Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 7, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-13486 Body Composition Patterns among Normal Glycemic, Pre-diabetic, Diabetic Health Chinese Adults in Community: NAHSIT 2013–2016 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bai, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 20 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript entitled "Body Composition Patterns among Normal Glycemic, Pre-diabetic, Diabetic Health Chinese Adults in Community: NAHSIT 2013–2016" reports the association between body composition parameters and normal glycemic, prediabetic, and diabetic status in Chinese adult population sampled for the nationwide survey. Although the association between body composition parameters and each glycemic status was clearly described, the authors should discuss some additional points to emphasize a rationale of this study. Specific comments: 1. The authors should discuss the possible confounding factors of body composition and glycemic status. For example, smoking, alcohol and socioeconomic status could be confounding factors, especially in older adults (Osteoporosis and sarcopenia 2018;4:109-113, Lancet Diabetes Endocrinol 2015;3:958-967, Int J epidemiol 2011;40:804-818; J Diabetes Investig. 2020 Mar 29. doi: 10.1111/jdi.13260. etc). 2. The authors should consider the diabetic complications and anti-diabetes drugs to appropriately assess the relationship between body composition and glycemic status in patients with diabetes. Diabetic neuropathy and use of SU and glinides may affect skeletal muscle mass (J Am Med Dir Assoc 2016;17:896-901, J Diabetes Complications 2017;31:1465-1473, etc). 3. The authors should discuss not only muscle mass but also muscle strength as well as exercise capacity. Dynapenia could also influence glycemic status (J epidemiol 2015 ; 25 : 656-662); and the authors should discuss the possible relationship in the manuscript. 4. The authors should discuss possible effects of ethnic differences on body composition and glycemic status. In the previous study, it was suggested that ethnic differences may affect body composition, diet and physical activity (Womens Health(Lond) 2015;11:913-27). 5. Since the phenotype of type 2 diabetes differ from those of other ethnic groups (Lancet Diabetes Endocrinol. 2016 Jan;4(1):2-3; Curr Diab Rep. 2015 Jun;15(6):602; J Diabetes Investig. 2016 Apr;7 Suppl 1(Suppl 1):102-9 etc). The authors should discuss possible etnic differences in their observed results. Reviewer #2: Major 1. In line 214-215, you are writing “lean mass…”. Therefore, not only comparison between glucose profile and body composition but also the comparison with an insulin level and HOMA-IR and the body composition is necessary. 2. In line 243-244, you are writing “low lean mass percentage in abdomen…”. Results of RRR show that trunk lean and fat mass have a positive association with a glucose profile. Trunk in fat and lean has a positive association with glucose profile, and limb in fat and lean seems to have a negative association with glucose profile. Therefore, the discussion about this difference seems to be necessary. Minor 1. In line 85, you are writing “…assessment of the nutritional status”. What kind of item did you use for nutritional evaluation, blood nutritional items (albumin, cholinesterase etc.) or nutrition score (MNA, CONUT etc.)? 2. In the section of Data Collection of Body Composition (117-125), the calculating formula is (body composition/1000)/weight *100, isn't it? 3. In line 150, is the classification of the FG levels ≥126mg/dL, 100-126 mg/dL and <100mg/dL? It is necessary to conform them to data of Table2. 4. In line 161, did you mistake “≥6.5%” for “>6.5%”? 5. In line 205, you wrote "…increase trunk fat mass". But not only "trunk fat mass" but also "trunk lean mass" increased. 6. Explanation of total region fat, total tissue fat, android (in fat) and gynoid (in fat) is necessary in the method. 7. In Table 1, I think the data of Male is "number and ratio" not "mean and SD". 8. The unit of weight is “kg” not “cm” (Table2-5). 9. Please revise the data of SD from 10.41 to 10.4 in the item of the waist in Table 2. 10. Please revise “Statistical significance as P<0.5” to “Statistical significance as P<0.05” in Table 2. 11. I think that HbA1c is unnecessary for a title of Table3. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Body Composition Patterns among Normal Glycemic, Pre-diabetic, Diabetic Health Chinese Adults in Community: NAHSIT 2013–2016 PONE-D-20-13486R1 Dear Dr. Bai, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Cheng Hu Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Thank you for revision and comment. I confirmed contents again. There are no additional question and revision. This paper is acceptable. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-20-13486R1 Body composition patterns among normal glycemic, pre-diabetic, diabetic health Chinese adults in community: NAHSIT 2013–2016 Dear Dr. Bai: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Cheng Hu Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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