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PONE-D-20-22214 Mechanisms of QT prolongation by buprenorphine cannot be explained by direct hERG channel block PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. All Reviewers and myself found the manuscript to be of interest, however there needs to be some fine tuning of the language used for clarity, especially in the abstract and in the title of the manuscript. Furthermore, there needs to be some further discussion of compound concentrations and exposure. All additional comments from the Reviewers should also be addressed. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 04 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript by Wu et al., investigates the mechanisms of the QT prolongation seen after administration of buprenorphine in human trials. The effects of buprenorphine and other opioid analogues on key ion channel currents are investigated using the whole cell patch clamp technique and the effects of the opioid agonists/antagonists are also assessed in iPSC-CMs. The paper is well written and data are clearly presented. I am happy to recommend this for publication but have one main comment and some minor issues that should be addressed beforehand. It would be more straightforward if all clinical reference concentrations (and affected graphs) were presented as free concentrations rather than the current mixture of free (bup, methadone, naltrexone) and total (norbup, naloxone). I realise the PPB values are not always available. However, the authors describe the simulated PPB value for norbuprenorphine (but do not use it) and a quick search revealed a paper that may be useful for naloxone (Naloxone protein binding in adult and foetal plasma. L. A. Asali & K. F. Brown. European Journal of Clinical Pharmacology volume 27, pages459–463(1984)). Perhaps the missing PPB data could also be generated at a CRO ? There are a number of MINOR issues that should be addressed prior to publication: Abstract “…..that repolarizes the ventricular action potentials (APs).” – pedantic point but suggest re-wording this. It is the myocytes that are repolarised. Intro – “….that is important for ventricular action potential (AP) repolarization”. As above , suggest rewording to something like……”…important during the repolarization phase of the ventricular action potential (AP)” page 6 – no incubation details ((%C) and temp) for Cav1.2 expressing cells given. page 13- suggest adding Fredericias’s formula for clarity (or the variation of it that you have used, as Fredericia’s formula is actually for QT) Page 13 – you have described calculation of FPD parameters but there is no description of the other parameters calculated for the MEA studies – double delta BP and SA. Results – suggest safety margins do not need to be presented to 1 decimal place (at least for those >10). The same goes for fold margin page 19 eg 1111.1x Page 19 – worth reiterating what SA refers to as you have done for BP Page 20 – “For reference, buprenorphine’s total Cmax is 0.022 μM, and simulation predicted norbuprenorphine…..” Suggest that buprenorphine should actually be norbuprenorphine in this sentence. I also note that there is inconsistency in the presentation of free Cmax values between drugs eg buprenorphine to 2DP and norbuprenorphine to 3DP. Suggest standardising. Page 20 “Thus, the in vitro concentrations tested in these studies are likely much higher than the free drug level achieved with therapeutic dosing.” I think it may be worth calculating a margin (accepting that this based on simulated PPB). Page 20 – Naloxone naltrexone – “No effect on ��SA was observed for either drug at any tested concentration.” It looks like there was a decrease in SA at 100uM for naloxone. Fig 8E Table 2 – no indication if steady state conc of norbuprenorphine is free or total. This also differs to the value given in Table 1. Fig 8 legend. Suggest indicating that the vertical dotted line refers to Cmax and indicate that this is sometime free and sometimes total (unless you can standardise this). Reviewer #2: This manuscript by Wu and colleagues provides a detailed study of the electrophysiologic effects of various opioid agonists and antagonists on multiple cardiac currents (expressed in heterologous systems) as well as human induced pluripotent stem-cell derived cardiomyocytes (pSC-CMs) While carefully performed and results considered in the context of clinical experiences, the findings are not unexpected (not all opioids demonstrate similar electrophysiologic effects). An attempt to explain the multichannel blocking activity on overall repolarization (prolongation or shortening) using an in-silico model would have strengthened the manuscript. Finally, this reviewer was disappointed by the overall conclusion that QTc prolongation with buprenorphine was not explained by any of the findings. It is also uncertain how the possible mechanism suggested (Opioid receptor activation) might apply to all opioid agonists, and not only buprenorphine. Specific comments: The abstract leads the reader to believe that buprenorphine causes QTc prolongation. Since QTc prolongation is associated with Torsades, it is expected that buprenorphine would be linked to Torsades. However, the end of the abstract states that the is no evidence that buprenorphine use is associated with TdP. Thus, one is left with either 1) a non-hERG mediated effect eliciting QTc prolongation, or 2) a false-positive QTc finding. Should this second option be considered further? Reviewer #3: The experimental parts of this manuscript were done in different assays. Major question: the title of this manuscript is not right based on following reason: 1. The authors have not analyzed the well concentration of buprenorphine in experimental setting, therefore the authors do not know if the dose in the well being so called “clinical free Cmax or Cmax level”. There are different several CNS or pain drugs which caused long QT in man, yet the doses in vitro assay are often much higher than its respectively free Cmax (>10-100 folders than its free Cmax): the reasons are complex (solubility, lipophilic, high in tissue, low in plasma, possible combining with ion trafficking etc..). 2. Doses in MEA assay could be lower than the target doses (in serum medium with protein). 3. LQT and arrhythmias with the drug are often in overdose condition and also long term-use while in vitro assays are very short experiment protocols within minutes or a hour, which is not matching to the conditions in clinic. 4. There are clear effects of buprenorphine on HEREG, Na+ and MEA at so-called high dose in this manuscript. These effects are very similar to other opium agonists such as Dextropropoxyphene or CNS drug Thioridazine , sertindole, ziprasidone etc.. Therefore , strongly suggest that authors to re-write the title and discussion and conclusion. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Mechanisms of QT prolongation by buprenorphine cannot be explained by direct hERG channel block PONE-D-20-22214R1 Dear Dr. Wu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: This manuscript has been revised appropriately. The information provided should be appreciated by readers of PLOSOne. Reviewer #3: the aurthors now made responses my my comments in details with detail scientific infornations. The manuscript is now well written. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Dr Matt Skinner Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No |
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