Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-06452 Sustaining compliance with hand hygiene when resources are low: a quality improvement report. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nabulsi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Two external reviewers evaluated your manuscript and highlighted a number of concerns regarding the study design and methodology; discussion of the findings; and the overall structure of the article. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 05 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Joseph Donlan Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Regarding reviewer 1's point on ethical approval, we understand that you carried out a quality improvement study and that this was therefore exempt from the requirement for ethics committee approval, so there is no need to provide further justification on this aspect. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, thank you for the opportunity to Review your article. I do have some Major concerns regarding your study: 1) There is no Ethical vote, though you stated that physicians and parents took part in a Survey. 2) Introduction line 59-60: I miss a Hygiene expert who performs the Training of the M5M of HH. 3) Methods: Your mehtods are a mix of methods and results. Furthermore, you only performed compliance measurements of two indications, mainly, before and after Patient contact. There are important HH indications missing. You mentioned a surveillance of physicians and parents, however, there are no results presented in dtail. In line 92 you mention low compliance rates, however, in the hole manuscript I do not find any very low compliance rate, they are rather high, in my eyes too high! You also mention 20 anonymous observations, how can Observation be like that when physicians receive Feedback after an Observation? Actually, I do not understand your methodological Approach, it is described in an unclear way. Line 159: Did you only collect data on before and after Patient contact? 4) Results: As you stated in two years 2987 observations were performded, which included only two indications! So patients never received an Infusion from a physician or nurses never had contact with Body fluid or the near Patient surrounding? Also the number of observations seems rather low. Did you also observe others (i.e.. dietology, physical therapy,..)? Overall, compliance rates seems rather high and 3 indications are missing. There are no surveillance data presented. 5) The discussion is poor and is lacking of recent literature (mostly between 2002 and 2013). Kind regards Reviewer #2: The manuscript provides an interesting insight into the implementation of the WHO-multimodal strategy to improve and sustain hand hygiene compliance rates in a setting with limited resources. Data provided are sound and analysis was performed in a rigorous way. However, some minor revisions are required. INTRODUCTION 1. The authors reported that their quality improvement initiative was designed to increase and sustain compliance above 90% for at least two years. How did they identify such a threshold? Is there any evidence to identify as meaningful a cut-off of 90% and not below or above, like 85% or 95%? Please explain it. METHODS 2. How did the nurse manager choose the observer each day? Alphabetic order, random order based on sequence, …? Besides, using such a high number of observers could lead to important differences. How was the inter-observer reliability tested? Were they trained? And how much time passed between conducting the observation and filling out the questionnaire? Was a recall bias possible? 3. “Non-compliers were sent emails by the Paediatric Quality Director about the details of the non-compliance incident, …”: does it mean that the observed healthcare worker’s name was disclosed in the observation form? Why? RESULTS 4. Several papers in the literature have pointed out that hand hygiene compliance may vary across professional categories and in relation to several factors (i.e., shifts, types of interaction between patients and healthcare workers). Is any other information available from your study to support or dismiss these hypotheses? DISCUSSION 5. “This quality improvement initiative demonstrated that adding ownership and goal setting to the WHO-5 multimodal intervention increased, and sustained hygiene compliance …”. I am not sure that this study really proved what the authors claim. We don’t know what would have happened if the interventions were carried out without these newly added components. It would be safer to say that the implementation of the whole strategy led to an increase in hand hygiene compliance rates. 6. In the baseline data, the authors report that “the overall compliance was 92% before, and 86% after patient encounter”. This result is worth a proper elaboration, as it seems to be in contrast with other findings where after patient’s contact the hand hygiene compliance rates were significantly lower, probably because hand hygiene was usually performed for self-protection. 7. I would say that real-time feedback to non-compliers is likely to be the main factor responsible for the successful campaign conducted in this hospital. Several other studies discuss the difficulty in maintaining a high rate of adherence to recommended practice over time and the importance of providing educational reinforcement and performance feedback to HCWs so that improvements can be sustained (for instance, see: Baccolini V, D'Egidio V, de Soccio P, Migliara G, Massimi A, et al. Effectiveness over time of a multimodal intervention to improve compliance with standard hygiene precautions in an intensive care unit of a large teaching hospital. Antimicrob Resist Infect Control. 2019; 8:92). I wonder what happened when the campaign stopped, and if would not have been appropriate to conduct a few observations after a few months. This could be added as an important limitation of the study. ********** 6. 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Sustaining compliance with hand hygiene when resources are low: a quality improvement report. PONE-D-20-06452R1 Dear Dr. Nabulsi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, thank you very much for answering my comments. However, you discuss the WHO 5 multimodal model and Focus only on two indications. I cannot Support your opinion, that in a low resource Hospital there is no time for the other three indications. As this should represent a quality initiative I miss a comprehensive approach. It is the Patient which should be protected and it is the staff which should protect themselves. I am not convinced of this study at all. Kind regards Reviewer #2: all comments have been addressed. No further revision is required. The manuscript is clear and writtein in an intelligible fashion. Reviewer #3: At the beginning of the method section you stated that the project was mandated and approved by the Hospital Administration, was exempt from IRB. This meant that participants had no choice. Why do you have a section on ethical considerations? Although strictly QI activities usually do not require IRB oversight, this particular QI initiative followed tenets of research, which include a hypothesis and some basic statistical analysis; as such an IRB review would have been appropriate. In addition, some ethical challenges were reported by few residents and medical students.The issue of anonymity even though addressed remains questionable; given that for non-compliers the quality team opted to copy their supervisors on emails which meant confidentiality between participants and the quality team was breached. Were there any penalties imposed on non-compliers? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No |
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PONE-D-20-06452R1 Sustaining compliance with hand hygiene when resources are low: a quality improvement report Dear Dr. Nabulsi: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Oathokwa Nkomazana Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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