Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 7, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-09993 Flow Signal Change in Polyps After Anti-Vascular Endothelial Growth Factor Therapy PLOS ONE Dear Dr Chen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 25 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. Kindly explain why horizontal OCTA scans have been preferred over En-face OCTA scan. 2. Presence of Branching vascular network (BVN) complex has not been recorded. Any correlation between polyps and BVN complex could also have been identified. 3. Fig 1 (F, G, H) showing En-face OCTA of low flow polyp, could not be considered a proper scan. The manual segmentation is not at the appropriate level to be able to visualise the polyp. 4. Figure 2 is incomplete. No details of high flow polyps given. 5. Figure 3 depicting ICGA after treatment, shows complete remission of polyp 1 and 3. However, flow signals in the polyps still persist on OCTA after treatment. How can it be explained? 6. A sample of 2 low flow polyps is clearly inadequate to conclude the relevance or to predict clinical response to anti-VEGF. Reviewer #2: Comments: The authors of this manuscript are interested to study the dynamic change of blood flow within polypoidal lesions and whether it is a predictive factor for PCV response to intravitreal anti-VEGF treatment. Regression and inactivity of polypoidal lesions are considered as important clinical outcomes in multicentre randomized controlled trials of intravitreal anti-VEGF in PCV eyes. Hence, the authors had picked a highly relevant research topic with a sound hypothesis. OCTA may not be as sensitive as ICGA for the detection of polyopidal lesions, and the authors had already acknowledged a number of intrinsic limitations of current OCTA imaging technology. The examination of 3 sequential OCTA scans in this study had somewhat reduced the error rate in imaging analyses. Nevertheless, segmentation error could be commonly encountered in PCV eyes due to irregularities at the level of retinal pigment epithelium and large, tall pigment epithelial detachments. A large amount of macular haemorrhage and exudation may also block OCT signals. PCV eyes with poor visual acuity may not be able to fixate well during OCTA scan leading to motion artefacts. Were there any eyes excluded from the study and what were the reason for their exclusion? I believe providing details on the exclusion criteria and the number of patients that were excluded from the consecutive recruitment process is very important as it conveys to the readers how practical it would be to examine PCV eyes with OCTA and under which circumstances the examination of flow within polypoidal lesions would be feasible. The authors defined high flow lesions as those that with the presence of polyps on both ICGA and OCTA as determined by the examiners, on the other hand, low flow polyps were only detected on ICGA. Where the examiners for ICGA and OCTA blinded from each other? How many image graders were there? In case the examiners of ICGA and OCTA were not independent, would there be any bias ? I suggest the authors to enhance the research methodology of the manuscript, and to provide more details on the intrinsic limitations of the qualitative study design. Furthermore, it would be interesting to know what would be the author’s point of view on the clinical implication of polyp regression. Both polyp regression and polyp inactivity had been reported in large, prospective clinical trials of PCV. Recurrence or persistence of polyp activity (e.g. exudation on scans) may influence on treatment decision. It seems that the definition of high/low flow signal OCTA in this manuscript is associated with partial or complete polyp ‘remission’. Please clarity if remission’ is regarding to the regression of polyp (i.e. change in size) and/or polyp activity (i.e. leakage)? Although polyp regression rate has been a reported outcome in a number of clinical trials, it may not be equivalent to disease activity. It would be intriguing to discuss the current evidence based practice with regard to polyp regression/activity, and to review the prognostic implication of polyp regression. To my knowledge, PLANET and EVEREST II had only published 2-year results. Please review any updated information on longer term PCV outcomes in the context of polyp remission. Reviewer #3: The article is an excellent effort at bringing attention to the potential role of OCT Angiography flow signals in PCV polyps as a non-invasive predictive biomarker of its response to therapy. The authors have done a commendable job in endeavouring to correlate OCTA flow signals in PCV polyps to their ICGA behaviour, structural OCT features like PED height and subretinal fluid. While there are several limitations, that the authors have acknowledged, the study has numerous strengths as mentioned above and therefore merits a place in literature after the below stated minor errors are corrected. Line 106 - µm should be used instead of um Line 211 – PLANET study needs to be in caps. Line 236 – spelling of polyps Figure 2 – Lots of the boxes are blank.. needs to be clearly formatted Case 2 in Table 1- mentions the location of the OCTA flow signal as Outer retina? That does not qualify for a PCV polyp OCTA flow signal and raises doubt as to whether it was a projected artefact. This is a critical error that needs to be corrected. Infact, the location of all OCTA PCV polyps needs to be beneath RPE ( All the other polyps here ,except this, have that). Ideally, the depth of the signal below the RPE could be specified. If that is not possible this aspect of the table may be omitted altogether as it adds no useful information. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-20-09993R1 Flow Signal Change in Polyps After Anti-Vascular Endothelial Growth Factor Therapy PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Chen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: One of the reviewers have raised some persisting concerns; please do address them ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by 2 weeks. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Figure 1 (F, G, H) images are not showing the segmentation line. The en-face OCTA scans do not show any part of vasculature. Even the adjacent high flow polyp is not showing flow signal on en-face OCTA. Can the authors provide any other representative ICGA and OCTA images of low flow polyp? Reviewer #2: I would accept the revised version. The revised version had adequately answered my previous comments. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Atul Kumar Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. 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