Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-24693 The impact of lockdown enforcement during the SARSCoV-2 pandemic on the number and timing of presentation of patients with ST-elevation myocardial infarction PLOS ONE Dear Dr. kobo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 23 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors present an observational paper exploring the impact in Israel of the enforced lockdown during the SARSCoV-2 pandemic on the characteristics of presentation of STEMI patients. STEMI patients admitted during the same time period in 2019 served as the control group. A total of 342 patients were included from 4 cardiac centres. The major findings reported were i) a 22% decrease in the number of STEMI admissions, ii) 2.4-fold greater likelihood of prolonged door-to-balloon time (> 90 min), and iii) 3.3-fold greater likelihood of prolonged pain-to-balloon time (> 12 hours) post lockdown as compared to 2019. Consistent with delayed time to reperfusion; peak troponin and the incidence of hemodynamic instability were higher in the 2020 cohort. There was no difference in the baseline characteristics of the patients. While the paper was of interest, there are a number of issues that should be addressed. A] The title of the paper is “The impact of lockdown enforcement during the SARSCoV-2 pandemic on the number and timing of presentation of patients with ST-elevation myocardial infarction”. However, for some of the analyses the authors include in the 2020 cohort patients admitted prior to when lockdown measures were introduced in Israel (20th March). What is the purpose of this? Subsequently they then compare a pre-lockdown 2020 as well as post-lockdown cohort to the 2019 control group for outcomes such as reperfusion times. This is confusing and does not appear to add to the paper. Was there a particular reason for this approach? If so, please make this clearer in the manuscript. B] To better interpret the data and impact of lockdown on study measures, it would be helpful to include information on the weekly incidence rate of COVID-19 cases in Israel during the 2020 study period. C] The authors stated the incident rate for STEMI admissions post-lockdown fell by 22% (RIR 0.78 with a p value of 0.05) compared to 2019. What statistical method was used for comparison? D] What defined a STEMI admission? Was is someone who underwent PPCI? If so, how do the authors know a fall in STEMI admissions was not driven by a change in threshold to refer / admit to the cath-lab? During the post-lockdown period was there a change to STEMI / PPCI pathways? E] The authors state that only one SARS-CoV-2 positive patient was included in the study. How many of the 2020 cohort were tested for SARS-CoV-2? F] With respect to pain to balloon time, door to balloon time and peak troponin, what percentage of patients was data available? G] Was there a change in the PPCI pathway (e.g. admission / screening through the Emergency Department prior to the cath lab rather than direct to the cath lab) that may account for the increase in door to balloon times observed? H] Please define the criteria for “haemodynamic instability”. I] It should be made clearer on the Figure that the odds ratio is F] In the Introduction the authors state “While early reports described decreased admissions for acute cardiovascular event during the SarsCoV-2 pandemic, the impact of governmental restriction measures on patient outcomes has not been evaluated.” This is not the case. Multiple papers from Europe (including Italy, Spain and the UK) have already looked at the impact of governmental restrictions on patient outcomes. Many of these papers are already referenced in the manuscript. This sentence should be amended (along with a similar sentence in the Abstract). G] Please replace all NS for p-values with the actual number. H] The first paragraph of the Discussion is poorly written with too much conjecture. Many of these arguments have already been made in similar published manuscripts and the whole paragraph spends too much copy not adding any original perspective (and indeed references) to the debate as to why STEMI admissions fell during the early phase of COVID-19. I] The conclusion states: “this study reveals the direct influence of the lockdown restrictions on public health issues and brings to attention the hazard of delayed reperfusion of STEMI patients.” There was no difference in LVEF or mortality. Accordingly, I don’t think the conclusion this study brings to attention the hazard of delayed reperfusion in STEMI is justified nor would it seem to summarise the most important findings of the paper. J] The paper is reasonably well written but suffers from a number of important grammatical errors that should be amended. For example, the final sentence of the Conclusion “As this it well associated with poor outcome, and some countries and region experience second Covid 19 wave, measures to improve this metric should be implemented prior to any future lockdown” is not well written and could be improved. In addition to above, the major shortcoming of this paper is that many of the findings have already been published. This is especially the case with respect to the change in incidence of STEMI and baseline characteristics. Published data is already available from much larger datasets and the present manuscript would not seem to add much in this regard. However, there is substantially less data about the impact of COVID-19 (or lockdown) on reperfusion times (currently published studies: Secco GG et al. Decrease and Delay in Hospitalization for Acute Coronary Syndromes during the 2020 SARS-CoV-2 Pandemic. Can J Cardiol. 2020. Tam C-CF et al. Impact of Coronavirus Disease 2019 (COVID-19) Outbreak on ST-Segment-Elevation Myocardial Infarction Care in Hong Kong, China. Vol. 13, Circulation. Cardiovascular quality and outcomes. 2020. Wilson, S. J. et al. Effect of the COVID-19 Pandemic on ST-Segment–Elevation Myocardial Infarction Presentations and In-Hospital Outcomes. Circulation: Cardiovascular Interventions, 13(7). 2020). This would seem to be the major value of this study in terms of adding to the literature. A short report centred on the effect of lockdown measures in Israel on reperfusion times, troponin and other in-hospital outcomes (with 2 clearly defined cohorts: post-lockdown versus calendar-matched 2019 cohort) would seem far more attractive. Reviewer #2: The study describes the impact of the lockdown on the admission of STEMI stating that it is the first time such data are reported. In fact, many reports have already reported similar results worldwide. Even concerning the impact of the lockdown, it has been already demonstrated for french patients (Lantelme et al ; Arch Cardiovasc Dis Jun-Jul 2020;113(6-7):443-447. This paper does not bring new findings. The authors stated that the study was performed in 4 high volume University hospitals with PCI facilities. Often such high volume centres were overflowed with severe COVID-19 patients who require most of intensive care facilities. Could it be that some patients with an acute coronary syndrome were directed to other hospitals during this period ? How can the authors rule out this hypothesis ? Overall, the number of STEMI was rather stable with a sort of redistribution of patients: more STEMI were referred before the lockdown as compared to 2019 and less after. How do the authors explained this increase pre-lockdown referral ? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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The impact of lockdown enforcement during the SARSCoV -2 pandemic on the timing of presentation and early outcomes of patients with ST-elevation myocardial infarction PONE-D-20-24693R1 Dear Dr. kobo, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Corstiaan den Uil Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-24693R1 The impact of lockdown enforcement during the SARSCoV-2 pandemic on the timing of presentation and early outcomes of patients with ST-elevation myocardial infarction Dear Dr. Kobo: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Corstiaan den Uil Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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