Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 17, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-32681 Contact-dependent traits in Pseudomonas syringae B728a PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hernandez, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As you can see in the comments by both reviewers there are several issues that need adjustments. For instance there is a lack of statistical analyses. Except for the verification of the RNA Seq data by qRT-PCR (optional) I strongly suggest to modify the manuscript according to the comments of both reviewers. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 10 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The present work showed that expression of syfA is induced in Pseudomonas syringae B728a cells immobilized on surfaces. RNA-seq analysis revealed that more 3000 deferentially expressed genes between planktonic cells and immobilized cells. The techniques used in this study were sound, but additional verification and analyses are suggested to improve this manuscript. 1. P values are missing all figures. 2. Key genes/categories should be labelled and highlighted in Figure 3 and 4. 3. Part of the RNA-seq data should be verified by qRT-PCR. 4. Short paragraphs should be combined. 5. Suggest to add a final figure to summarize all changed gene categories, which would help readers to better understand the overall contact-dependent traits in P. syringae B728a. Reviewer #2: This manuscript explores the question of how Pseudomonas syringae bacteria respond to surface contact. The work follows up on an observation that the expression of a gene for a key biosurfactant in this organism noticeably responded to surface contact, leading the authors to wonder if other genes responded similarly. Given the lifestyle of this organism as a resident on leaf surfaces, they hypothesized that the bacteria use surface contact as one mechanism by which they initiate the expression of physiological traits needed to live on leaves. The manuscript provides data demonstrating that this biosurfactant gene is induced within two hours following surface contact, that this induction occurs on a variety of distinct types of surfaces including leaves, and that large sets of genes are upregulated and downregulated following surface contact when examined after two hours. Much of the manuscript speculates on biological explanations for the upregulation and downregulation of genes. The work is sound and clearly presented, and the explanations are credible. The major interesting finding is the sheer number of genes that were influenced by the surface contact treatment, with a few surprises in the nature of the genes that were altered. The data confirmed the increased expression of the biosurfactant genes on a surface, but surprisingly indicated decreased expression of all other secondary metabolite genes as well as a range of genes involved with osmotic stress tolerance. Similarly surprising, the data indicated increased expression of flagellar synthesis genes and siderophore genes. These unexpected findings make the results quite interesting to contemplate. A major consideration is the extent to which the results could reflect unintended consequences of the treatment. This was one area that I thought warranted a little more discussion. The gene expression comparisons were made between cells kept in liquid culture, and cells from that culture that were put on a membrane, subjected to vacuum-mediated removal of liquid for 5 seconds, and then transferred onto the surface of a KB plate for 2 hours. Thus, as compared to the cells maintained in broth, the treated cells experienced a 2-hour period of immobilization on a membrane, as well as exposure to agar in the KB plate and a 5-second period of potential shear stress and oxygen exposure during the vacuum treatment. Was the vacuum application enough to induce a mechanical stress? The authors explain how contact-mediated cell envelope/cell wall stress may explain the induction of genes for LPS and peptidoglycan synthesis. Could the mechanical stress due to the vacuum have been enough to alter the mechanosensitive ion channels? This has been predicted (Kimkes and Heinemann 2020 How bacteria recognise and respond to surface contact FEMS Microbiol Rev), and I wondered if this may have resulted in sufficient inward water movement to repress the expression of genes involved in osmotic stress tolerance. Similarly, could this have been sufficient to remove flagella, thus inducing flagellar synthesis because of loss? (This assumes that the cells in liquid media had flagella to begin with, which may or may not have been the case.) The description of how they identified genes as differentially regulated (lines 159-161) does not mention that an approach was taken to account for the large number of comparisons that were made (generally a false discovery rate is stated). Such adjustments are mentioned in the statistical analysis section for the hypergeometric distribution work, but it is not clear if they were accounted for in identifying differentially regulated genes. The authors speculate that this transition to surface growth may be anticipatory of what is involved in growing a leaf surface. Since co-author Lindow previously looked at the induction of genes in this same strain on leaves (ref 26), then it would have been useful to have a more explicit comparison of the genes expressed in this study to those induced on leaves. For example, even a Venn diagram like that shown for P. aeruginosa in Fig S6 would have been useful. (Note that this comparison was done for some selected genes throughout the discussion.) The text describing Fig 1 (lines 175-178) does not align well with the legend within the figure. Is the “filter on plastic” the third treatment on line 177 (“a 0.4 um Isopore filter floated on the surface of a small quantity of KB broth”)? The text in the legend (Lines 193-194) needs a clear description of what these treatments are, particularly as the text only mentions “these surfaces” but broth is not a surface. Figure 2 would be improved with the inclusion of statistics in the figure or legend. It is not clear that statistics were performed to support the conclusion that the induction was not influenced by the nature of the surface. Fig S1 would be useful as a table. Fig S2 is not useful. I also didn’t find Figs S4-S7 particularly useful. Fig 3 needs to have a description of what the dendograms are on the x and y axes. Just a few comments on the findings presented: The literature describing surface sensing by bacteria generally involves the idea that as planktonic cells move toward a surface, they experience changes in the physical and chemical properties of the surface, attach via cell appendages, and then attach more firmly via other factors such as extracellular polymers. The treatment used here did not allow for movement, but could have allowed for these stages to occur. The authors do not mention pili genes, which could be involved in attachment, or EPS genes (e.g., the genes for Pel, which increases adhesion of P. aeruginosa to surfaces, and are present in this P. syringae strain). Were these genes affected? The authors propose that “a secondary signal, indicative of conditions within the leaf, and not a surface itself, is required for expression of such virulence factors” as phytotoxins. Whereas this is possible, this does not explain why their expression would be lower on a filter on KB than in KB broth, since broth would also lack such secondary signals. The authors may want to add a qualification to their statement. The discussion in the paragraph comparing the results with P. syringae to those with E. coli (lines 526-550) suggest that both bacterial genera may be expressing genes in response to a surface in anticipation of needing particular traits for survival on a host. Although appealing, I find it less credible than they are anticipating traits for survival in a biofilm. Both organisms live in a diversity of habitats, and inducing genes particular to survival on a host when contacting debris in sewage (E. coli) or in streams (P. syringae) could be wasteful; however, growth in a biofilm would occur more universally on the surfaces they encounter, host or otherwise. Minor editorial comments Line 62 Consider replacing “expanding the conditions under which” with “expanding the time frame during which” Lines 130-143 If the RNA isolation followed the RNA kit instructions, then this could be shorted to simply state this (or state this and describe modifications). Lines 268 and 282 These should state “up-regulated/down-regulated in immobilized cells as compared to planktonic cells…”. Line 442 Spaciotemporal should be spatiotemporal ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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