Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 5, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-20744 Transcriptomic and proteomic intra-tumor heterogeneity of colorectal cancer varies depending on tumor location within the colorectum PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Andersen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. 1. Statistical significance/meaning is missing from multiple of the data illustrated in the figures. For the data in figure 2 perform a bootstrap analysis to determine if the heatmap/dendrogram clustering are significant. For the data in Figure 4 perform a correlation coefficient analysis. 2. Per both reviewers there are multiple places in which more details are needed. For example, the total reads for RNA-seq are needed. Include the other details the reviewers have requested. 3. Clarify reviewer 1's question on whether ITH was due to the different transcripts the classifiers were using or were inherent in the data, perhaps this could be made clearer? 4. Correct the typographical errors and fix the number inconsistencies identified by the reviewers. 5. Have a collaborator or a scientific writing service read the manuscript and provide suggestions on how to improve readability. 6. Confirm that the RNA-seq data have been deposited into a repository for access and include the access information. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 24 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Árnadóttir et al, have RNA sequenced 41 biopsies from 14 stage II or III CRC tumours. They also carried out multiplex immune protein analysis on 89 biopsies from 29 tumours. The amount of ITH was explored by analysing the RNA sequencing data from multi-region samples. By combining three different RNA sequencing based classifiers they hoped to establish an understanding on the amount of ITH present. Specifically, they combined CRC Intrinsic Subtypes (CRIS), The Consensus Molecular Subtypes (CMS) and TUMOR type (TT). This was an interesting paper to read. Below are some minor points: The paper has been written well and is clear, with only two minor points. There was one typo present on line 51 “outcome [2] In” is missing a full stop. A grammatical mistake was present on line 393 "It might be speculated, whether the microbiota exhibit ITH in CRC complicating things even further." Regarding the work, it was a little difficult to discern whether or not the ITH was due to the different transcripts the classifiers were using or were inherent in the data, perhaps this could be made clearer? Regarding the statistical analysis, one comment regarding the statistical analysis, on the heatmap and dendrogram on Figure 2a - it might be useful to also bootstrap to determine whether or not the clusters are significant. Reviewer #2: The manuscript by Arnadottir et al describes an interesting multiregional sampling of multiple tumors (14 tumors with 41 regions for RNA-seq; 29 tumors with 89 regions for multiplex immunoassays). Similar DNA sequencing types of studies have revealed widespread genetic and epigenetic ITH. The authors find that sometimes the regions are concordant for the measurements within a tumor, and sometimes not. They show that tumor location within the colorectum influence the type of expression ITH. Overall, these findings are of interest. The manuscript is complex and difficult to follow in many places. This reviewer found it difficult to get a “big picture” impression of the data. However, the overall data are important because they show how one biopsy may not be adequate for reproducible classification using the illustrated schemes. Several comments: 1) Fig 1 presents the overall data well. However, the Results for the RNA-seq data (page 8) are based on classification schemes, with 50% of the tumors having at least one biopsy with a different classification. It would be useful to: a) provide the RNA-seq depth (reads per sample) b) provide some statistical summary of the raw data (ie the correlation of CPM values between samples from the same tumor) c) Provide the 50% misclassification rate information in the Abstract 2) Fig 2 shows that using RNA expression levels, the different biopsies from the same patients tend to cluster with individual patients. This Figure is hard to decipher. It might be useful to put arrows to indicate samples that do not cluster by patient (ie such as P05-Tc). The manuscript also states that samples “cluster” by subtype, but this claim is not all that obvious in Fig 2A because some subtypes (say for example CRIS) seem more randomly distributed along the horizontal axis. This statement should be clarified. 3) Fig 3 looks at the most discordantly expressed genes (STD>.5) and does a supervised gene enrichment analysis. Such types of analysis almost always give an output. The authors describe their analysis but provide little insights on how this type of analysis can explain expression ITH. 4) Fig 4 show abundant protein level ITH with only 9 of 30 tumors (why is it 29 in the Abstract?) having its multiple regions clustering together. A simple, more standard statistical description such as a correlation coefficient (within and between tumors) could provide more meaning to this data. This poor concordance information between biopsies from the same tumor should be mentioned in the Abstract. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Transcriptomic and proteomic intra-tumor heterogeneity of colorectal cancer varies depending on tumor location within the colorectum PONE-D-20-20744R1 Dear Dr. Andersen, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Amanda Ewart Toland, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors have improved the manuscript. Describing "heterogeneity" is complex and the authors have done a good job in describing ITH at the protein and transcript level in CRCs ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-20744R1 Transcriptomic and proteomic intra-tumor heterogeneity of colorectal cancer varies depending on tumor location within the colorectum Dear Dr. Andersen: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Amanda Ewart Toland Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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