Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 28, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-16120 Clinical impact of angiographically insignificant suboptimal poststent findings detected by optical coherence tomography after drug-eluting stent implantation PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Yu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Generally, the reviewers found the paper favorable, however there are some issues that need to be addressed. Please address each item specifically and outline these changes in revised text and in a point by point fashion in the response letter. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 24 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Interesting and important question to investigate. Study is reasonably designed. Size is modest, although it could be underpowered. Evidence of this includes a HR for the primary endpoint of 1.6 (0.6-4), suggesting a sizable effect could be present (in a larger sample). Also suggestion of under-powering is evident in the fact that statistically significant differences in MSA and other such measures (reference vessel size, etc) did not translate into difference in restenosis/TVR. Are we to conclude that final stent size does not impact restenosis? Questions that arise include: Why were all patients treated between Jan 2011 - May 2013, and the analysis just now being performed? Was the database cut off, and we have no more info, or was there some reason that this time period was chosen? The data is getting to be fairly old, and of course, techniques evolve which could impact how we apply findings. I'd like to understand a bit better what the operators knew about and did with the OCT results. They seemed to have them available, and yet sometimes they were still considered "suboptimal." Was this because the operator mis-interpreted the OCT images, had no option because there was no solution to the issue, or was it simply an issue that what the operator deemed insignificant or suboptimal was different from the later, agreed upon definition. Nonetheless, it points out a significant weak point in the study, this is not a randomized comparison of one strategy vs. another, rather it is a comparison of a stent procedure with optimal results vs. a procedure with suboptimal results, but one in which the operator deemed the results worthy to accept. That is an important distinction. I like and appreciate the suggestion of a "safety zone" in optimizing PCI results. The study contradicts what the majority of studies (and meta-analyses) have shown, that some of these suboptimal results do negatively impact outcomes. That being said, it is likely that as the author purport, some degree of suboptimal results can be tolerated without compromising clinical results. How much can be tolerated, is a fascinating question. Reviewer #2: This study sought to compare clinical outcomes may differ between patients with SF (suboptimal findings) OCT and without SF-OCTs after DES implantation. With this aim 576 with final OCT after DES were divided into SF-OCT group (n=379, 379 lesions) and No SF-OCT group (n=197, 197 lesions). The study population had no significant abnormal finding in final angiography. Among 379 patients with SF-OCT, 32.4% had multiple SF-OCTs. Malapposition (32.1%) was the most frequent, followed by small MSA (31.6%), edge dissection (12.5%), thrombus (7.6%) and tissue protrusion (6.8%). These features were also quantitatively analyzed. The SF-OCT group showed smaller ST diameter and longer length, and lower expansion rate. The incidence of MACE did not differ between the two groups (3% vs 5%, p=0.310). This is an interesting study suggesting that suboptimal OCT findings have no clinical consequences in patients with good angiographic results. Some issues, however, need to be addressed: 1. Sample size remains a major problem in this study (unpowered) as clinical events in patients with good angiographic results after DES are low. Please provide an estimate of the predicted power of the study and acknowledge that the study was unpowered for its primary endpoint. 2. Study criteria should be clarified. 2) Patients who underwent sequential OCT immediately after DES implantation or after adjuvant procedures; 3) No significant abnormal finding in final coronary angiography. Adjuvant procedures after OCT examination were performed in 132 patients (132 lesions). Were clinical results poorer in patients that required optimization of the stent after the initial OCT? 3. Information of clinical outcomes was collected by the retrospective review of the chart. Was this performed blindly to angiographic data and OCT findings? 4. Angiographic MLD after the procedure was smaller in the SF-OCT group. This is a classical variable associated with poorer long-term clinical and angiographic outcomes. Again a lack of power may explain the lack of clinical differences between the groups. 5. The logistic multivariate model identified stent diameter MSA and underexpansion as independent predictors of SF-OCT. The variable MSA by OCT is a factor already included in the SF-OCT list. 6. Only clear abnormal findings were factors were considered “significant” SF-OCTs. Some abnormal findings were considered SF-OCT. However cualitative crietria were arbitrary. Perhaps a different cut-offs would yield different results. Please address. Among them it is included a small MSA defined as in-stent minimum area <4.5 mm2 MSA has been found to predict clinical outcomes (mainly TLR and stent thrombosis) in many previous IVUS and OCT studies. Please address. Again the study may be simply unpowered in this regard. 7. Please describe with further details the QCA analysis and the system used. The reference diameter, minimal luminal diameter, percentage of stenosis, and lesion length were evaluated. Were measurements performed also after DES implantation? Any of the findings described in the SF OCT group related to poorer angiographic findings by QCA? ********** 6. 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Clinical impact of angiographically insignificant suboptimal poststent findings detected by optical coherence tomography after drug-eluting stent implantation PONE-D-20-16120R1 Dear Dr. Yu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for addressing my concerns and questions. Some minor alterations are needed which are mainly language issues, including: Page 5, line 24: "was performed in a blinded fashion in regards to angiographic data and OCt..." P 18, line 7: "change to "not significantly different" P 21, line 18: "Even though adjuvant intervention was performed after the index procedure, the rate of under expansion was high...and a high rate of SF-OCT was still observed" p21, line 20-24: "Since the procedure was performed at the operator's discretion, further management of suboptimal findings was not based on strict protocol, and stent optimization criteria were not universally followed. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Fernando Alfonso MD |
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PONE-D-20-16120R1 Clinical impact of angiographically insignificant suboptimal poststent findings detected by optical coherence tomography after drug-eluting stent implantation Dear Dr. Yu: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jay Widmer Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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