Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 3, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-06248 Screening of Targeted Panel Genes in Brazilian Patients with Primary Ovarian Insufficiency PLOS ONE Dear Dr.Monica M França, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript is interesting and relevant to the scientific community. The authors need to improve the description on how variants are charatarized as pathogenic and related to POI i.e. the utilization of predictors and other software. Please take into account the points addressed by the reviewers and correct accordingly. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 26 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Using a panel of candidate genes for targeted massively parallel sequencing (TMPS) and confirmation by Sanger sequencing, together with analyses of gene copy number variations (CNV), the authors investigated gene mutations in 50 POI patients. A genetic etiology was identified in 70% (36 of 50) of women with POI using the customized TMPS panel and a total of 24 pathogenic variants and 2 CNVs were identified in 48% (24 of 50) of POI patients. The study is well-designed and results add to the increasing literature regarding genetic basis of POI. 1. One of the difficulties of using exome sequencing to identify POI etiologies is the requirement of additional animal studies to confirm the significance of putative candidate genes with mutations. Several POI genes were identified here but have not previously reported in patients. The authors supported their conclusions based on familiar inheritance and/or mutant animal models. It is useful to point out the novel aspects of present findings in Discussion and summarize them in a Table by listing POI genes not previously reported in patients but have mutant animal findings or familiar inheritance to support their validity, such as BMP8B (BMP8B is essential for the generation of primordial germ cells in mice; Ying, 2000), SYCP1 (Mouse Sycp1 functions in synaptonemal complex assembly, meiotic recombination; de Vries, 2005), etc. 2. Genes in the X chromosome have been considered as hot spots for POI candidate genes. It is worthwhile to summarize or highlight these genes in the Table and discuss the implication of their chromosome location. Because of anticipated X chromosome inactivation and large number of X chromosome genes as POI candidates, is there any significance of different types of POI gene mutations in the sex chromosome? Reviewer #2: Review of “Screening of Targeted Panel Genes in Brazilian Patients with Primary Ovarian Insufficiency” by Franca et al. The authors analyzed the genomes of 50 patients with POI using targeted massively parallel sequencing to identify underlying mutations in candidate genes. Many cases of POI that are not associated with FMR1 mutations have an unknown genetic basis. This study chose candidate genes to sequence based on their involvement in ovarian development, folliculogenesis, meiosis and DNA repair. Abnormalities were identified in 70% of the patients. Many of the candidate genes have been implicated in POI or infertility in previous studies. Major Points: This is a thorough study of genetic mutations that may cause primary and secondary POI. Primary screening of target genes identified mutations in 16 genes. Mutations were then confirmed using Sanger sequencing. I like that the authors break down the mutation analysis into groups of genes involved in different processes/pathways. However, the Discussion of all of the mutations is long and needs to be condensed with more of an overview of the findings. A diagram showing the number of mutations in each gene group might be helpful here. How many of the identified mutations occurred in genes that had never before been associated with POI? For instance, the SYCP1 mutation identified in this study appears to be the first mutation identified in this gene that is associated with POI. How many of the mutations were novel mutations in genes known to be associated with POI? For instance, the DAZL heterozygous variant (c.640C>T;p.Gln214*) is referred to as “undescribed”. I’m assuming this is therefore a novel mutation? These details could also be included in Table 2 with a column indicating “novel variant” or “previously identified”. The characterization of pathogenic variants may need to be better described in the results. This appears to be based on prior identification of these variants and/or in silico predictions. Please describe in more detail, the in silico characterization of the variants in the Methods and Results. Currently the Methods just has a list of pathogenicity prediction programs. Line 564 refers to “all available in silico tools” with no additional details. If nearly all mutations occurred in previously identified genes, does that suggest that a paired down candidate gene approach could likely identify nearly all causative mutations in POI in the future? Do mutations in gene groups associate with phenotype (primary vs. secondary)? In the Discussion, please expand upon this idea brought up in the abstract, “ A molecular etiology allowed us to establish better genotype-phenotype correlation and to improve familial counseling avoiding futures comorbidities.” Please say more about the genotype/phenotype correlation. How can the identification of genetic mutations benefit patients in the clinic? Minor points: The manuscript had spelling errors and grammar issues. I list here some, but not all, corrections. Please look through the manuscript and correct these issues. line: 85 “usually diagnosed at a younger age” 89 “presenting as sporadic” 90-91 “is known to be autosomal dominant or autosomal recessive” 95 “several pathways such as gonadal development” 251 “POI is a heterogeneous disorder characterized by strong genetic basis that 252 comprises at least 75 genes 263 “and migrate to the genital ridge, giving rise to oocytes” 271 “POU5F1 was reported in one Chinese POI woman” 274 “19 year-old woman with secondary amenorrhea” 299 “infertile while heterozygous mice exhibit a subfertile phenotype.” 314 “ which is rare and deleterious in in silico analysis” 333 “Genes related to folliculogenesis” 350 “binding to the GDF9 promoter in vitro.” 357 “Further investigation” 393 “BMP15: Bone morphogenetic protein 15 has already been reported as an X-linked POI 416 “born from a consanguineous marriage,” 417 “a history of primary amenorrhea” 429 “ Drosophila, rodents, and human [27, 28].” 430 “Functional studies in Drosophila” 433 “was found in one woman” ********** 6. 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Screening of Targeted Panel Genes in Brazilian Patients with Primary Ovarian Insufficiency PONE-D-20-06248R1 Dear Dr. Monica M França, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Klaus Brusgaard Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Mara P. Steinkamp |
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PONE-D-20-06248R1 Screening of Targeted Panel Genes in Brazilian Patients with Primary Ovarian Insufficiency Dear Dr. França: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Klaus Brusgaard Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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