Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 1, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-20208 Dynamic hyperinflation induced by the 6-minute pegboard and ring test in hospitalized patients with exacerbated COPD PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Yamaguti, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. All reviewers raised some significan tconcenrs which are mainly attributed to methodological issues. Furthermore you have to convince us about validity of the current study. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 25 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript entitled “Dynamic hyperinflation induced by the 6PBRT in hospitalized patients with exacerbated COPD” the authors present the findings that the 6PBRT is safe and applicable for patients hospitalized due to AECOPD. The data collected in this study contribute to our understanding of this phenomenon and the manuscript could be considered for publication following revisions. There is a limitation. To overcome this limitation, the authors could do 6PBRT in patients with not only AECOPD and patients with recovered AECOPD. To overcome this limitation, it is necessary that to compare patients with AECOPD and who have recovered from AECOPD. Please check line 95 and 319, bibliography marks are wrong style. Reviewer #2: The authors wrote an interesting manuscript regarding dynamic hyperinflation during COPD exacerbations. Very strong is that they used actual physical maneuvers to assess this. The used actual changes from base line to assess the changes which is strong to. Unfortunately the was no information regarding the DH in stable state for the included patients I do have some comments Mayor: Was the trial registered in a public database? What was the predefined primary endpoint for the test? The manuscripts suggests that at first the overall occurrence of DH was the endpoint, which when proved non significant was switched towards cross sectional analysis. There is no information about the presence of static hyperinflation in the reported patients during the exacerbation, please discuss how this might influence the interpretation of the now presented results Please report data about the treatment patients were receiving during the exacerbations and the policy regarding the last dose of bronchodilators prior to the measurements. The PFSDQ-M and CAT were applied to the patients but not reported Minor Why was the cutoff of 150 ml chosen rather 100 ml for IC? Please discuss Please discuss the relation between the presence of static hyperinflation during exacerbation with DH. (For inspiration see e.g DOI: 10.1183/09031936.05.00136304 , DOI: 10.2147/COPD.S154878, DOI: 10.1164/rccm.200504-595OC DOI: 10.1016/S2213-2600(15)00459-2 ) Please discuss the known information and previous trials assessing DH during exacerbations e.g. with other test such as metronome and relate your outcomes to those Please discuss the lack of data regarding stable state for the interpretation of the results. E.g. what if DH was present in stable state and actually got better or vice versa, and what about static hyperinflation during stable state and the influence on the now presented results Please extend the baseline data of the patients with more clinical parameters Please explain the high number of interruptions during the tests Please explain the high number of dropouts Reviewer #3: Reason for Reject: A small study and of low impact with a specific task that says something on disease and upper extremity fitness and general fitness therefore, but i do not think that this belongs to a journal with such high impact factor due to rather low priority. Reviewer #4: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. I send some suggestions to improve the quality of the study. The aim of this study was to evaluate physiological responses and Dynamic Hyperinflation induced by the 6-minute pegboard and ring test in hospitalized patients with acute exacerbation of COPD. There is this gap in the literature on the study of the occurrence of dynamic hyperinflation during activities of unsupported upper limbs such as 6PBRT. The proposal of the study aims to answer this question and its basis is structured by the scientific literature, however I felt a lack of greater theoretical basis justifying its realization. Only 21 studies were used as references for the construction of the text and there are more papers available in the literature that support the ideas pointed out and of great scientific relevance that can contribute. - Were the values obtained in the pulmonary function test compared to specific reference values for the population? - The original description of the test should be reported/referenced on line 162. - Two specific questionnaires related to lung disease were applied (PFSDQ-M and CAT), but the results were not presented. - 10 patients interrupted the test for the reasons indicated in lines 297-299, however the time of this interruption was not presented, and we know that this time can influence the values obtained. In addition, the information that all patients completed the 6 minutes of the test was only informed in the discussion section. Did any patient complete the 6 minutes of the test at rest? - The statistical tests that were performed and which variables and moments were considered to calculate must be presented and signaled in the figure 3. - The number of rings moved during the test was not shown. I believe that this value should be informed to the reader. - Also, inform the number of rings for patients who presented HD and those who did not. Did patients present HD move a lower number of rings? Was the number of rings obtained by patients lower than the normal value already established for the population? - The aim of this study was to evaluate physiological responses and DH induced by 6PBRT in hospitalized patients with acute exacerbation of COPD, however I consider it important to point out if the occurrence of HD was able to provide worse performance in the test and not only if it occurs or not. - Line 331: “dynamic hyperinflation” = DH. - Lines 337-339: "The mean number found in our study for MV at the end of 6PBRT was 19.5 ± 3.31 L / min, suggesting that ventilatory mechanisms probably had little impact on the development of dynamic hyperinflation and intolerance to the test". How can the test intolerance be pointed out if we do not know if the patients had lower than expected ring number values? - Lines 373-376: "The main limitations of our study were the number of patients who refused to participate, even though they had similar characteristics to the study population; and the impossibility of evaluating the tidal volume during the test, which would give us more accurate information about the ventilation and mechanisms that cause dynamic hyperinflation ". There are recent studies that can support the occurrence of greater ventilatory demand impacting patients' performance in tests to evaluate the functional capacity of upper limbs such as 6PBRT. - The aims must be answered at the conclusion of the study; however, evaluating the safety and applicability of 6PBRT for hospitalized patients with COPD for acute exacerbation was not pointed out as an initial aim of the study. ********** 6. 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Dynamic hyperinflation induced by the 6-minute pegboard and ring test in hospitalized patients with exacerbated COPD PONE-D-20-20208R1 Dear Dr. Yamaguti, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript entitled “Dynamic hyperinflation induced by the 6PBRT in hospitalized patients with exacerbated COPD” the authors present the findings that the 6PBRT is safe and applicable for patients hospitalized due to AECOPD. The data collected in this study contribute to our understanding of this phenomenon and the manuscript could be considered for publication following revisions. The authors report 6PBRT in patients with only on AECOPD. Please report data about the recovered pulmonary function test after hospitalization patients with AECOPD. And It is necessary that 6PBRT data in patients with recovered AECOPD. It will help us to understand how severe those patients with AECOPD and COPD. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Kenichi Takeda |
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PONE-D-20-20208R1 Dynamic hyperinflation induced by the 6-minute pegboard and ring test in hospitalized patients with exacerbated COPD Dear Dr. Yamaguti: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr Stelios Loukides Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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