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Original SubmissionMay 4, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-13102 Using the NIH Research, Condition and Disease Categorization Database for research advocacy: Schizophrenia research at NIMH as an example PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Torrey, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. First, I would like to thank the two authors for their important comment. Both suggest that the papers has merits and I agree. I have however some additional comments that need to be addressed : - First : the manuscript must mention explicitly : . If there was a protocol YES / NO ; . If it was registered a priori (e.g. on the Open Science Framework) ; . Data must be submitted as a supplementary material ; . The paper should be reported using the adequate reporting guideline (and a specific grid should be filled and provided): the method section must be expanded to allow for reproduction of the study ; . A limitation of the study is the subjectivity in the assessment and the fact that the outcome used in this study had no prior validation : the exploratory nature must be explicit in both the limitation section and the abstract to avoid any spin and to avoid any over-interpretation of the results ; . I suggest drawing a figure using Venn Diagram (or an alluvial plot) to show the agreement among the 3 reviewers. I acknowledge that it can be challenging to draw such a figure, but this is all the more important ; . I also suggest that the full list of proposals listed as likely is dysplayed in a table in the main manuscript ; . The same in a web appendix for studies listed as possible and for those listed as unlikely ; Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 28 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please follow this link to our website for more details on competing interests: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/competing-interests [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting paper on an important topic for advocacy organisations and consumer participants. I would like to have seen more emphasis on the public perspective in the paper and how advocacy groups had informed the design of the study, how they could influence the development and use of the RCDC given the conclusions of the authors. It was not clear whether this review was attempting to demonstrate that the database was not functional, or the research recorded in it was not of sufficient value. The paper appears to be arguing two perspectives, firstly that the RCDC could be a useful tool and secondly that the schizophrenia research within it is not providing value for money and is not of sufficient efficacy to lead to improvements in patient outcomes. At present the focus of the paper seems to be a little more on the authors area of interest i.e. the relevance of the schizophrenia research funded by the NIH, than the stated focus of the study which is the use of the database for research advocacy. It would be useful if the authors could state their intentions more clearly. They need to be clearer about the messaging and intent of the study. The key message, which is implied at the beginning and the end of the paper, seems to be that the public needs to inform research priorities and that the RCDC could be a valuable tool in facilitating this. The intended purpose of creating the RCDC database was not entirely clear from the paper. It appears to be simply to provide a source of information for the public. Was it also the intention to engage the public and/or advocacy groups in the prioritisation of research topics? If the primary intention of the RCDC database was to enable public access, and presumably increase the degree of transparency of NIH funding decisions, it would be interesting to know if the authors considered including advocacy organisations as reviewers in the study or if there is any intention for them to carry out a similar review following this study to evaluate the value of the database in that context. The paper refers to how the RCDC might be a rich research resource for advocacy groups but does not explain how those groups might use it. For example, would or can they use it to identify unanswered research questions (in a similar way to the James Lind Alliance), to identify ongoing or completed research, or to identify potential partners for research? How does this then inform the public about funded research? The outline of the methodology would benefit from greater detail. The database was accessed for data for 2018; however, it is not clear if the study was reviewing projects approved and funded in 2018 or all the projects that were ongoing in 2018 but may have started prior to that date. This is important information in the context of the discussion in the results section relating to the clustering of awards and whether there may have been an historical shift in the location of awards or changes in the types of projects funded. It would also be helpful to understand what criteria the three assessors used for their ratings of ‘likely’, ‘possible’ or ‘very unlikely’. For example: - Was it based on their individual experience and expertise, knowledge of clinical decision making or did they develop a shared assessment framework? - How was the decision to have three assessors arrived at? Did this give the study sufficient power? - How did the reviewers ensure any potential bias towards the topic areas was excluded? - The reviews seem to be based on an assessment of project abstracts, were they sufficiently detailed to make an assessment of impact over a period of 20years? - Why was the period of 20 years selected as he optimum period for the demonstration of clinical improvement? Specific comments relating to the content of the article: - The term ‘allegations’ in the abstract seems inappropriate and unnecessarily adversarial. It could be expressed as ‘criticisms’. The authors also need to substantiate their statement to identify which stakeholder(s) made the ‘allegations’. - The final sentence of the abstract needs to be qualified as it is a very broad statement which reads as the personal opinion of the authors rather than something substantiated by their study. Did the study show that ‘the RCDC database is an excellent tool’ and should be used more frequently, or is this the authors view? - The statement on page 4 that refers to the database being little known or used, cites academic articles that reference the RCDC. Presumably the articles do not report data about the number of public individuals who search the database or use the information from it as a lobbying tool for their disease area? What is the level of public access to the database? Advocacy groups, who are users of research, are less likely to publish academic articles or lead research therefore their use of the database may not be referenced in past papers. - Page 4 refers to the prevalence of schizophrenia in the US; how does this compare with the prevalence of other disease areas and the cost to the economy? - Some abbreviations and acronyms are not explained e.g. NAMI, PET. Without a more detailed description and rational for the review process, the paper is weakened. It is important to have this detail if the study is to be replicated in other disease areas as suggested by the authors. Occasionally the paper seems to reflect the personal perspective of the authors in relation to the types of research that receive funding. To provide a more rounded perspective, it would be useful to balance this with the types of research clinicians report as important and the research topics of importance to advocacy groups and patients. It is not clear how, or if, patients inform priority setting although this was a stated intention of the I of M report on NIH research. I would like to see more emphasis on the public perspective, and how advocacy groups can inform the development and use of the RCDC, within the paper. Reviewer #2: This article reports on the percentage and associated expenditures of the research portfolio funded by the USA’s National Institute of Mental Health in the area of schizophrenia and provides an assessment of the extent of the portfolio that is likely to provide clinical improvement to individuals with the disorder over the next 20 years. The article is very well written, balanced, and timely. It has numerous strengths, including a succinct but informative review of the push by advocacy organizations for public accountability in Congressionally funded mental health research, the public-health significance of schizophrenia, and the NIMH research portfolio for 2018. Other strengths include the use of a multi-rater system for coding the likelihood of clinical impact, estimation of an intra-class correlation coefficient among raters, discussion of the areas of research being ignored, and a cogent set of recommendations. The ms. also has a few minor weaknesses, which would strengthen the article if addressed: • P.4, lines 77-78: Some readers may not understand why the ms. goes back to 1993 for prevalence data on schizophrenia in the USA. Aren’t more recent data available, they may ask? One advantage of these data is that they were provided by the NIMH itself to Congress, thereby making them the “official” rates of the organization. In addition, as the ms. points out, more recent community-based epidemiological data on schizophrenia in the USA are limited, due in part to methodological difficulties and lack of funding interest. The ms. might benefit from a sentence that clarifies why 27-year-old data are being used to report the national prevalence of the disorder. • P.8, lines 152-154: The ms. usefully notes the methodological limitation of more sparse descriptive information on research studies conducted in the intramural program and research centers. However, it does not state how this limitation was addressed, if at all. One possibility is to provide percentages of the NIMH budget spent on schizophrenia research separately by type of research program (i.e., extramural, intramural, research center). • The ms. might be strengthened with a few more examples of the kind of schizophrenia research the NIMH could fund (and proactively request) that is likely to be of more immediate benefit. Some examples are mentioned (e.g., new medications and psychological treatments) but more information and additional examples would make the article more compelling by noting the potential benefits that are not being reaped. Otherwise, some readers may think the NIMH is following its policy because there is little to study that could be more immediately useful. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Dr Virginia Minogue Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-20-13102R1 Using the NIH Research, Condition and Disease Categorization Database for research advocacy: Schizophrenia research at NIMH as an example PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Torrey, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. First, I would like to thank here the two reviewers who helped me in reaching a decision. I have some additional comments : - In the abstract, please make it more clear that the conclusions are only exploratory ; - Please add in the abstract a few words about the limitations, to avoid any spin / and a few words about the agreement ; - By the may the agreement was not good for projects labeled as "Likely usefull" (see the Venn Diagram). Please avoid any spin about this and state it explicitely (it is not satisfying to see that you wrote that the agreement was good, especially for the unlikely category / one could say the agreement was not so good, especially for the likely category). Please edit both the text and the abstract. - I tend to think that a Kappa would be more easy to interpret and indeed more appropriated to judge about inter-rater reliability than a Cronbach's alpha. Please change / or in case you disagree / please give me more reasons to think that you are right. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 11 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PONE-D-20-13102R2 Using the NIH Research, Condition and Disease Categorization Database for research advocacy: Schizophrenia research at NIMH as an example PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Torrey, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I'm really sad to learn that one of your co-authors died unexpectedly. I send you my sincere condolences. Thank you for the changes you made, the better is better now. But I'm still not convinced about the use of Cronbach' alpha in this occasion. You are not working on a multiple item scale. There are actually alternative to Cohen's Kappa such as Fleiss' kapa for instance, that can handle multiple rater. Please ask the help of a statistician to choose the approach that fits better your needs. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 26 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PONE-D-20-13102R3 Using the NIH Research, Condition and Disease Categorization Database for research advocacy: Schizophrenia research at NIMH as an example Dear Dr. Torrey: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Pr. Florian Naudet Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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