Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 6, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-13370 "No test is better than a bad test'': Impact of diagnostic uncertainty in mass testing on the spread of COVID-19 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Gray, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript is timely, and the reviewers agreed with the overall conclusions of the manuscript. However, they raised a few key concerns that should be addressed in a revised manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 21 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this manuscript, the authors set out to explore the important issue of the coupled impact of diagnostic uncertainty, limited testing capacity and various quarantine relaxation strategies on the overall spread of COVID19. Definitions of standard diagnostic quality parameters (e.g. sensitivity, specificity, PPV, NPV) are first reproduced in detail. This is followed by the presentation of a modified simple SIR model including quarantine states. This is then used to model three quarantine relaxation scenarios, using assumed numbers and parameters. Notably, no comparison with real world data is presented. A final conclusion is eventually drawn in favor of slow release of quarantine and targeted use of imperfect tests. Overall, this manuscript does present some interesting and potentially useful analysis and conclusions. However a significant body of COVID19 epidemiological modeling literature is now available which also considers some of the same questions. This work can thus be significantly improved by placing it better in the context of the existing literature and clearly highlighting the unique aspects of its analysis and conclusions. Some specific comments and suggestions for improvement are below. Major comments: 1. The title of the article seems to make a provocative claim that could be interpreted as – performing no diagnostic testing at all would be more beneficial than using imperfect diagnostic testing. Given that this is not what is proven by the analysis shown in the rest of the manuscript, this reviewer would strongly recommend modifying the title to drop this rather misleading claim. 2. This article would benefit significantly from placing it in the context of existing COVID19 epidemiological modeling literature. Much more detailed models (Lipsitch et al – DOI: 10.1126/science.1086616; Giordano et al – DOI: 10.1038/s41591-020-0883-7 etc) along with comparisons to real world data are available now. How and why is the arguably more simplistic model presented here still valuable needs to be clearly justified. 3. A critical aspect of almost all current quarantine strategies is isolation not only of those who test positive for the virus but tracing and isolation of their close contacts as well. The effect of this is neglected here. Can the authors comment on how this might affect their conclusions? 4. A large amount of real world data is now available about COVID19. Can the authors test their analysis and conclusions using any of these data sets? The robustness of their conclusions can be significantly improved if even a partial comparison is presented. 5. In lines 280-281, a 10-fold lower viral testing capacity (10,000/day) is used compared to that (100,000/day) used earlier in the article without providing a justification. As of now, it seems the 100,000 number has in fact been surpassed in the UK. Does this change conclusions? 6. An assumed UK context is implicitly used at a number of places in the article. For clarity, these should be explicitly stated – including all numbers of population or parameters used that depend on this context. Minor comments/suggestions: 1. The amount of detail in which textbook definitions of diagnostic quality parameters is reproduced here – while potentially useful to the lay reader – is not necessary. Citations to relevant texts or other sources can suffice. 2. Similarly, Figure 1 and 2 – to the extent that they are needed at all – would benefit from being converted to a plot showing variation of PPV with prevalence instead. 2. In general, in this reviewer’s opinion, the authors here adopt a more journalistic or colloquial tone in their writing than is usual in scientific literature. A significant fraction of the citations are from popular media as well. All of this only ends up distracting the reader from the scientific content. This is avoidable and can be easily rectified. Reviewer #2: The developed modified SIR model presents a simple yet powerful model of the dynamics of susceptible, infected and recovered proportions of the population in quarantine or active. Three useful scenarios were tested, and several intuitive or interesting dynamical behaviors were reported. Overall, with some improvements, this manuscript can become more accessible and impactful: - The availability of the model implementation codes (which platform/language?) would improve the impact by enabling the testing of new strategies for the relaxation of current social distancing measures outside the 3 tested scenarios by the readers. Additionally, use of tables to fully report the parameters that are kept constant in each scenario/plot are required for reproducibility of the results. - While the temporal plots and the choice of parameters were selected wisely to emphasize the key points of the paper and interesting dynamics, the complex interactions of the key variables of the model call for more rigorous analysis to fully capture the nonlinear dynamics. As hinted in the top left two panels of Figure 6, nonlinear dynamics are observed such as oscillatory and dampening dynamics. These call for additional rigorous analysis such as sensitivity analysis to key parameters of the system in each scenario, or parameter sweeps, phase portraits, or depicting the phenotypic spaces (e.g. key dynamical behaviors in the two-dimensional space of p and tau_B). - Minor edits/typo: o Typo in text line 128, PPV=0.95, 0.8 is not correct. (as also noted in Figure caption). o Although expected from the definition of Bayes formula, I think it would be beneficial to emphasize from the beginning that prevalence means different things in the viral and antibody tests. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Sepideh Dolatshahi [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Is "No test is better than a bad test''? Impact of diagnostic uncertainty in mass testing on the spread of COVID-19 PONE-D-20-13370R1 Dear Dr. Gray, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Previous minor Comment 1 (Typo in text line 128, PPV=0.95, and not 0.8) was acknowledged, although the text was incorrect not the figure. However, it was not fixed (now line 110). Other than this, the authors have addressed my comments. Minor comment: Maybe this is an editorial decision, but in my opinion the flow of the manuscript can benefit from combining Figures 1 and 2 (New Fig. 1 A,B) and combining Figures 3 and 4 (New Fig. 2A,B). ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Sepideh Dolatshahi |
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PONE-D-20-13370R1 Is “no test is better than a bad test”? Impact of diagnostic uncertainty in mass testing on the spread of COVID-19 Dear Dr. Gray: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jishnu Das Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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