Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-18208 Factors associated with successful completion of outpatient parenteral antibiotic therapy in an area with a high prevalence of multidrug-resistant bacteria: 30-day hospital admission and mortality rates PLOS ONE Dear Dr.ssa Salles, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 05 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: PLOS ONE Full Tittle: Factors associated with successful completion of outpatient parenteral antibiotic therapy in an area with a high prevalence of multidrug-resistant bacteria: 30-day hospital admission and mortality rates Manuscript Number: PONE-D-20-18208 Article Type: Research Article Corresponding Author: Thais Cristina Garbelini Salles, M.D. Universidade Federal de São Paulo – UNIFESP. Sao Paulo, SP BRAZIL QUESTIONS/SUGGESTIONS ● PATIENTS AND METHODS: ❖ Does the fact that a patient is assigned the antibiotic in the Santa Helena/Amil United Health Group network or at the patient's home, respond to any special criteria? ❖ It is important to know who administered the antibiotic at home: the nursing staff, the patients or their caregiver. How was the visiting schedule of nursing staff at the patient's home? What was the method of administration of the antibiotic? Was it by gravity or by the use of an elastomeric or electronic pump? Could be the type of administration of the antibiotic related to a higher mortality rate or a higher hospital admission? ❖ LINE 102, “The variables were evaluated prospectively to determine factors related to hospital admission”. Reading the article, the conclusion reached is that the study is retrospective, based on a later analysis of a group of data extracted from daily clinical practice. Could the authors clarify this point? ● RESULTS: ❖ Do the authors dispose of Charlson’s Index of the patients?, Could the Charlson index be related to a higher mortality rate or to a higher hospital admission? ❖ If data were available, it would be important to know what the referring department of the patients (medical specialties, surgical specialties, emergency department) was. Was the referring department of patients associated with greater therapeutic failure, mortality or hospital admission? In case that patients had been previously admitted to the hospital, ¿what was the average stay in conventional hospitalization? What was the duration of the antibiotic treatment during the conventional hospitalization? If the requested data were included, the methods section should also be modified. ❖ Another piece of information to provide, if available, would be to classify pneumonia according to FINE or CURB-65 severity index. Have FINE or CURB-65 any relationship with mortality or hospital admission? ❖ What other antibiotics were used besides ceftriaxone? Is any antibiotic associated with a higher percentage of hospital admissions or mortality? ❖ Line 142, “of the MDR bacteria, 13 (92,9%) were carbapenem-resistant K.pneumoniae…” What type of carbapenamase did the authors find? What antibiotics did they use in those cases? ● DISCUSSION: ❖ In recent years, Hospital at home (HaH) programs have spread throughout all the world. In these programs, medical and nursing staff administer hospital-level care at patient’s homes avoiding admission to a hospital ward. OPAT is one of the most frequent modalities in HaH programs with excellent results. I suggest that authors consider and comment about these HaH programs in the discussion section because this would reinforce the importance of medical visits in the OPAT programs. ● COMMENTS TO THE AUTHOR: ❖ The article draws attention to the high mortality of the series (9.4%) and the high percentage of hospital admissions (35.5%) within 30 days after inclusion in the OPAT program in comparison with other studies on OPAT in which clinical control by nurses and medical staff is carried out at the patient's home several times during the admission and with much better results. On the other hand, we must consider that part of the results are explained because study population is elderly and most of the infections are respiratory, so medical visits are essential. ❖ Personally, I think some data is lacking to give it consistency. All new requested data, if available, would greatly complement the information of the population under study and should be emphasized in the discussion of results. Reviewer #2: In this interesting and innovative study, Authors investigated outcome and predictors of failure of outpatient parenteral antibiotic therapy. Interestingly, in this study the infectious diseases specialist consultation within the first 14 days after enrolment in an OPAT program is associated with a lower risk of hospital admission and mortality. Similarly, other important finding is the high efficacy of OPAT in treating community mild/moderate infections. Overall, this work is worth for publication, however some revisions are needed: 1) A more detailed description of comorbidities should be given. For instance, the variable “neoplasia” presented in Table 2 was chosen arbitrarily? What about chronic kidney diseases, diabetes, immunesuppressive therapy etc? All of these factors could be associated with hospital admission 2) A more detailed description of treatment prescribed should be given, especially for multidrug resistant pathogens. Indeed, one of the main risk factors of failure is inappropriate treatment. 3) Mortality was quite low. Does it was associated with the infectious disease? The same description should be given regarding cause of hospital admission, if possible. 4) “The authors found that infection with such strains did not represent a risk factor for mortality or hospital admission” This statement should be better discussed. 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Factors associated with successful completion of outpatient parenteral antibiotic therapy in an area with a high prevalence of multidrug-resistant bacteria: 30-day hospital admission and mortality rates PONE-D-20-18208R1 Dear Dr. Thais Cristina Garbelini Salles We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Francesco Di Gennaro Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear Authors congratulations Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-18208R1 Factors associated with successful completion of outpatient parenteral antibiotic therapy in an area with a high prevalence of multidrug-resistant bacteria: 30-day hospital admission and mortality rates Dear Dr. Salles: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Francesco Di Gennaro Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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