Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 6, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-20879 Prostate cancer survivors with symptoms of radiation cystitis have elevated fibrotic and vascular proteins in urine PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lamb, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 18 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Authors have sought to use urine analysis to investigate biomarkers for fibrosis in the bladder wall of radiation cystitis patients. Following concerns were noted 1) Experiments are predicated on the assumption that urinary elevation of (PAI 1, TIMP1 and TIMP2) proteins can serve as liquid biopsy for fibrosis. The underlying assumption is missing support from either urodynamic data or bladder wall histology to support a causal relationship between increased levels of three proteins (PAI 1, TIMP1 and TIMP2) and a pro-fibrotic environment in RC patients with hematuria. 2) Since hematuria is not unique to RC, authors should qualify the specificity of their findings with respect to other disorders exhibiting hematuria. 3) When authors claim that urinary proteins are stable for up to one year at room temperature with norgen preservative, what is the rationale for exposing urine samples to freeze thaw cycle before analysis. Did the authors consider analyzing urine samples directly without freeze thaw to rule out whether extensive processing of urine samples containing norgen preservative followed by centrifugation, freezing at -80 and thawing contributes to the striking absence of pro-inflammatory proteins in the urine of RC patients. Or is the lack of detection of urinary inflammatory proteins due to protein degradation during interval between collection and analysis. 4) The claim "inflammation is not the driving factor of the disease" in patients is speculative and not backed by any supportive evidence. 5) Is it correct that hematuria was seen in only 5 of the RC patients as per table 1. It was hard to link the number in table 1 with fig. 2 scatter plot for hematuria. 6) Are the p values corrected for multiple testing 7) More details of RC diagnosis needs to be added as "decreased maximal bladder capacity as measured during cystoscopy" does not make sense Reviewer #2: This is in interesting well written paper looking at urinary levels of various urinary proteins to determine possible areas of abnormality to guide future therapy. Page 9 line 59 - surely this should read " urinary diversion with or without cystectomy" not vice versa? Page 10 line 73 - should read 'but are' not 'but is' Page 11 line 85 - why are the patients from Chile only? Page 11 line 90 - what was the maximal bladder capacity in no radiation, radiation with no radiation cystitis and radiation cystitis. The definition of radiation cystitis is vague and needs clarity. Page 11 line 98 - what symptoms cires were used? It looks very much that this is a 'home made' symptom score. What was the reason for using this as opposed to the many validated and international recognised symptom scores such as IPSS and ICIQ OAB Page 11 line 99 - likewise on what basis was is 10 selected as a cut off for the severe symptoms? Page 11 line 105 - whta is th eevidence that storage/freezing and shipping didn't affect urinary protein levels? Page 12 line 115 - how do the protein levels in those with IC compare to those with RC? Page 13 Table - please add an addendum defining the markers and explaining their putative actions Page 15 Table 2 - do you have urodynamic parameters or a frequency/volume chart to help with your definitions they are all somewhat vague? Page 15 Table 2 - I don't think GU spasm is a recognised term - please can you define. Page 21 line 281 - perhaps the samples would have been better collecting all at the same time ie 1st void of the day or 0900? Please comment on this and other factors that may affect urinary proteins - diet/hydration/medications - how can (and should they be) controlled for ? Page 22 conclusions - Is significance the correct test for relevance of urinary proteins/biomarkers? Could there be a threshold phenomena - please discuss. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Prostate cancer survivors with symptoms of radiation cystitis have elevated fibrotic and vascular proteins in urine PONE-D-20-20879R1 Dear Dr. Lamb, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Praveen Thumbikat Section Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Authors have responded constructively to earlier comments. They should consider following recommendations Since all the significant results in Fig.2 and 3 are linked with the symptom of hematuria and the urodynamic data is missing, authors should emphasize on hematuria symptom in the title and text of the manuscript . ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
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PONE-D-20-20879R1 Prostate cancer survivors with symptoms of radiation cystitis have elevated fibrotic and vascular proteins in urine Dear Dr. Lamb: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Praveen Thumbikat Section Editor PLOS ONE |
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