Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 17, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-18647 Primary cutaneous melanoma of the scalp: patterns of clinical, histological and epidemiological characteristics in Brazil PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Porto, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As you will see the reviewers have the opinion that your work is interesting and has merit. However a number of substantial improvements are required before approval of your work. Please address ALL the reviewers concerns in your revised Ms Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 17 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Thank you for including your ethics statement: 'The project was approved by the institutional Research Ethics Committee (2379/17).' (a) Please amend your current ethics statement to include the full name of the ethics committee/institutional review board(s) that approved your specific study. (b) Once you have amended this/these statement(s) in the Methods section of the manuscript, please add the same text to the “Ethics Statement” field of the submission form (via “Edit Submission”). For additional information about PLOS ONE ethical requirements for human subjects research, please refer to http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-human-subjects-research. 3. In the ethics statement in the manuscript and in the online submission form, please provide additional information about the patient records used in your retrospective study, including: a) whether all data were fully anonymized before you accessed them; b) the date range (month and year) during which patients' medical records were accessed; and c) the source of the medical records analyzed in this work (e.g. hospital, institution or medical center name). If patients provided informed written consent to have data from their medical records used in research, please include this information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have submitted a single institution retrospective case series of scalp melanoma. The study is interesting and clinically relevant. Although the findings are not particularly novel or unexpected, they strengthen existing knowledge and are novel in terms of apparently being the first reported series from Brazil and Latin America overall. Important variables not reported include molecular features (e.g., BRAF V600E mutation status) and outcome/survival. Although melanoma involving the scalp is well established, the high proportion of desmoplastic melanoma (DM) (compared to non-scalp, both NNM and TLM) might seem to mitigate adverse prognostic factors (DM perhaps with same or higher rate of local recurrence but lower rate of distant metastasis and death compared to nodular melanoma). DM is also genetically distinct from other forms of melanoma and can be subdivided into pure and mixed types. Can the authors comment on these aspects? Please comment, if possible, regarding the significance, if any, of specific regions within the scalp. E.g., were photographs available? Was there a correlation with covered versus bald/alopecic scalp sites (e.g., Ref #19) The authors appear to acknowledge in Limitations that they did not evaluate this. Abstract, 1st sentence: As worded, this sentence is not true (e.g. PMID 24281175 from 10 years prior). Please re-word to state that this is the 1st series from Latin America to focus on the unique clinical/histologic/epidemiological aspects of scalp melanoma. Reviewer #2: These authors performed a retrospective analysis of all cutaneous melanomas diagnosed at a South American referral center between 2008-2018. They identify statistically-significant demographic and histopathologic differences comparing scalp melanomas to melanomas involving other anatomic locations. Specifically, they find that scalp melanoma patients are generally older and that the tumors are more likely to demonstrate adverse prognostic indicators. Their findings are generally consistent with findings reported in other studies, but this study adds additional information to the literature as it represents a geographic region and study population that has is historically underrepresented in the melanoma literature. I thank the authors for this work. In your methods, please specify if your analysis included melanoma in situ (I believe it did). If so, I suggest you include data on MIS in Table 1 -- perhaps, show the distribution of all melanomas, MIS, and invasive disease. Page 9, lines 142-148 describe data on the variation in distribution of invasive melanomas -- I'd like see those numbers displayed in your table. When you reference Breslow depth I recommend that you round to the nearest one tenth -- i.e., 3.43 should be 3.4. This aligns with current AJCC staging criteria. I defer to the editors, but I believe Tables 2 and 3 could either be simplified or presented as supplemental material. Is talbe 2 necessary? Your point is, for example, that scalp melanomas have higher ORs for depth, perineural invasion, male sex, etc following regression modeling. Clinicians and pathologists will read this manuscript, and I suggest the analysis be explained in simplified terms (with more detail available). Page 11, line 161 you state, "Increased Breslow thickness was identified as an important independent factor to explain the occurrence on the scalp.." I believe this statement is backwards. At the very least it is more biologically plausible that scalp location is a risk factor for higher Breslow depth. Further in your discussion you make similar statement regarding other variables (ulceration, mitoses, perineural invasion). It does not make sense that poor prognostic indicators "explain" scalp location but, rather, scalp location "explains" the presentation with poor prognostic indicators. Do you have outcomes data based on anatomic location? I will not be surprised if the answer is 'no' -- outcomes data more more difficult to collect -- but if you have them, please report them (in this manuscript or another). Your references require significant editing. Cursory review reveals multiple incomplete references (9, 12, 13). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-20-18647R1 Primary cutaneous melanoma of the scalp: patterns of clinical, histological and epidemiological characteristics in Brazil PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Porto, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Thank you for the revisions done in the Ms. However some minor points remain to be revised. Please addresses the few points raised by Reviewer 1. Thank you ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 13 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Paula Soares Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for responding to nearly all of the Reviewer comments with this improved, revised manuscript. Line 197: *It would still be useful to address, at least generally, whether the desmoplastic melanomas (DM) in this series were pure vs mixed type. PMID 23267722 Line 197: *The authors have not provided convincing data to support their assertion that DM is a rapidly growing subset of melanoma. Mitotic rate may be reasonably used as a surrogate marker for tumor growth, and although scalp melanoma overall may grow relatively rapidly, especially nodular melanoma, DM had a lower mitotic rate in PMID 25142970. Suggest removing or else providing support for this assertion. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Primary cutaneous melanoma of the scalp: patterns of clinical, histological and epidemiological characteristics in Brazil PONE-D-20-18647R2 Dear Dr. Porto, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Paula Soares Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-20-18647R2 Primary cutaneous melanoma of the scalp: patterns of clinical, histological and epidemiological characteristics in Brazil Dear Dr. Porto: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Paula Soares Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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