E1: K211E, E2:V264A) both associated with Aedes albopictus and Aedes aegypti adaptations in these CHIKV circulating in Mombasa, Kenyan coast. Conclusions state that a large diversity of CHIKV strains circulate in east Africa, which may emerge as a worldwide public health problem in the future, emphasizing necessity for constant surveillance and urgent vaccine development to protect people. Title should reflect the mutations involved in mosquito adaptations (both species). Please complete authors’ addresses Please correct the word Alphavirus (genus) or alphavirus (in general when referring to any species from this genus). Alpha-virus is not correct (see ICTV website for virus taxonomy). Backgroud lacks a little of “introduction” to the virus itself. Please check for CHKIV incorrect abbreviation (correct for CHIKV). Results: “a period spanning 5 months from mid-December 2017 to mid-May 2018.” Two tables are assigned as “Table 1” (primer sets and site-specific selection pressure. Phylogenetic trees are in low resolution and is not possible to read anything. Please separate background and discussion paragraphs. Discussion does not consider phylogenetic trees, molecular clock, only the mutations (please discuss as well). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Emergence of a novel chikungunya virus strain bearing the E1:V80A substitution, out of the Mombasa, Kenya 2017-2018 outbreak. PONE-D-20-18596R1 Dear Dr. Eyase, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I want to thank the authors for addressing the concerns of the reviewers on this important manuscript. Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: This second version is a lot improved on writing than the latest one. I do understand that these mutations leading to vector adaptations, as already demonstrated in literature, are quite concerning since it was already reported for Zika virus, previous to the emergence of the virus in the Americas. For this reason, this article should be published shortly, representing a very important contribution for arbovirus surveillance. Few comments are described above in order to contribute with author´s review. Abstract: could be reformulated in a more organized and direct approach, still need work to achieve the same quality of writing of the rest of the manuscript. Please indicate in which CHIKV genotype these triple mutations were identified in the abstract, try to make the text more complete of results. It is not clear in the abstract, however in the manuscript/tree is possible to understand that they refer to IOL strains. Abstract should reflect more the results/discussion. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Jonathan L Jacobs Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No |
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PONE-D-20-18596R1 Emergence of a novel Chikungunya virus strain bearing the E1:V80A substitution, out of the Mombasa, Kenya 2017-2018 outbreak. Dear Dr. Eyase: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Pierre Roques Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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